We've Only Just Begun - IshRa FF IMP Note Pg 50 - Page 31

Originally posted by: traveller_girl

Wow...this is amazing

Just brilliant

Read all parts in a go...

Loved it

Very subtly you handled all the convos and situations

Too good

Continue soon

Originally posted by: nafnaf

Part 6

Hi Anku I am so very sorry for the late comment - I myself don't know what happened - anyway I am her now!!!

And wow what can I say - I am lost for words - it was an absolutely amazing update - had to read it twice as there was so much covered!!

So much emotion, so many thoughts and feelings - everyone's POVs captured!!

I really wish this is how it was done in the show - if only each person's thoughts were expressed this way!!!

To start with the conversation between Toshii and Ishita was unbelievable - Ishita was finally totally honest with her without being rude, and told her her exact feelings together with Raman's as well but in a very calming, soothing and non-judgemental way!!!

And it was so good to see that Toshiji listened and gave Ishita a chance to talk without firing back at her and getting hyper (like she does on the show).

She tells her that: ""Har baar mai bas jhagde ko shaant karne ki kosish karti rahi...kyunki aap nahi thi wahan aur aap mujhe ghar ki zimedari de kar gayi thi. Maine tab biwi hone ka nahi, ghar ki bahu hone ka farz nibhaya Mummy ji," she paused.

She continues: "

Determined, she said," Par ab mai Raman ka saath dungi, I will be a wife before being the daughter in law of the house. Aur sirf isliye nahi because I am his wife, par isliye kyunki iss baar baat Raman ki self-respect ki hai, jo mere liye sabse zyaada important hai," she declared firmly, with no trace of hesitation or doubt. "

This really told Toshiji everything and made her understand everything that Ishra were going through!!!!

Toshiji finally admits that what they did was correct:"" Mai bata nahi sakti ki mujhe kitni khushi hai ki tu mere Raman ki biwi hai, tum dono ka pyar aur saath dekh kar mujhe bahut acha lagta hai, mujhe naaz hai tum dono pe," she smiled with genuine relief and happiness. "Aur tu sahi kehti hai Puttar. Tum dono ghar aane se bhi kya theek hoga, jab tak Romi aur Rinki apni galtiyon ka ehsaas hi na ho. Kab tak unhe bacha samajh kar maaf karte rahenge," she admitted, hugging Ishita. "

Then Raman and Toshiji's conversation - absolutely brilliantly handled!!!

She did not blame him for leaving and moving away - she asked him if he thought he had made the right decision and without a doubt or hesitation he said yes had!!!

She was happy with this and said now it was her turn to sort Romi and Rinki in her own way as it was her fault and the she had spoilt them and had hidden all their past misdeed/mistakes!!!!

I loved her final comment to him:"Then adoring her daughter in law said," You are very lucky Puttar."

Ordinarily the one to react with a jibe, he couldn't help but easily concede, and whispered, " I am indeed very lucky," looking at Ishita over Toshi's head, smiling at her softly...the smile he gave when he couldn't contain his love, when it was brimming to overflow."" Fantastic!!!

And finally Ishra - I so love these two they are so in-tune with each other that they do not even need to say anything but they understand each other and know how the other is feeling"!!!!!

The way she brings oil for him as she has observed that he has back pain!!!

The way he makes love to her she knows - this paragraph sums up the reason for his emotional state!:"He shook his head as a satisfied smile erupted on his face. What had he done to deserve her? He had questioned to himself so many a times? He had lost hope of finding love, lest finding a woman who would truly and literally be his better half. For someone who hadn't expected anything out of his second marriage he had come to expect and need love, respect and even trust from her, and he had received that in abundance. It was one thing just knowing that she was a perfect wife but a completely different thing when she so literally demonstrated it by standing up for him, protecting his dignity, guarding his self-respect as if it were hers...He finally knew how it felt to have a companion...a soulmate."

I loved it!!!

Ishita taking him on an Ice cream date (I wish she used to do this sort of thing on the show - it was always Raman taking the initiative - she needed to be a little bit more bold on the show - anyway the show is totally different now😭)

Coming back to the point - the date - love the honest and insightful talk that they have. He now also wants her to become more involved with his business as well - she asks why and he says he wants people to know who is behind his success and she asks him - is she the woman behind his success? He straight away realises what she means and her feelings about Shagun and the way he attributed his success to Shagun but now he admitted that he was wrong and that it was Ishita and the reason for it all!!

Then they talk about her career and how he would be proud if she did something for herself for a change!!!

Now I really cannot wait for the next update soon please - I know that it's not fair that I do not comment till late but expect you to update quickly but please yaar galati hogay kaan pakadliya hai meine ab to please maaf kardo aur update pleeeaaaseee!!!!!!🤗

Thank you so much for the pm!! Love you loads - dekho butter bohat expensive hai yanha!!!!!😉

Originally posted by: lalibhaskar

Amazing updates read all the parts

Beautiful concept and u have made more beautiful by ur writing

Loved the way u have portrayed raman and ishita here as normal couple who r hurt by the family, express their pain

And not simply forgive and forget

Loved simmi character stood up with ishra

And not to forget the kids wow awesome

Supporting their parents

Lastly toshi character she is aware of her kids

She knows who is right and who is wrong, who builds the family and who breaks it

Her love for ishita and trust is just amazing

One thing I liked the most is ishra have got time for themselves, to think about them, their kids where they r usually involved in solving the problems of family and siblings

Here they r understanding each other and also kids r getting full attention and love of their parents

Too good

Waiting for next