Originally posted by: DivanIsh
late comment for the first time...all because of you...late permission jo di aur main thehri good student
bina permission ke koi kaam nahi karti siway aapko chedne ke 😆 uske liye i dont need permission
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coming to update
is baar i have to comment smartly 😉
what do i say about the thought process of urs...you call them keede but i would rename them as jaadui keede
aapke dimag mein kya kya aata hai yaar di...aur aata aise hai ki bas saamne waala flat totally...i am sure jeeju ko bhi apni baaton se hi phasa liya hoga aapne
brilliantly planned update...each moment each happening was so well connected what do i say...you tell me that i take a notice of small things but what do you do...har ek din jo story mein ek progression hai us har ek din ko aapne kitne ache se present kiya hai and at the same time not stretching it unnecessarily
secondly the song 👏 batao movie mein kya tha aapne kis tarah use kiya...sachi kamaal hi kar diya...i swear mere dimaag mein yeh song kabhi na aata if i was writing anything similar but then as i say out of the world 😛😛😛
thirdly some lines were just beautiful
"Jab cycle ki malkin ko apne dil me jagah de di hai, to dil ki malkin ko,apni cycle ki jagah dena kounsi badi baat hai?"
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batao kounsi ladki yeh sunke nahi pighlegi...it just stole my heart 😳😳
an excellently planned update
but i see you didnt continue already 😡😡😡 jaldi karo...i m missing the special ending and just wondering is baar kaisi hogi
hope the comment justifies what i feel 😊😊😊
Shiv Shakti
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