FAASLE- An Ishra TS. UPDATED Chapter 3-2 on 10/01/16 Pg 21

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Tuc_Mob
Great update, really heart touching.

Thank you so much

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: beckysharp
Ah Vee, my heart is breaking reading this! Though my mind is still rooting for a longer separation, my heart is desperate to see a quick reconciliation!

Though I don't know the song but the words were beautiful! And the snow perfectly captured the desolation that IshRa are currently experiencing!

Beautiful Vee, really! After a long time I am reading something that has touched my heart!

Love ya!!!

Aww Becks no heart break. I get where you are coming from - they are so wrong together, but they are more wrong apart.

I love that song. It's from some aishwarya rai movie, the new one. I heard it on the radio yesterday.

Lubs you 😳

Edited by Veeann - 9 years ago

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Just awesome...
Emotional update
Read all the parts in 1 go...
Continue really soon...
I can actually relate to both of them acting it out on the show...
Too good

Thank you so much for commenting, I always visualise them when I write and I try to keep true to the character sketch, so I am glad that you can relate.

BTW, I see you write too. I must catch one of your stories soon. Do you have an index?

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

tears in my eyes...can only say one word to describe this update..beautiful!!

happy new year vee...have an awesome one!!🤗

edited comments for second part on pg 8

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anisha960

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Beautifully written

An apt emotional outburst

Liked it too d core

Continue soon

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: ranisa123
it's really beautiful update dr, but took emotional to handle. i also want to cry out of my heart.their love for each other is the reason for their separation. because they don't think twice to do anything for other one if it hurts them.continue soon dr.

Thank you for reading. Sorry if it was too emotional.

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: kras
Simply awesome dear
Amazing update
Their emotions their guilt
U portrayed everything so perfectly
They understood that they both are at fault
Update soon

Thank you. Will try and update today.

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: meghnaghosh
First, a very happy new year to you.
N what a way to start the year!!
The emotions are so real that my heart goes out for Ishra.
However, it is very unfair of you to stop at this point..plz continue soon.

Happy New Year Meghna.

Thanks for your comments - sorry I stopped. Will try and update today 😃

Edited by Veeann - 9 years ago