FAASLE- An Ishra TS. UPDATED Chapter 3-2 on 10/01/16 Pg 21

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Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Part 2

Amazing update .

Loved their conversation and confrontation.

Raman has come to broke all the ties but he himself don't know about him that he can't live without her.

Loved her dialogue go raman GI we are toxic

But why did you let him go.

Please bring him back.

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snehaseshan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Beautiful n emotional update.. After reading this story I saw ur writing index & hve started reading ur old stories,completed one & other one ongoing.. Both r osm.. Kudos ''

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Divanru

@Divanru

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Lovely.

O poor raman he was waiting for her for past one hour in snowfall.

Though she herself has send him out but was fighting with herself for her deeds.

Waiting for next

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AhAnA390

@AhAnA390

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

wonderful writing
plzz continue soon 👏

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Originally posted by: fugitives123
tears in my eyes...can only say one word to describe this update..beautiful!!
happy new year vee...have an awesome one!!🤗

edited comments for second part on pg 8

🤗 Ann 😃

Thank you for your comments on both the parts. I only keep writing because of you guys. Happy happy new year (finally) 😆 😆 😆

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: anisha960
Beautifully written
An apt emotional outburst
Liked it too d core
Continue soon

Thank you so much Anisha 😃

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Sooo Brillianttt Beautiful and heavy on heart wala updatesss! How I wished if ths same update was shown in the serial...! Kheirrr!

This track n both KP n DT nailing it would be worth watching as well as heavy emotional on heart...!

I loveddd both the updatess!

Cont soonnn.. I hope to get a Pvt Msg for the future updates! Thanku in Advance!

Happyyy Happpyyy Newww Yearrr! Cheerrss!

Love, Sunita

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Svati12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Awesum ...

al 3 parts were fabulous..

👏

HAPPY NEW YEAR TO U N UR FAMILY

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: kaa1202
Superb one Vee..
I could literally imagine KP & DT in those scenes..
Kudos to your writing..
Wish u a happy new year..😊

Happy new year to you too my friend. And thank you for commenting 😃

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Veeann

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Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Divanru
Part 2
Amazing update .
Loved their conversation and confrontation.
Raman has come to broke all the ties but he himself don't know about him that he can't live without her.
Loved her dialogue go raman GI we are toxic
But why did you let him go.
Please bring him back.

Thank you for commenting on all the parts. So nice that people appreciate and take the time to comment.

Don't worry, they will get back 😳