FAASLE- An Ishra TS. UPDATED Chapter 3-2 on 10/01/16 Pg 21

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Sunita

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Wooowww Veee...Great to see you back with another IshRa storyyy!!! 😳🤗

Great storyy and concept! I tooo loveee emotionalll storiess and this was definitely brilliant! I loveddd itt!😳

Cont sooon... Looking forward for the next part! I am sure that unknown guy would be Raman Bhalla! As you said, judai and milan! I doubt its him!😉

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Eyes-Wide-Shut

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

So happy to see you writing, the place you described in Shimla reminds me of the world Anurag Basu created in Barfi, which I love!

Thank God Anj sent me the link or I would have missed this as I don't watch the show and don't visit IF ever 😆

Can't wait for Puttar-Biwi confrontation in your snow covered and chilly Shimla!

Tips of including crocodile: Puttar-Biwi visit the zoo and see a croc in Shimla zoo, it reminds them of the YHM Cvs and how ridiculous they are, so they lose their shit and start laughing uncontrollably leaving the crocodile confused and bemused at these two individuals who are laughing seeing a crocodile.

I have ideas of including Surrogacy and bhoot etc in your story, i am suggesting all these things just so I can prove to Ekta Kapoor that I am a great writer, so she can hire me. Apparently ridiculousness in her employees is a trait most coveted.

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: sush_rddt
Awesome update...
Vee welcome back missed your writing super much...

U r just awesome... i mean the way you have portrayed it i wish cv's aapse seekhe. ..
Update soon

Hey thanks Sush. Will update today or tomorrow.

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: avni_19
Wooowww Veee...Great to see you back with another IshRa storyyy!!! 😳🤗
Great storyy and concept! I tooo loveee emotionalll storiess and this was definitely brilliant! I loveddd itt!😳

Cont sooon... Looking forward for the next part! I am sure that unknown guy would be Raman Bhalla! As you said, judai and milan! I doubt its him!😉

Welll, could be, let's see who it is 😆 😆

Thanks for reading Sunita

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: Eyes-Wide-Shut

So happy to see you writing, the place you described in Shimla reminds me of the world Anurag Basu created in Barfi, which I love!

Thank God Anj sent me the link or I would have missed this as I don't watch the show and don't visit IF ever 😆

Can't wait for Puttar-Biwi confrontation in your snow covered and chilly Shimla!

Tips of including crocodile: Puttar-Biwi visit the zoo and see a croc in Shimla zoo, it reminds them of the YHM Cvs and how ridiculous they are, so they lose their shit and start laughing uncontrollably leaving the crocodile confused and bemused at these two individuals who are laughing seeing a crocodile.

I have ideas of including Surrogacy and bhoot etc in your story, i am suggesting all these things just so I can prove to Ekta Kapoor that I am a great writer, so she can hire me. Apparently ridiculousness in her employees is a trait most coveted.

Aur mujhe itni khushi to see you here!!!!!

Thank you for the awesome tips on how to balajify this story. The croc idea is seriously worth considering. Maybe the croc can actually be the atma of a croc that is now Ishu's handbag? Hermes the croc?

On second thoughts I might keep croc n bhoots ( or croc bhoots pronounced the American way - croc boots see what I did there?) out of this three shot. Not enough space to give rein to my creativity, see.

Thanks again Doc. BTW I haven't seen barfi, I kept thinking of "ayoge jab tum o sajna angana phool khilenge" from Jab We Met.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

You write very well

I read few of your works,they were really nice

Liked this one too:)

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 9 years ago

#37

Omg this is what wanted to see on screen...
Brilliant please continue soon

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Mdwst
Omg this is what wanted to see on screen...
Brilliant please continue soon

Thanks for reading.

I was hanging out for some intensity, some tadap, some angst, but after three months of torture it appears Ishras confrontation will only last half an epi. Hence I'm pouring out my frustrations in print 😆

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Veeann

@Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: kingmanu
You write very well
I read few of your works,they were really nice
Liked this one too:)

Thank you for reading and liking 😃

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Aahaa...wat a start
Kitne door kitne paas...
Ishita in shimla and raman in Delhi...
bas di aapne gaadi solid speed main chalaai hai ab toh bas bhaga do.
eagerly waiting for next part
update soon