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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#581

Originally posted by: sukanksha

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Mai toh Angad ko bhool hi gayi
Uski entry b toh school me Ho Sakti hai na.
Aiwe toh Ni tumhe kehti twist ko turn dene wali

Heee i dont know y but i kind off have afeeling that he studyes in same school and may be in raman s class 😉

And he might have a crush on ishu 😉 varna seperation kaise hoga 😆

And raman ka pov bhi tho dena hai na vo next part mai hoga shayad 😉

And not to forget the promise of giving a romantic update 😉

Angath ki entry zaroor hogi but if he tell ishu he love s her or not i dont know ho bhi saktha hai nahi bhi kyu ki ishu is right now not in correct frame of mind 😉😆

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#582

haaye you called me diggaj 😳

teaser was tooo teasing...cannot wait for the update

the song is one of my favs tum bhi mujhse pyaar kar lo 😊😊😊 i toh already love you ab aur kitna pyaar karun 😉

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Aarohi Talegoankar

@Albeli26

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#583

Maanvir mam I am present here

Are you remember me?

Woah what I am thinking u can forgot me as main tere khwaabon se shaayad na jaa sakoon.

Accha ab enough to bad bad and back to work. Sabse pehle toh dono kaan pakad ke sorry that I didn't commented on all these parts but I guess u are aware with the reason na? But ruhi promise ab se no delays.

U know these few updas are awesome di, I already considered u a fabulous writer In CK thread giving u same designation here.

These all updates were heart touching Didi. Loved them. Ishita excitement, her thoughts everything was perfect di. Loved them really

What???? Raman kissing shagun?? Sochke hi ajeeb lagta hai. But aapke case main toh ajeeb word bhi use karna galat hai. As I know how much khurapaati u are and obvio ur dimaag ke keede

Poor ishu. " sapna mera toota...tpota hai, mujhse mera saaya kyon rootha hai " I don't think ki yahan Aur kuch needed hai

But I loved simmi and ishu bonding here. Simmi is matured beyond her age na. Le...kaahe ki mature...I forgot she is repeater but I loved her

Teaser is interesting di. Aap humesha humko tease karne ko ready hote ho. Now no more teasing. Aaj update kar do and made me happy. I hope u will take care Jiju fan club members.

Meet u soon in next part

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#584

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Heee i dont know y but i kind off have afeeling that he studyes in same school and may be in raman s class😉

And he might have a crush on ishu😉varna seperation kaise hoga😆

And raman ka pov bhi tho dena hai na vo next part mai hoga shayad😉

And not to forget the promise of giving a romantic update😉

Angath ki entry zaroor hogi but if he tell ishu he love s her or not i dont know ho bhi saktha hai nahi bhi kyu ki ishu is right now not in correct frame of mind😉😆

You are the guess queen u know that nah

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1023427

Hibernated

Posted: 10 years ago

#585

awesome and fab dear continue soon.

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Deep

@rk654

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#586

ishita triedhaed to act normal in front of simmi..but usne to pakad hi liya..in few days unka relation kitna deep and strong ho gaya ke she can read her mind thru her eyes.😉..simmi stole the show today..to much caring😆...main iss chot ki baat nahi kar rahi...after then..tum iss dar se soi nahi ke bhai fir tumahre khwabon me naa ajaye..those lines were touched the heart...

another brillant update mannu👏..👏..

tysm for the pm

Edited by rk654 - 10 years ago

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Pankhuri

@DivanIsh

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#587

RES

UNRES for incomplete part

ok i always write my comments after you are done with the complete update but this time i am here much before because i loved it that much

this update had some really beautiful lines and i totally agree with them

When we were kids, we were eager to grow up. But when we grow up we realise wounded knees were better than broken hearts.

Quite surprisingly today I had both: a wounded knee and a broken heart.

i know this time when she is expecting it to be a dream it is not a dream...it is him and i somehow realize what is coming up

i really hope you prove me right 😳 cannot wait for it...plz plz plz plz plz continue ASAP...really need to read this ASAP...so restless i am as if it is my own story 😆

lo as soon as i commented you completed 10 A leaving me hanging in my dreamy thoughts...so not fair

khair i know you are compensating for it in 10B...you better do warna 😡

waiting waiting waiting

Edited by DivanIsh - 10 years ago