Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 64

Tushi toh Brillant Ho Mannu Ji...You really panned down KHATARNAAK NICELY...👏...you fitted the song so well..you & pankhudi are so brillant in doing that...awesome update ..liked it so much...

this was awesome
loved it

Wonderful update 😊

You seem to be very hooked up with a busy schedule; no wonder you're not updating regularly! Do update soon Manvir 😃 😳

Hey manu Di 😊
Kaise ho aap.
par aap ko bahut miss kiya. ..
...ab update ki baat karte hai. ..

PART _10b ~ tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lo "
Brilliant update 👏 👏 👏
Di dil khush kar ditta. ...
And the song ...One of my favourite song.

Dil ne ye kaha hai dil se
Mohabbat hogayi hai tumse
Mere jaan mere dilbhar
Mera eitbaar kar lo
Jitna beqarar hun main
Khud ko beqarar kar lo
Meri dhadkanon ko samjho
Tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lo
Tum jo kehdo to
Chaand taaron ko tod laaunga mai
In hawaon ko
In ghataon ko mod laaunga mai
Kaisa manzar hai
Meri ankhon me
Kaisa ehsaas hai
Paas dariya hai
Door sehra hai
Phir bhi kya pyaas hai
Kadmon me jahan ye rakh doon
Mujhse ankhein chaar kar lo
Meri yaadon me
Meri khwabon me
Roz aate ho tum
Is tarah bhala
Meri jaan mujhe
Kyun sataate ho tum
Teri baahon se
Teri raahon se
Yun najaunga mai
Yeh irada hai
Mera waada hai
Laut aaunga mai

Duniya se tumhe chura loon
Thoda intezar kar lo
Jitna beqarar hoon mai
Khud ko beqarar kar lo
Meri dhadkanon ko samjho
Tum bhi mujhse pyar kar lo

Kaise aankhe char karlu
Kaise aitbar karlu
Apnee dhadkano ko kaise
Itna bekarar karlu
Kaise tujhko dil mai dedu
Kaise tujhse pyar karlu

Awe! Di kitna brilliantly aapne ne
in lines ko use karte hoe
aur behad hi khubsorati se likha hai ..
main bas kho gayi thi update mein. .
jaisa jaisa update padh rahi thi mere chehre
ki badh ti hi jarahi thi. ..par end mein aakar smile
phiki padh gayi. .

Raman ne kya kaha. .
We need to talk about """US"" Haye
..jis tarha se raman ne apne feelings ishita ko bataraha tha
ki. ..jab woh usse pehli bar campus mein dekha. .
aur uss se durr jaraha tha kyun k woh. .
""APNI ISHITA KO """ ko dhoka dena nahin chahata tha.
Jis ka 10 SAAL intezar kiya. ...awe!
Abhi Bhi woh ishita se pyar karta hai. ..
yeee yuppie raman ko sab yaad hai. .

Par yaar.ek galti ki ...shagun k paas Jane ki zarorat kya thi. ..
iss ki wajhe se ishita kitni hurt hoyi hai. ..
par uss k baad jo hoa. .pehle nahin par is bar expect kiya aur .

Clap...Clap...Clap...
😲
yaar phir se khaya thappad. ..par galti bhi ussi ki thi
ishita ko bhola ne k liye shagun ka Sahara liya. .veryy bas
pata nahin aage aur kitne thappad khaye ga. ... 😕
Loved the way raman ishita ko batane ki kushish karraha tha
ki woh usse ab bhi utna hi pyar karta hai jitna 10 saal pehle karta tha.

Par yaar ishita ne raman ka praposal. .refuse kardiya
😭 I understand ishita apni jage sahi hai. ..phir ek bar heartbreak. .na re baba
Par raman bhi toh RKB hai Itni aaisa ni se. .madrasan ko
chode ga nahin. Mana lega apni ..ruthi hoyi ishita ko 😉

Ishita ne aaisa kyun kaha
""Kash ke maine kabhi wo sapna nahi dekha hotha. Kash ke tum kabhi mere zindagi me na aye hothe. Kash ke maine kabhi is baat par faqr na kiya hotha ke...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"

ishita ne Asisa kyun kaha ??waise
Film dhadkan ka dialogue hai na. .

