TS:Pyaar deewana hota hai:Updated part 5 page 11, 27/02/2016 - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start...
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Very interesting
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Update soon Plz
Character sketchi is superb
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Hi All,
Thanks for the comments...I really dont know how to PM as of now...so please bare with me..


Here is the update:

Part 1:

Raman was so lost in her beuty that he just forgot surroundings...he forgot that he is staring at her openly...he forgot why he was here...
Ishita felt someones gaze on her...She tried to figure out the source, finally she saw that Raman is watching her...she thought he is of some flirty type guy who watches all beutiful girls & made disgusting face & went to meet Mihir& his parents

Same time Mihika came & saw that Raman was lost...She called Raman, no response...then She shook him..Raman came out of trance...Mihika asked him why you were lost?He is still in little trance about the sight & said I saw princess..mihika asked what? which princess?
Raman: My princess
Mihika(confused): Who?
Raman: My wouldbe wife
Mihika got shocked & she shook Raman with full force & asked what?
Then Raman finally come out of his trance & said: He saw a girl who is just superb pretty simple, innocent, just like his dream girl...Please help me to find details about her..
Mihika said Ok, definitely I will help my brother cum boss...

Other side Ishita went to meet Mihir...Mihir was ready for the engagement...
Mihir saw her & asked what happend, why your face is like this?
Ishita asked him why he invited road romeos here?
Mihir asked who?
Then Ishita explained how Raman was watching her openly & checking her out outside..
Mihir got angry & said I will see him& teach him a lesson...how dare he is to behave like that with My boss cum sister?
Both of them went out to see Raman to give hime peace of mind.

Ishita showed Raman & Raman immediately felt her presence..
He saw Ishita & showed her to Mihika & then again he was lost in her
Mihir & Ishita both saw that Raman is again checking her out, both of them got angry.

Both went near Raman& Mihika...
Mihir is about to scold Raman, then suddenly Raman took ishitas hand in his& said Hi beutiful!!
I have been waiting for you from so many years..where were you?
Ishita got confused, & asked who are you? Do you know me? Why you were waiting for me?

Raman said: Yes i know you, you were my dream girl with whom I wanted to get marry, I have been waiting to get my dream girl these years, & my luck I got it today...& he asked Will you marry me sweet heart?

Everyone Mihir, Mihika, Ishita got shocked. They could not say anything for some time, so again Raman asked Ishita to say Yes...This broke everyone's transe & Mihir pushed ishita back & he come forward to scold Ishita...He is about to scold Raman, but before that Raman slapped Mihir & asked: How dare you to touch my wouldbe wife? How dare you to push her? She is going to become mrs raman balla, & I am the great Raman balla...& you dare to touch her!!! Just stand at least 2 meters away from her...

Ishita & Mihika both got shocked...Mihika is about say that Mihir is the guy she is going to get married, but before that Ishita became furious & she just come forward & slapped Raman!!!

Now Mihika & Raman got shocked!!
Ishita: How dare you to do this Mr Raman kumar Balla? How dare you to touch my brother like Mihir?
Raman got shocked that Mihir is like her brother at the same time he is relieved & said Thank god!!!
Ishita got more furious & said: here I am scolding you for your action, instead of asking apologies, you are saying thank god!!?
I really dont know you, & you just come here & say that i am your dream girl & marry me? Do you think I am waiting here to the person like you to come here & propose me & I will get married? You flirty!!! Get lost!! Dont dare to touch me or stare at me...Get out from here right now!!1

Raman was cool & said: Miss I am ready to go out from here right now...but who will do the event organization? I came here as a friend cum brother to mihika to help her for event organizing as her engagement is today...
Now Mihir & Ishita got shocked!!
Raman continued: But if you still say me to go out, I will go out but you have to arrange one enough compatible event manager for my friend..also i am not going out alone...I would like to take my would be wife with me what say? By the way what is your name mam?

Ishita got angry & said: Ok, i didnt know you were the event manager for my brothers engagement, you dont look like event manager rather you look like one road romeo...anyways if you come here for event management then do that job properly...staring at girls is not your part of job...& dont call me your would be wife!! My name is ishita Iyer...Dont even think in your dreams that I am going to marry you:P

Raman said: waw!! So you are madrasan!!!!My madrasan!!! haye haye...sweet name ishita iyer naa ishita raman kumar balla looks better!! Btw I was not looking at girls...I was only looking at only one girl, that too mine, he smiles dreamily...Then he said, i will not dream that you will be getting married to me dont worry because it is not dream, it is the reality...

To be contd...Sorry guys I could not finish in one part...it might take 2-3 more parts so bare with me...Do comment on this part as I am new to write your comments are like motivating me, thank you...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very nice update...Raman is full flirty...haha
Update soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Raman ne sidhe propose kar dia 👏
Manna padega
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Very interesting dear
This update is amazing
Omg raman was so lost
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Nice update
Waiting for next chappy
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Nice one!!! Pls do pm me for next update!!!!

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