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Posted: 10 years ago

#531

Wonderful update 😊

I love ishu's way of facing problems.

She's really a brave girl. Surely she's hurt than what she shows herself but obviously she's awesome and strong.

At one time her dream is shattered and she's broken and then again tries to convince that it's not raman's fault for her dream to be shattered.

I really love this simmi. She's definitely a lovely child. She defending ishu is just superb.

But all what I think is that as you said in the last update that there will be ishra romance in the future updates I feel ishu will be more shattered after it 😕

Actually I really love your story maanvir. I'm totally in love with it.

It's really sad and emotional yet I love it a lot. I really love to read emotional books too which is my favourite. But here the thing is I need to wait for your update😆. But you really did update fast. Thank you for it.

Thank you so much for the PM

please continue soon can't wait to read the next part 😃

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Pasoori

@ChanChanMan

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#532

What can I say????

You're Too Good...!!

Feel like crying 😭

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yaku

@yakutamt

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Posted: 10 years ago

#533

Please aaj se mere khwabon me mat ana. Kyunki mai tumhe bhool nahi paaungi agar...

Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake'

Wow👏👏

U write superb yar...u hv got me hooked up...being a die hard romantic 😊

Awaiting raman thought process on knowing him meeting her...😳

In short waiting for part 10 update soon pls...

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#534

Beautiful updatee... I loved Ishita and Simmi's conversation. Indeed, Simmi is just like a sister to her..

Loved that reality check she gave to Raman...Good Lord, I just hope ab Raman don't hurt Ishita more..or maybe say sorry..par thats nt there in his dictionary na!

Cont soon.. I am loving it...!

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#535

Originally posted by: maanvir

I was just pulling ur leg😆

Or Mai emotional Ho gayi 😆

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Anum_says

@Anum_says

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#536

Awww.Maine simmi ko kitna ghalat samajh rahi thi

She is very nice person..

Chalo ek baat to pata chali k Raman ko Ishita yaad hai..

Fantabulous update maano ...👏

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#537

I was going to complain that you didn't reply to my comment of chap 8 B... But thank god note padh lia ;). Aiwe besti kraa leti lol

Humein toh loot lia. ... Simmi Ki samajhdaari ne... Pyari pyaari baaton ne... Sweet sweet gestures ne.. (does this make sense :P)

But simmi stole the show today.
I love her... But I am straight ;)

Wo Miss Sanskari jisne apki rathon ki neend aur din ka chain cheena HUA HAI-- does this mean Raman also remember Ishita?? Or sanskari jisne thappad jadha????

Waiting for the next. Wanna know Mr. Playboy Raman ka kya reaction hai

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#538

omg tgis was awesome
aww i lpve u simmi
so sweet friend should b like her
n now raman knws d truth so i need his pov

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#539

Originally posted by: maanvir

This story is going to be from Ishita's POV...
But u r soon going to get a sneak peak into Raman's life thru Ishita

That's great

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asma18

@asma18

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#540

Hii di 😊 ...

~ Sapna Mera Toota Toota~

emotional update di...
HAPPY iss liye ki raman ko
ko ishita yaad hai ..aur akhir kar
pata toh chala ki. ...
chashmish , miss. Sanskari ..
koi aur
Nahin uss ki ishita hai jo woh usse
life partner maan ta tha. ...&
SAD iss liye hoon ki,
...ishita ka dil tutt gaya yaar. ...jis ko dekhne k liye
pray kiya karti thi...jis ko khwaab mein dekhne
k liye jald soti thi. ..jis raman se baat karti thi.
Aaj wahi ishita. .raman ko khwaab mein na dekh
paye iss liye raat bbhar so nahi payi. ..
aur usse khwab mein bhi nahin dekhna chahti .
phir bhi raman uss k khwabon se jaana sa ka'''

Simmi, jab Bach pan ki simmi ko dekha tha.
.toh laga tha ki..ishita simmi ki nahin bane gi. .
Par mein galt thi ..iss simmi ko dekh kar. ..jo ishita ko itne
achchese samjh ti hai. ..aur uss k liye. .apne bhai se
tak fight kiya. .ki uss ne ishita k sath jo kiya
woh galat tha. ...nanand bhabhi jodi mast hai..
wish simmi jaisi, bahen, friend har kisi ko mile jo apne friend
k liye kisi se bhi fight kare. ...

Di! Aapne simmi aur toshiji k character ko bahut hi
achche se dikhaya. ...hai

Ye song jo aapne select kiya hai. .
maine abhi tak ye song nahin sona tha .pehli baar iss k lyrics
padhi phir song suna. ..apne ne bahut hi umda tarikhe se
iss lines ko convert kiya hai 👏 👏 👏

Hope next update mein raman ka POV hoga na. .ab ye
aap hi bata sakti hai ho.
Next update ka intezar hai. ..
😊