"""ANGLI( ishita) TUM MUJHE BHOL JAO YE HO NAHIN
SAKTA AUR MEIN TUMHE BHOL JAO YE MAIN HONE
NAHIN DONGA """" 🤣
raman ab""ishita patao mission"" par hai. .😉
dekhte hai kis tarha mana ta hai. .
di! Ab koi khatarnak twist mat lana .plzz

Di! Mujhe ye song padh kar ..
ek doubt aaya hai. ...aapko samjh aaraha hoga main kya kehne wali hon
kahin raman ki halat bhi.. .suneil shetty ki tarha toh
nahin hogi na 😲 ..ishita ki shaadi k baad raman aaye ga.
Kyun ki jitna bhi abhi tak ye story
padhi hai. .sab ussi ki taraf ishara karrahi hai. .
😲 😕

Ab ye toh aap hi bata sakti hai. Ki aage kya hoga.
Hum bas intezar kar sakte hai...ap k dimag k kheede ka
kuch bharosa nahin kab kya karde. ..

DI!
""THANK YOU SO MUCH ""
itne achche update k liye. ..aap the phir bhi update kiya.
hum jis update ka intezar karrahe the. .
woh aapne de diya... Uss k liye aap ko a biggg huggg .. 🤗
love you di,
thnkx for the PM,
aap ko toh pata hai hum next part ka intezar karrahe hai. .
toh sonch kya rahe ho. .jald update ki jiye. . 😊

Originally posted by: DivanIsh

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Mannu di i read the update and i am speechles and there are two reasons for it that i am going to share below

1) i know you have not written it in one go...i dont know about others but i lose my efficiency if i dont write in one go...i mean i can surely edit and decorate it later but i need to write the basic plot in one go...you have written it in bits and pieces and yet you could maintain that perfect continuity and that essence throughout the update...hats off to you...it was a brilliant update as always and i adore it

2) the teaser somehow made me think you were going to use the second version of the song which was the passionate romance kind...but you proved me wrong like always and chose to use this first version which was more of gloomy and sad and yet it was lovely...the update wasn't ideally romantic but i found love in each word

i am not going to comment if Raman's feelings are genuine or not because aap thehri twist or better called shocks ki maharathi par khair aage jo bhi ho i love this update bas

his proposal and her refusal both were beyond perfectness

the ending broke my heart for the second time today because it is really tough to repent for something you were proud of earlier

"Kash ke maine kabhi wo sapna nahi dekha hotha. Kash ke tum kabhi mere zindagi me na aye hothe. Kash ke maine kabhi is baat par faqr na kiya hotha ke...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake"

the song like always fitted in so well...i actually want to ask you this whether you find a song first and then plan an update because each song you use matches your updates so perfectly that it looks it has been written just for you...you really have a good taste when it comes to songs

Mannu di this was lovely and it left me with a concern

now that i know you are going to give Sunday to Sunday updates...god knows how will i kill this week...just cannot wait for the next update

this was excellent and i want next update ASAP

love you 😳

Originally posted by: ..TeriDeewani..

Di..srry again
I read all the parts
All were simply amazing
Part 8a was dreamy..Part 8b made me cry..
I hv actually becum a digaaj.. 😆
It's okk..v can undrstnd weekly do..
Parts 9 was fabulous..part 10a was short wish u cud hv made it bid..
Bt none the less is it was mindblowing..
Updt soon

Originally posted by: prathyu2695

😭 vryy sad... raman sach mein itna pyar kartha hai kya? ya... its a drama again... butt lovelyyy song👏 superbb updatee👏

Originally posted by: Badtameez_Dil_1

Why did you separate IshRa 😭

Originally posted by: Anum_says

Fabulous ..

Hamare intezar ka phal.

Seriously loved it ..

beautifully written..

This Part 'Teri baahon se

Teri raahon se

Yun najaunga mai

Yeh irada hai

Mera waada hai

Laut aaunga mai'

Loved it ...positive hopes..

Really love that scene his dialogues..

And this 'Kaise aankhe char karlu

Kaise aitbar karlu

Apnee dhadkano ko kaise

Itna bekarar karlu

Kaise tujhko dil mai dedu

Kaise tujhse pyar karlu'

I can understand her feelings..

She is scared of another heart break..

This update was totally fantastic mano

Can't wait to read more.

Update soon.