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Mannu di i read the update and i am speechles and there are two reasons for it that i am going to share below
1) i know you have not written it in one go...i dont know about others but i lose my efficiency if i dont write in one go...i mean i can surely edit and decorate it later but i need to write the basic plot in one go...you have written it in bits and pieces and yet you could maintain that perfect continuity and that essence throughout the update...hats off to you...it was a brilliant update as always and i adore it
2) the teaser somehow made me think you were going to use the second version of the song which was the passionate romance kind...but you proved me wrong like always and chose to use this first version which was more of gloomy and sad and yet it was lovely...the update wasn't ideally romantic but i found love in each word
i am not going to comment if Raman's feelings are genuine or not because aap thehri twist or better called shocks ki maharathi par khair aage jo bhi ho i love this update bas
his proposal and her refusal both were beyond perfectness
the ending broke my heart for the second time today because it is really tough to repent for something you were proud of earlier
"Kash ke maine kabhi wo sapna nahi dekha hotha. Kash ke tum kabhi mere zindagi me na aye hothe. Kash ke maine kabhi is baat par faqr na kiya hotha ke...
Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"
the song like always fitted in so well...i actually want to ask you this whether you find a song first and then plan an update because each song you use matches your updates so perfectly that it looks it has been written just for you...you really have a good taste when it comes to songs
Mannu di this was lovely and it left me with a concern
now that i know you are going to give Sunday to Sunday updates...god knows how will i kill this week...just cannot wait for the next update
this was excellent and i want next update ASAP
love you 😳
Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago
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