OS || Fanah Ho Sabhi Dooriyan...|| Completed || Dec/20

Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hi dears...

Back to you with another OS. I believe that you won't ask me to continue it...though it is open ended like all my stories...😆
It is considerably a lengthy update and would seem very much boring 🤣 So do read after good preparation 😉

Love you...🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

Updated New OS...
Enjoy reading 🤗
Do Like and Comment...

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Roohachu

@Roohachu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

Loved it Diii.
U R GREAT.👏
For this I really wanna give you a tight hug.🤗
Love U

At first I was very angry at Raman. Then when I continued reading I feel sorry for him. Kehna zarrori hota hai kya pyaar mein?

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raksha

@cutieruhi

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

Oops gayu how can u write such freaking good yaar

Its fantastic

Loved it to the core

They love,their passion ,their intimacy

Everything was just too good

Raman was such a fool,seedha seedha keh nahi sakta tha

Go on insulting her

She was confused on her feelings

Took one and half year to talk

Such a fool they r

Lovely yaar

Awesome

Ps- yippee me first

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Rivka

@Rivka

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

Good os

Love hate mixture

Enjoyed reading

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

Sparkler

Posted: 9 years ago

Hi ...a wonderful OS. Initially I was mad at him but then slowly realized that he loves her , and this his way of showing his love..Ishu was a confused soul...but in the end realized that she does love him...he did hurt her badly, called her a maid... But was protective of her...I loved it...finally the two idiots confessed...there were some emotional parts in between..but..sorted out ...what I didn't like was Raman bringing a another woman ..to his bedroom...but this lead to resolve their feelings for one another... Loved it.