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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: s_kavya

Yaayy finally you updated Ankuuu 🤗

Wow i have to admit it was worth waiting for this update it was awesome... loved loved Toshiji ishita convo... loved how ishita explained there situation and Toshiji also understood that... i love this ishita she knows how to balance between every relationship i loved the wife ishita who was there with her husband stand by his decision and his self respect is more than anything for her... the loving and caring wife ... you portrayed ishita so beautifully here Anku 👍🏼

Do I need to say how much i loved ishra romance it was HOT ❤️ and there convo loved it .. i agree with what Raman suggested ishita... i am eager how this goes ahead ... this is so interesting that its difficult to wait for another part ... i will be waiting eagerly for next chapter please continue soon ... and please ishra romance dete rehna Anku 😆 😉

Awesome... Amazing... lovely update continue soon thanks for the PM Anku 🤗


KAVYAAA 🤗 I love you. You are so kind to me and my work, thanks for such a beautiful comment.

Glad you liked all the aspects of the update 😳 AND DON'T WORRY about the romance 😆 I can't write an update without that.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: QueSeraSera

Anku this is by far one of my favorite stories of IshRa for sure now.

I love this IshRa who are so very much in love, so expressive and so darn amazing.

This track had such potential to project a couple who while in a crisis, can still be madly in love and each other' rock

I love how you made your Toshi sensible 😛 she's being the kind of mom and MIL that you love as well as I love how Simi volunteered 😉😉 😆😆

I wanna see how you make the family value IshRa and not just as the money making machine or problem solvers but as part of the family who are indispensable

Love

Aani


Aani you saying that just touched me to no end 😳 I am glad its nice enough to be one of your favorites.

What do I say, I just like writing realistic relations and situations and IshRa should have been this in love and expressive.

I am taking the story layer by layer and that realization for them will come around soon. 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heya guys... 🤗Thanks for all the people who commented. And thanks to all those who liked. And then thanks to all those silent readers who increase the views but don't comment. Please do comment too... It's very encouraging and kicks more inspiration to write faster and better. So many haven't commented yet. I am waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Lovely update... Toshi being a mother though was broken from within seeing her family is breaking...I love Ishita's reply to her the most in this part...here I get to see complete portrayal of Ishita the wife of Raman Bhalla...not just some nagging dil, obeying her mil without having a say...this is how things should have been sorted in the track...Ishita being Ishita understands her husband so well ...so does Raman..this is the reason he stood by her side and didn't wait for minute before moving out from the house to save her from all the humiliations that were thrown at her without even fearing the outcomes of his actions...they are so different from outside but so alike from within...one respires for the other's worth and happiness and vice versa...thankfully Toshi here being so understanding and supporting them.

Loved the romance...

will wait for the parts where all the bhallas will know the worth of IshRa!

very well written😊


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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

Res

Anku when you're updating ydtkr? waiting for that


Some family issues have made it impossible for me to update often or write often. And that part needs a lot of my attention and time, I will update it when some stress sorts out. Sorry to keep you waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: -Anku-


Some family issues have made it impossible for me to update often or write often. And that part needs a lot of my attention and time, I will update it when some stress sorts out. Sorry to keep you waiting



perhaps I am a bit extra curious about the story😆... but that's fine as long as I know the more I wait the better I will read.. so take your time :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow...this is amazing
Just brilliant
Read all parts in a go...
Loved it
Very subtly you handled all the convos and situations
Too good
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: zeny_Nian

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Lovely update... Toshi being a mother though was broken from within seeing her family is breaking...I love Ishita's reply to her the most in this part...here I get to see complete portrayal of Ishita the wife of Raman Bhalla...not just some nagging dil, obeying her mil without having a say...this is how things should have been sorted in the track...Ishita being Ishita understands her husband so well ...so does Raman..this is the reason he stood by her side and didn't wait for minute before moving out from the house to save her from all the humiliations that were thrown at her without even fearing the outcomes of his actions...they are so different from outside but so alike from within...one respires for the other's worth and happiness and vice versa...thankfully Toshi here being so understanding and supporting them.

Loved the romance...

will wait for the parts where all the bhallas will know the worth of IshRa!

very well written😊



Exactly what you said. In that track, Ishita needed to be a wife more than a DIL. And more than anything she needed to be Ishita too.. who would fight and voice that she was wrongly blamed for things that weren't her damn fault at all. She took that insult on her self respect too, which I didn't like.

And wow, you penned them in one line but so aptly. They seem poles apart but they are the same - They fear losing, they fear abandonment and they can fight tooth and nail for each other and their family. Ishita voices her concerns mildly, Raman masks it with anger.. that's the only difference.

