TS:Pyaar deewana hota hai:Updated part 5 page 11, 27/02/2016

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi All
First time i am writing something...
do let me know if I can write more or should stop it here:)
Thanks
Pari


Character sketch:
Raman Balla:Rich by birth, Studied in US, currently in India, event management as profession
Ishita Iyer: Middle class family, became rich due to hard work, CEO of the year, great business woman
Both are not married...
Ishita has brother bala, raman has sister vandu..
Raman does not have parents.

Story is about how Raman fell in love with Ishita & make her fall in love with him...





Ishita was great business woman, tough to handle in business/profession, intelligent, but very soft hearted out side the profession & loves family most,
Though she has become rich because of her efforts, still she is very simple girl, who wares simple cloths, does not give value for materialistic things...

Raman, event manager, easy going guy, jolly person, have lot of friends, outside the business enjoys the life with friend, does not have bad habits, loves his sister a lot...


Ishita has a manager(Mihir) whose marriage is fixed with Mihika(who works with Raman in event management).

So they approached Raman for their engagement to marriage event management & he immediately agreed as he treats Mihika as his own sister...

Ishita is very close to Mihir as he is the right hand for her& supports very well in business & also he is cousin...


So she gets involved with all the arrangements, events as well...

Preparation for engagement is on full swing...Raman was supervising the arrangements...
Then suddenly he saw one lady coming in beautiful yet simple baby pink lehenga...He just lost his senses in her beuty..Raman thinks I have seen many modern, 0 figure girls, but nobody attracted me like this girl, she has such a nice expressive, innocent almond shapes eyes, long shining hair, very curvaneous body, very soft fair skin complexion, looking like natural beuty dol...



This is the prolog...will update the part soon...

part 1:page 3
part 2: page 4
Part 3:page 6
Part 4:page 8
part 5:page 11


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mayasun thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Pari,
Congrats on your first story. The character sketch looks interesting will wait for the story to unfold
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ys
do continue
d character sketch looks interesting
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Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Pari,

Congrats on your first story. The character sketch looks interesting will wait for the story to unfold


Thanks,
updated prolog
Edited by pammi108 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIshraru

ys
do continue
d character sketch looks interesting




Thanks,
updated prolog..
Edited by pammi108 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Seems nyc... Go ahead b post soon...
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Character sketch & prologue is interesting. The story seems different. Continue soon.
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congrats for your first story Pari 😊
interesting prologue
waiting to read further
update it soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start Pari...
Looking forward to read more 😳
Do update soon and PM me 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi Pari,
So Raman falls in love at first sight.


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