Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread)

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maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#561

Originally posted by: asma18
Hii di 😊 ...

~ Sapna Mera Toota Toota~

emotional update di...
HAPPY iss liye ki raman ko
ko ishita yaad hai ..aur akhir kar
pata toh chala ki. ...
chashmish , miss. Sanskari ..
koi aur
Nahin uss ki ishita hai jo woh usse
life partner maan ta tha. ...&
SAD iss liye hoon ki,
...ishita ka dil tutt gaya yaar. ...jis ko dekhne k liye
pray kiya karti thi...jis ko khwaab mein dekhne
k liye jald soti thi. ..jis raman se baat karti thi.
Aaj wahi ishita. .raman ko khwaab mein na dekh
paye iss liye raat bbhar so nahi payi. ..
aur usse khwab mein bhi nahin dekhna chahti .
phir bhi raman uss k khwabon se jaana sa ka'''

Simmi, jab Bach pan ki simmi ko dekha tha.
.toh laga tha ki..ishita simmi ki nahin bane gi. .
Par mein galt thi ..iss simmi ko dekh kar. ..jo ishita ko itne
achchese samjh ti hai. ..aur uss k liye. .apne bhai se
tak fight kiya. .ki uss ne ishita k sath jo kiya
woh galat tha. ...nanand bhabhi jodi mast hai..
wish simmi jaisi, bahen, friend har kisi ko mile jo apne friend
k liye kisi se bhi fight kare. ...

Di! Aapne simmi aur toshiji k character ko bahut hi
achche se dikhaya. ...hai

Ye song jo aapne select kiya hai. .
maine abhi tak ye song nahin sona tha .pehli baar iss k lyrics
padhi phir song suna. ..apne ne bahut hi umda tarikhe se
iss lines ko convert kiya hai 👏 👏 👏

Hope next update mein raman ka POV hoga na. .ab ye
aap hi bata sakti hai ho.
Next update ka intezar hai. ..
😊

Hey Asma!

Thnx yaar...dil khush kar ditta apne cmnt se...

Lots of love

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maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#562

Hi All!

Thanks for the amazing response on Part 9.😳

Still in the queue waiting for the responses of some diggajs like Roshnee, Pankhu, Nehu, Hersheys, Deep, Sush, Rufana and others😒

Anyways I am here to leave the Teasing Teaser...

But before that let me clarify one thing...

Most of u hv asked for Raman's POV...

Unlike Char Kadam this FF (noticed the chng nw?😉) is going to be from one person's POV only which is Ishita.

However u will get to know about Raman's thoughts through Ishita...

I hope that's fine!😃

Now time for the teasing teaser...

Part 10: Tum Bhi Mujhse Pyar Karlo

(Translation: Love me too/You too fall in love with me)

Red Alert! Danger ahead!

Travel at your own risk...

Let the prediction mode be on...

Let the guesses keep coming😉

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Anum_says

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Posted: 10 years ago

#563

Originally posted by: maanvir

tumne simmi ko galat samjahne ki jurrat kaise ki?😡😉😆

Thnx Anum!

Bas ghalti insanoun se he hti h na 😆

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#564

Aysa kya danger ho saktha hai 😉

Raman ke liye sabsey bada danger is angath 😉

It is something like

Thum ne mari entry aur dil mai baji ghanthi 😉

If not from ishu pov she is feeling sad that y he dosent love her 😉

Raman ka next hoga pakka 😆 i feel so

May be raman comes to talk to ishu and sees angath and ishu to gether 😆

Edited by 12Singmeenu - 10 years ago

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asma18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#565

Originally posted by: maanvir

Thnx prayo!

Title chng se mera matlab main title tha...sub-title nahi...
Ab wapas thread ka subject check karo aur bolo kya chng notice ki tumne

Sapna Mera Toota Toota ~
Iss ka matlab ishita ab tak raman se sirf khwaab mein mila karti thi. .
par ab usse haqeeqat mein mile gi uss ka sapna haqeeqat bane ga. Ishra ek dusre se
baat karenge hai na. .. 😉

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Anum_says

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Posted: 10 years ago

#566

Originally posted by: maanvir

Part 10: Tum Bhi Mujhse Pyar Karlo

(Translation: Love me too/You too fall in love with me)

Red Alert! Danger ahead!
Travel at your own risk...

Let the prediction mode be on...
Let the guesses keep coming😉

🤔🥱😲

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maanvir

@maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#567

Originally posted by: asma18

Sapna Mera Toota Toota ~
Iss ka matlab ishita ab tak raman se sirf khwaab mein mila karti thi. .
par ab usse haqeeqat mein mile gi uss ka sapna haqeeqat bane ga. Ishra ek dusre se
baat karenge hai na. .. 😉

Nahi yaar...main title dekho...I mean thread ka name...

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maanvir

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Posted: 10 years ago

#568

Originally posted by: Anum_says

🤔🥱😲

Kya hogaya? Bolti band?😉

Kuch to bol

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9900

@9900

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Posted: 10 years ago

#569

Omg such a doubtful teaser😲

Can't even imagine what would happen.

I think they'll meet face to face but what will happen is really a doubt.

Seriously maanvir your really so unpredictable so I won't guess but will wait eagerly for your update.

So please update soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

And thank you for the translation 😃

Edited by 9900 - 10 years ago

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Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 10 years ago

#570

Originally posted by: maanvir

Well said...more on this in the next updt...

About the scenarios...ummm...let me keep it a secret fr nw...
I am really planning to flee away aftr cmpltng this story...
I dnt thnk u guys will let me live

PS: Once again I knew dis was cmng frm u😆

Is this a retrospective saga, Ishita is just reminiscing how her life got here. Raman is completely gone from her life it's just the dreams where he exists, more because of her long time habit than any residual affection for him, hence the title? Like she doesn't think the dreams to be consequential any more. Is this gonna go that route?

P.S. Did you see this comment coming too?

Edited by Wings-of-Fire - 10 years ago