OS:Am I Right? Note on pg 4

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

You have written it beautifully but could not connect to the story or justify her action by any means the CV have spoiled the whole track

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Its lovely but no explanation can rectify her stupid plan

All sufferings a bloody plan.😭

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--S.Divan--

@--S.Divan--

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Amazing Os dear ...
U potray ishitas pov very well...
and the song selection was very
nice its perfectly suited her
current situation...
Thanks for ur pm!!

Edited by riYa09guPta - 10 years ago

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Mdwst

@Mdwst

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Nicely written, I like it. She's struggling and doing this out of love for her Raman... I really pity her

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

It was Superb Dear...

It was so difficult for her to harm her beloved for thair own safety ...

& That part was very Right...Bala told about Ashok's behaviour with Raman...Ishita shoupd know this...This should happen in show too...

Very well written...

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traveller_girl

@traveller_girl

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Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Note:

Thank you so much to everyone for liking the writing in the os.

Extremely extremly sorry that you all could not connect with it.

Very sorry...

Guess I chose the wrong topic.

Really sorry again.

Would really just appreciate to the future readers,if you could just comment based on how my writing if you didnt like the topic I chose.

I take the blame for the not being able to make my readers connect through the story.

Hope you all forgive me and continue enjoying my future stories.

Sorry again.

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Maya

@mayasun

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Note:
Thank you so much to everyone for liking the writing in the os.

Extremely extremly sorry that you all could not connect with it.
Very sorry...

Guess I chose the wrong topic.
Really sorry again.

Would really just appreciate to the future readers,if you could just comment based on how my writing if you didnt like the topic I chose.

I take the blame for the not being able to make my readers connect through the story.

Hope you all forgive me and continue enjoying my future stories.
Sorry again.

The fault is not in your story but with the CV they have made such a mess of the story to fit one character.

You tried to give justification but lot of things which pointed to booth they have not given any clarification and they changed it last minute so there is a disconnect with the story.

Don't feel bad your writing is good but the disconnect you should blame it on CV. I even watched the earthquake sequence which I went gaga over when it aired but yesterday when I watched it it didn't even stir me a bit so the point I was trying to make it IshRa magic was alive for me when it aired but now it is only a romantic sequence between two actor/actress like you watch in movie IshRa magic is dead for me.

So I would put the blame solely on CV even with all these plans they are showing the one thing I cannot digest so far is her one smirk when she was alone with Raman that is the time they killed the IshRa magic for me.

Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago

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Sheema

@infinity00

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Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Why saying sorry? There is nothing wrong with your story telling. I would have loved to read how and what would Ishitia in your head ( not Ishita on our screens ) would have dealt with the situation.

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Greeshma

@FreedomOfSpeech

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Really nice try TG 😃 ... The way you explained ishu's pov was really nice.. Do write more and more 😊 . Yuck I don't like your sad face ... Keep smiling itna itnaaa saaara 🤗 ... And thanks for your update... I'm getting yhm info from your OS as I'm really unaware of yhm current track...

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kaa1202

@kaa1202

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: traveller_girl
Note:
Thank you so much to everyone for liking the writing in the os.

Extremely extremly sorry that you all could not connect with it.
Very sorry...

Guess I chose the wrong topic.
Really sorry again.

Would really just appreciate to the future readers,if you could just comment based on how my writing if you didnt like the topic I chose.

I take the blame for the not being able to make my readers connect through the story.

Hope you all forgive me and continue enjoying my future stories.
Sorry again.

Why are you saying sorry? Ur writing is good yaar.. In fact u really got in you to choose this tough subject & I really appreciate that.. Readers might feel disconnected to this story not coz of your writing or subject but for the bloody makers who ruined this show.. So cheer up & write more 👍🏼

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