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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#741

Originally posted by: maanvir

Ye lo aaj jaldi reply kar rahi hun tere cmnt pe...
Uparwale post me b tere liye reply aur neeche bhi...

hehhehhe...i want to sing yahan bhi hoga wahan bhi hoga...kyaaa...humara hi jalwa 😆

Ab kya bolun? Tune to meri bolti band kar di...

yeh aaj pehli baar hua warna aapko baaton mein harana namumkin hai

Magar magar magar...
Ye mat bhoolna ke jab tak kumhaar mitti ko roop nahi deta tab tak shilpkaar apna kamal nahi dikha sakta...isliye kumhaar ko b utni hi credit jani chahye jitna ki shilpkaar ko...
Ab aage tum khud hi samajdaar ho
😉 😳

lolll i will ignore your magar magar magar 😃

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#742

Originally posted by: maanvir

thnk u dear...

mai b yahi kahungi

Bas aise hi LIKHTE jao aur mai naachti jaaungi 😉

copy cat

arre nahi teacher is cheater 😆😆

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munira053

@munira053

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#743

CHAAR KADAM. Im never going to forget that tale. ❤️ N I again found this ff so late like another ff of yours. But I M GLAD better late then never I found this another 'unpredictable' fiction by you 😳 maanvir di, I just want you to know that you are one of my most favorite writers of all the 100's whose frictions I have ever read! ! 👏 the SUSPENSE in your writing!!!!!! My god keeps us on the edge of our seats man!!! I still remember the suspensen moreover "confusion" between Ajnabi & Raman 😆 how we wished for them to b "one"! But never mind, you made us fall for Raman & it eventually ended on RAMAN & ISHITA ❤️ after all we are here for these two beautiful names we love unconditionally 😉 😳 ❤️ (sorry thoda zyada emotional ho gayii)
Coming back to this new ummm not so new but another unpredictable story by you, the description of Angat itself made me think like 'chalo yaha se emotional torture nhi chahiye bhayi' but then I read a comment mentioning that this ff is by the writer of ChaarKadam 😲 so I had to continue reading it 😳 and yupp I found this awesome 👍🏼

For the last update I would say Im gonna continue reading till the end for these lines by Raman "Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole, tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega"

Hope that wasn't too long 😆 thankyou for reading. Waiting for updates from now on 😳

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asma18

@asma18

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#744

Hii Di 😊
Kaise ho aap. ..
main bilkul thik hoon. .
sorry late comment kiya na.
Par busy thi iss liye.
Ab update ki baat karte hai.

" Part 11 (b) : Tera Rasta Mai Chodun Naa"

superb update 👏
abhi bhi jari hai Mission
""ISHITA patao """""
Good good sahi jarahe ho.
Ishita ne khud se kiye hoye wade ko bhol
kar raman se kiye hoye wade ko ehmiyad di
aur uss ne bilkul thik kiya. .

Raman ka accident hote rehgaya agar
ishita nahin aati toh?
Par uss track driver ne kya naam diya ishra ko
roadside romeo Juliet!
😆
~~"Joke kehkar is haseen ishq ka mazaak na banao ae haseen"
~~"Deewana Nahi Aashiq Hoon Tera
Ishq Ke Siwa Kya Kaam Hai Mera " [/ COLOR ]

Oye hoye ye raman galib bante jaraha hai
Majnu kumar. ...par ishita hai ki maan ti nahin
Kya kaha ishita ne

[COLOR=magenta]"Is waqt tumhe apna nahi sakti. Par ek waada karti hoon aaj tumse...jis din mere dil ne mujhe kaha ki tum hi mere Raman ho us din main nahi rokungi khud ko. Khud aage badhke apna lungi tumhe. Lekin tab tak tuplease mujhe force mat karna"
Yaar jab se banda manaye jaraha hai.
Aur ladki hai ki maan ti nahin
Phir toh yahi baat hoyi. .

tujhko mane k liye kiye lakhon jatan phir bhi na mani tu

Par raman ne kya jawab diya usse. .
"Phir toh mera bhi ek waada hai tumse...
Kafan odhne se pehle tumhare naam ka sehra zaroor pehnunga...
Jab tak meri rooh tumhari rooh ko na choole,
tab tak ye dil dhadakna band nahi karega"
superb lines Di. ..

