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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: DivanIsh
RES
UNRES

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kya bolun main...baithi comment karne hu aur shabd nahi hain

aapko pata hai kumhaar mitti use karke ek moorti ya kuch bhi cheez sirf bana deta hai aur chod deta hai

uske baad shilpkaar usmein rang bharke uspe design banake use sajata hai...tab kahin jaake woh moortiyaan kaabile taareef hoti hain

tabhi log pasand karte hain kharidte hain apne gharon mein sajate hain

sab kuch ek shilpkaar ke haath mein hota hai

aap samajh hi gayi hongi main kya kehne ki koshish kar rahi hoon

the update was beautiful just like you😊

aaj jyada kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai

i love you

Ye lo aaj jaldi reply kar rahi hun tere cmnt pe...

Uparwale post me b tere liye reply aur neeche bhi...

Ab kya bolun? Tune to meri bolti band kar di...

Magar magar magar...

Ye mat bhoolna ke jab tak kumhaar mitti ko roop nahi deta tab tak shilpkaar apna kamal nahi dikha sakta...isliye kumhaar ko b utni hi credit jani chahye jitna ki shilpkaar ko...
Ab aage tum khud hi samajdaar ho

😉 😳

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#732

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

badhayi ho ji aapko

100 pages already

yeh story kam se kam 5 threads touch karegi i am sure

bas aise hi likhte jao main naachti jaungi

thnk u dear...

mai b yahi kahungi

Bas aise hi LIKHTE jao aur mai naachti jaaungi 😉

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#733

Originally posted by: nrn1486
Yay.. This time even I caught your update on the day you posted it
Yar, first of all, I have a confession.. I had followed Chaar Kadam closely.. very closely! And no matter how much I broke my head over it, I could never guess the twists and turns you used to come up with in that one.. That was one of the reasons I had so much fun reading that😆

So when I started with this one, I had decided that this time too, I'll just leave all the twists to you. But.. with each update on this one, I can't help the questions that pop up in my mind..

Is Raman's love for her true or will he break her heart again?😭
Why did Ishita marry Angad?😭😭
She seemed so much in love with Angad, then why does she still dream about Raman?😭😭😭

Uff, so many doubts😆
Please mila do dono ko jaldi se😳

Hi Neeti!
Co-incidentally ders anthr Niti who said d same... 😆

Nw u vl hv to wait for the suspense to finish...
and as u knw I will tk my own sweet tym to do dat 😳

*~THANKS PANKHURI~*

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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maanvir

@maanvir

Voyager

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Posted: 10 years ago

#734

Originally posted by: 9900
Nice update maanvir😊
I love this ishu😃
What ever it is she never falls just for raman's words.
She's awesome.
Please continue soon can't wait to read the next part😃

Hey pooja...
nyc to knw dat u lovd her character...often v gals fall too soon

thnx

*~THANKS PANKHURI~*

Edited by maanvir - 10 years ago

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#735

Originally posted by: rk654

Sukku...ma'm..maine.CK ke baad Soch ki investment band kar di😆..

humari writer ke devilish Dimaagi Kidde ke samne Kala HIT bhi phisaddi sabit hua.🤣

Sukku ke sath mam 😆
Yaar yeh kya combo banaya ...

N kala hit 🤣 ... Amazing sense of humour..

But FD me kuch toh dimag/soch rakhi hogi.
But sachi k dimaag me kya hai can't even think

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Suman

@_SUMAN_

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#736

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey dear! (Ur name?)

Thanks a lot dear...Dats a huge compliment...

Love u too😳

My name is Suman...

By the way I forgot to mention..

Those Shayaris are the best!

be it in Chaar kadam or here.. 😳

Edited by yhmfflover - 10 years ago

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sahooa

@sahooa

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#737

Sorry for d late comment was stuck wid studies

Cuming 2 d update such a nice update di

Raman nd his romantic dialogues r so dreamy

Eagerly waiting 2 know wat wll happen nxt😊😊😊

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#738

Sorry for late comment Di...

BSNL Broad band really sucks and hell irritating...😡

Now back to the update...what a update di 👏 its awesome...

Raman is all ready to manofy his ishita...

Loved the shayri u used...

Ab to alam ye hai ki ishita ko vandita me bhi Raman nazar aane laga h 😆 Raman really have deep effect on her...

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#739

Hiii Di...

Superb Update...

Par ek baat kahu...aap ne kaha tha... Ishita ke Khwabo me IshRa ke romance ka tadka lagne wala hai....
Par yanha to Jhatke par Jhatke lag rahe hai...

Raman Sucide karne jaa raha tha kya...
Ishita nahi aati & use kuch ho jata to...

Yeh muje bqhot achcha laga...

"Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole, tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega"

Haaye...kya waada kiya hai Raman ne...
Aaj tak Tumhare naam ki Chunri Suna...Sindur Suna...Chudiya Suna...Shringar Suna...Mangalsutra bhi suna...par yeh Tumhare naam ka Sehra to Pehli bar hi suna...

Par yeh sunkar to bahot achcha laga...

Humari Adhuri Kahani me Vidhya ne apne Husband se puchha tha na...Aaakhir kya hai tumhare pas mere naam ka...to ab Raman ne uss ka Jawab Ishita ko de diya...ki Tumhare naam ka Sehra hoga mere paas...Good Thaught Di...

Par muje sach me yeh samaj me nahi aata ...yeh Heroines ki problem kya hoti hai...
Pehle Hero ke Sapne dekhti hai...& Jab Hero unke paas hota hai...to Dur bhagti hai...
Humesha apne Dil ki baat sunni chahiye...pata nahi Ishita kab sunegi...

"Is waqt tumhe apna nahi sakti. Par ek waada karti hoon aaj tumse...jis din mere dil ne mujhe kaha ki tum hi mere Raman ho us din main nahi rokungi khud ko. Khud aage badhke apna lungi tumhe. Lekin tab tak tuplease mujhe force mat karna"

Yeh Din kab aayega...I hope jald hi aaye...mai IshRa ko dur & rote hue nahi dekh sakti...

& Yeah...Congratulations
For completing 100 pages...

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Pata nai Asma ne notice kiya yaa nahi...par maine jarur notice kiya...ki aap humari Commet ka last me reply karti hai..koi baat nahi...&jaise aap Humari comment ka wait karti hai...hum bhi aap ke reply & update ka wait karte hai...hume Special treatment dene ke liye...& Twins bulane ke liye Thanks...wo kya hai na...IshRa ke liye hum dono ke Khayal bahot milte julte hai...

& aap ne bataya nahi...iss story ko SS se FF bana diya to ab...humare pending...IKNMPka kya...

Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#740

Originally posted by: maanvir

Pankhuri mai tumhe thnx ke alawakuch aur nahi keh sakti...
Ishita ki tarah i too hv grown up learning that one shud nvr break promises
Nw I am bound by ur promise warna chilla chillake bolti ke hw much I owe u

smart me 😎😎😎...kya baandha hai aapko promise mein 😆

but on a serious note you don't have to thank me or say anything...i know ur mann ki baat and that's enough

Jo dialogue tumne mention usse tumhe kuch yad aya?
Maine kaha tha na ke mere kuch favourite dialogues hote hain har updt se...jab tak wo na likhun mere dil ko chain nahi ati...
Ye wahi dialogue hai jiski mai baat kar rahi thi...

haanji main padhte hi samajh gayi thi...intelligent student hoon 😳😳😳

Thanks and love u...

KYUNKI TU DHADKAN MAI DIL🤗

awww i am flattered...hugs 🤗🤗🤗...lets hug and make some ppl jealous 😉