Ishra FF : Darmiyaan (Chap 1-pg 4)

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DarmiyaanDarmiyaan

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As soon as Ishita walked inside the society, she saw Toshiji was sitting on the bench, her eyes were wet, face was pale, Ishita could guess she was crying, she walked to her.


Ishita: Toshi aunty.


Hearing Ishita's voice, she quickly wiped her tears and brought a smile on her face.


Toshiji: Arey puttar tu kab ayi?


Ishita took a sit next to her and looked into her eyes.


Toshiji: Aise kiya dekh rahi hai?


Ishita: Dekh rahi hoon ki kitni asani se aap apne dukh ko chupa rahi ho.


Toshiji: Pagal, mein raha ro rahi hoon.


Ishita: Par meine kab kaha ki aap ro rahi ho?


Toshiji looked at her and within a second her eyes moistened.


Ishita: Kyu khudko aise takleef de rahi ho aap!! Itne saal apne parivaar se apne bachho se durr kaise reh sakti ho aap? Aapne toh koi galti nehi kit hi phir kyu khudko kyu saza de rahe ho?


Toshiji: Tu nehi samjhegi Ishita. Mein janti hoon mere bachhe mujhse nafrat karte hai, aur karey bhi kyu na!! Jab mere bachho ko meri zaroorat thi tab toh mein unke paas tha hi nehi.


Ishita wiped her tears.


Ishita: You know what, ekdin aisa ayega jab apke bachhe apko dhundte hue yaha ayenge apni ma ke paas. Aur wo din bohot jald ayega.


Toshiji lovingly caressed her face and hugged her.


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Hey, say how's that?? Don't forget to comment.

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Intresting 😳
Continue soon 😃
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Very nice interesting and different story
Thanks for pm continue soon
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Wow👏
Such a nice prologue 😃
something really new😃
please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃
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Interesting concept Thanks for pm
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nice start
give update of ur other stories also
cont soon dear
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Interesting. Please continue and if possible then please add me to your PM list.
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Lovely
Interesting
Continue Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Its an amazing start but can you write it in the English dialogue because I am not good with Hindi.

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