Thanks so very much for the encouragement and comments. Sorry for the delay in my stories. I anyway get less time to write, and lately been very occupied with a personal stress.. Someone in the family isn't keeping well.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 6
Hi Anku I am so very sorry for the late comment - I myself don't know what happened - anyway I am her now!!!

And wow what can I say - I am lost for words - it was an absolutely amazing update - had to read it twice as there was so much covered!!
So much emotion, so many thoughts and feelings - everyone's POVs captured!!

I really wish this is how it was done in the show - if only each person's thoughts were expressed this way!!!

To start with the conversation between Toshii and Ishita was unbelievable - Ishita was finally totally honest with her without being rude, and told her her exact feelings together with Raman's as well but in a very calming, soothing and non-judgemental way!!!
And it was so good to see that Toshiji listened and gave Ishita a chance to talk without firing back at her and getting hyper (like she does on the show).
She tells her that: ""Har baar mai bas jhagde ko shaant karne ki kosish karti rahi...kyunki aap nahi thi wahan aur aap mujhe ghar ki zimedari de kar gayi thi. Maine tab biwi hone ka nahi, ghar ki bahu hone ka farz nibhaya Mummy ji," she paused.
She continues: "
Determined, she said," Par ab mai Raman ka saath dungi, I will be a wife before being the daughter in law of the house. Aur sirf isliye nahi because I am his wife, par isliye kyunki iss baar baat Raman ki self-respect ki hai, jo mere liye sabse zyaada important hai," she declared firmly, with no trace of hesitation or doubt. "
This really told Toshiji everything and made her understand everything that Ishra were going through!!!!

Toshiji finally admits that what they did was correct:"" Mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitni khushi hai ki tu mere Raman ki biwi hai, tum dono ka pyar aur saath dekh kar mujhe bahut acha lagta hai, mujhe naaz hai tum dono pe," she smiled with genuine relief and happiness. "Aur tu sahi kehti hai Puttar. Tum dono ghar aane se bhi kya theek hoga, jab tak Romi aur Rinki apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hi na ho. Kab tak unhe bacha samajh kar maaf karte rahenge," she admitted, hugging Ishita. "

Then Raman and Toshiji's conversation - absolutely brilliantly handled!!!
She did not blame him for leaving and moving away - she asked him if he thought he had made the right decision and without a doubt or hesitation he said yes had!!!
She was happy with this and said now it was her turn to sort Romi and Rinki in her own way as it was her fault and the she had spoilt them and had hidden all their past misdeed/mistakes!!!!
I loved her final comment to him:"Then adoring her daughter in law said," You are very lucky Puttar."
Ordinarily the one to react with a jibe, he couldn't help but easily concede, and whispered, " I am indeed very lucky," looking at Ishita over Toshi's head, smiling at her softly...the smile he gave when he couldn't contain his love, when it was brimming to overflow."" Fantastic!!!

And finally Ishra - I so love these two they are so in-tune with each other that they do not even need to say anything but they understand each other and know how the other is feeling"!!!!!
The way she brings oil for him as she has observed that he has back pain!!!
The way he makes love to her she knows - this paragraph sums up the reason for his emotional state!:"He shook his head as a satisfied smile erupted on his face. What had he done to deserve her? He had questioned to himself so many a times? He had lost hope of finding love, lest finding a woman who would truly and literally be his better half. For someone who hadn't expected anything out of his second marriage he had come to expect and need love, respect and even trust from her, and he had received that in abundance. It was one thing just knowing that she was a perfect wife but a completely different thing when she so literally demonstrated it by standing up for him, protecting his dignity, guarding his self-respect as if it were hers...He finally knew how it felt to have a companion...a soulmate."
I loved it!!!

Ishita taking him on an Ice cream date (I wish she used to do this sort of thing on the show - it was always Raman taking the initiative - she needed to be a little bit more bold on the show - anyway the show is totally different now😭)
Coming back to the point - the date - love the honest and insightful talk that they have. He now also wants her to become more involved with his business as well - she asks why and he says he wants people to know who is behind his success and she asks him - is she the woman behind his success? He straight away realises what she means and her feelings about Shagun and the way he attributed his success to Shagun but now he admitted that he was wrong and that it was Ishita and the reason for it all!!

Then they talk about her career and how he would be proud if she did something for herself for a change!!!

Now I really cannot wait for the next update soon please - I know that it's not fair that I do not comment till late but expect you to update quickly but please yaar galati hogay kaan pakadliya hai meine ab to please maaf kardo aur update pleeeaaaseee!!!!!!🤗

Thank you so much for the pm!! Love you loads - dekho butter bohat expensive hai yanha!!!!!😉


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Posted: 9 years ago
I am sorry for the delay in updating my stories. I am extremely busy till the 29th of June. Post which I will get back to writing and shall post more often and more frequently Sorry to keep all of you waiting 😔 And thank you for all the support and comments 🤗

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