OS:Am I Right? Note on pg 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Nicely written, I like it. She's struggling and doing this out of love for her Raman... I really pity her

Originally posted by: ishra123

Well written. Perfectly portrayed ishita pov Thanks for pm

Originally posted by: ruhi_ishra

Nicely written
song was also gud

but even this OS cannot justify her actions
i liked yr writing but could not enjoy it becoz of ishita behaviouri past few days


thanks for pm 😊

Originally posted by: infinity00

Your writing style is good, it was short and effective. I liked your style but do not agree with her justifications ... Too much have happened to rectify ...but on screen we would see a nok Jhok " Mai toh kab say keh raha thaa tu bhoot hai Asal Mai but koi meri bat nahi maan raha hai, aur jugga jasoos toh tu hai hee , meri PEHLI BIWI ko bhi apnay jaisa Bana liya " ... 5 minute lollipop scene and " pal pal bhaday gee yeh mohabatain " and we would be like

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi

You have written it beautifully but could not connect to the story or justify her action by any means the CV have spoiled the whole track

Originally posted by: cutieruhi

Its lovely but no explanation can rectify her stupid plan

All sufferings a bloody plan.😭

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta

Amazing Os dear ...
U potray ishitas pov very well...
and the song selection was very
nice its perfectly suited her
current situation...
Thanks for ur pm!!

Originally posted by: Mdwst

Nicely written, I like it. She's struggling and doing this out of love for her Raman... I really pity her