""TUM HARE NAAM KA SEHRA ZAROOR PEHNUNGA """
Haye ..In lines mein raman ne sab kuch kehdiya. ...

Ishita k liye toh ye lines banti hai

Mera dil bhi kitna pagal hai .
.ye pyar toh tumse karta hai samne jab tum aate ho
kuch bhi. ..kehne se darr ta. .
Oo raman
Oo mere raman raman
Oo mere raman

Par ek din toh haseen maan jaye gi. .
woh din bhi jald aaye ga.

CONGRATULATIONS
DI!!!!
TMKBSJNS k 100 pages complete hogaye .

maine aap ka reply pada. ...
maine bhi kai bar notice kiya humara comment sabse
last hota hai. ...aap jitna intezar karte ho. .hum bhi
intezar karte hai aap ke reply ka. ..lamba wala reply
k liye. . Itni izzat n awaz ishita aur hume twins kehne k liye. .
thnk you :)
prayu ne sahi kaha. ...IKNMP !!!!!!!
ka kya hoa. .I know aap busy ho. .
.par time mile toh.
LOVE YOU DI ❤️
Thnx for PM,
Aap ko pata aage kya kahongi. .
continue soon 😊

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#745

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Sukku ke sath mam 😆
Yaar yeh kya combo banaya ...

N kala hit 🤣 ... Amazing sense of humour..

But FD me kuch toh dimag/soch rakhi hogi.
But sachi k dimaag me kya hai can't even think

sukku ma'm,,

FD to nahi but ideas saving ki hui hai TINY LOCKER me..😉..

mind readers thodi na hai fiction readers.hai😆

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#746

Originally posted by: rk654

sukku ma'm,,
FD to nahi but ideas saving ki hui hai TINY LOCKER me..😉..
mind readers thodi na hai fiction readers.hai😆

Stop calling me Mam... Its so annoying...
And hey hey... New Mr Goldie... Congrats...

N saving k brain ka interest you can use 😉

Plus fiction readers ko mind reader banna padhta hai to read author's mind...

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#747

Originally posted by: sukanksha

Stop calling me Mam... Its so annoying...
And hey hey... New Mr Goldie... Congrats...

N saving k brain ka interest you can use 😉

Plus fiction readers ko mind reader banna padhta hai to read author's mind...

thank you so much sukku...

you know nna mool se zyada Byaaz(interest) pyaara hota hai😉..

we can guess but can't read author mind na

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#748

Originally posted by: rk654

thank you so much sukku...
you know nna mool se zyada Byaaz(interest) pyaara hota hai😉..

we canguess but can't read author mind na

So you are just saving ur byaaz...
Us byaaz se kya pyaaz (onion) khareedoge...

Point hai boss... We can guess but cant read an author's mind

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#749

Originally posted by: sukanksha

So you are just saving ur byaaz...
Us byaaz se kya pyaaz (onion) khareedoge...

Point hai boss... We can guess but cant read an author's mind

kya Onion..no not bcoz i hate it yaar😡...

kah na seving hai na interest hai...

khali Dimaag shaitaan ka ghar hai...😉..

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#750

Originally posted by: rk654

kya Onion..no not bcoz i hate it yaar😡...
kah na seving hai na interest hai...
khali Dimaag shaitaan ka ghar hai...😉..

Omg u cant hate onion
1. It is key ingredient of every dish.
2. U know it helps in digestion.. Blood purification... Even blood dilution...

Lol... Don't u think u r underestimating yourself a lot... Or being modest???