TS:Pyaar deewana hota hai:Updated part 5 page 11, 27/02/2016 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note:
Do I have to continue this or discontinue>?
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Just amazing I read all inone go...
Plz do pm me...
& plz continue it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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here is next part:
Raman didnt get sleep as he continuously thinking about how to make ishita love him...
Ishita also thought why she is thinking abt raman, se thinks this is not right, i should not fell for him in just one meeting, he is starnger...

Next day morning:
Raman went to ishitas house..
ishita was getting ready to office
Raman entered her house, she came down to have breakfast & was shocked to see Raman there..
Raman? How come you are here this early morning?
Hey Hotty, I wanted see my wifes face first, so i came.:)
Raman see this is becoming little too much, we are just starngers & whatever you are trying is not correct..
Raman: See ishita, you are not starnger to me, i know you are perfect for me & I am not going to stop whatever I am doing now..
Ishita says: do whatever you want, i am least bothered & she went to have breakfast
Raman also joined her..
Though Ishita didnt like it, she didnt say anything as she thinks it is not well manners...
Raman: Ishita I dont know what you thin about me, till date I never got attracted to any one, but once i saw you i have lost myself to you, i just love you so much!!
Ishita: What the hell Raman? What do you know about me to say I love you? How do u know that I dont have boy friend already? IWhy are you forcing your feelings on me?
Raman: I can clearly see that you are also attracted towards me...i am not forcing you dear, i am trying to make you understand your feelings & that I will continue untill you realize it & I am not going to stop it...
meanwhile they finished their breakfast..
Ishita stated to go to office ignoring Raman completely...
But when she took the car, Raman was there in drivers seat...I am at your service madam..
she shouted drivers name...
Darling, please dont shout on him, i asked him to enjoy the vacation for today, dont worry i am here at ur service..
She said fine take me to office...
They reach the office...she is about get down..
Raman: Where is my fees madam? I am not your regular driver to get salary, so I need a fees...
Ishita: how much?
Raman:10 should be enough for one round..
Ishita got confused & any ways gave 10 rs...
Raman laughed ather & asked do u think the great bhalla, interior dec profession, will become driver for 10 rs?
I said 10 kisses dear, 2 each on cheeks, 2 on eyes,4 on lips...
Ishita got furious & said, non sense, i am not giving anything to you, bye...she opened the door to go out..
raman: madam, i asked you politely, but if u r not ready then i know how to take it, he jerked her towards him...she landed directly on his chest..
He kissed her cheeks very hardly & softly on her eyes, then took her lips for passionate kiss before she even realize it...
She tried to push him, but he is just too much for her..she got furious that she didnt respond, he bite her lip very hard, she opened her mouth in pain, he without wasting a sec entered her mouth to relish her flavor...
He pulled back when he felt they both are loss of breath & then again pulled her for another kiss..he did it untill he finishes his fourth kiss & then he left her.. now you can go...let me know when i should come to pick u up & he winked at her..
she really got angry & raised her hand to slap him, but he was too fast to hold it & he kissed her again on her lips, this time too harshly...
If u try to act like this, you will see the punishment like this sweet heart..btw I dont mind, i just love to punish you..
Ishita got angry & said i will see you Mr balla, i will not leave you for this...
Who asked you leave me dear?
Ishita just went out of car & asked security to beat Raman...
Security pulled Raman outside & ishita just smirked..
Raman: this is not good ishita, now u will pay for it, with this he started beating security, each time he beat security he pulled ishita & started kissing everywhere in the public, on her neck,eyes,lips,bossom,stomach...He didnt leave any space...
fINALLY: THINK TWICE ISHI before taking any action on me, i will come back with this type of punishment only darling with that he kissed very hard on her bossom both the sides by holding her hand & chewed very hard from outside the cloth & left her... Call me once your work is done, otherwise again you will see the consequence, have a great day, bye & thanks for making my day sweet by giving me such a lovely kisses...:)
& he drove off by taking her car...
Ishita just stood there shocked...
Already many people gathered there to look what ishappening & all were commenting such an romantic guy etc...some try to take video as well..
Ishita just ran inside the office & when she saw the mirror she got shock of her life..raman made sure that she got lovebites all over the body & any one can make out that is love bite!!!


I think I started this as Os...but looks like this will become ss:)
Do comment & let me know if i should continue this or not?
Thanks...
Pari

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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Chap 1
Haye awesome
Raman in da very first meeting
Proposed her
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Chap 2
Wah my bold puttar
Direct honeymoon
Phr dance
Finally kiss
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Chap 3
Finally ishu man hi gaye...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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chap 4
Seriously kissing every where on road...
Shudnt he be possessive lover..

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Continue soon n pm me also dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey guys,
i am not getting enough responses for my updaes...may be story is not upto expectation...so i will discontinue it..thanks for the support till date...
Regards,
Pari
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Nice update
Pls don't discontinue it

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