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sulochana90

@sulochana90

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#521

wow awesome as always

love the way u write n express

it was char kadham n now its this yaar

im getting addicted to ur stories

please update soon

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Eshabi

@Eshabi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#522

it's so emotional... I am proud of Ishita. Please don't make Ishita a crying baby. Make her strong. and from Raman's point of view I suggest this song... .tu jo mila ho gaya main kabil, tu jo mila hi gaya sab hasil...from bajrangi bhaijaan.

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Beautiful and emmosional update Di...

Loved it...

Like the way u show positive and strong ishu...

Don't make her cry baby...

I want Raman's POV after knowing about ishu...

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Malvika

@mayraa

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

Beautiful and emmosional update Di...

Loved it...

Like the way u show positive and strong ishu...

Don't make her cry baby...

I want Raman's POV after knowing about ishu...

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TheLeo_M

@TheLeo_M

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Lovely update...

love the cute bond between simmi and ishita

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: maanvir

Hey Asha!

Tumhare expecations kafi achhe hain...

But u knw na ke mai Expectations ko disappointment me badalne me mahir hun...

So beware!😉

Acha ji 😉 tho abb se hum ulta expect karna shuru kare kya 😆

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12Singmeenu

@12Singmeenu

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

Chalo pura na sahi adha tho guess sahi nikla😆

Par muje kyu lagtha hai ki dal mai kuch kala hai😉

Sry sry correction yaha tho puri dal hi kali hai😆

But i dont know y but i have a feeling that raman heard simmi ishu convo 😉

Even if he dint hear it he is sure going to get to know all this 😉

Ya phir shagun ko convo sunane ka tho irada nahi hai na 😆

Fir shagun ishu ko jeee bhar ke incha dhikayegi and last mai raman will save her 😆

Ps - ooo muje tho ulta sochna tha na 😲 koi nahi is ka ulta bhi chalega because that means romance jo app ke promise kiya hai😉 but not forgetting ki app writer ho tho romance will be only in dreams because

Tum mere khwabon se ja na sake😉

Hum ne tho title change notice kar liya 😆

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Prayosha

@Prayosha.DivAn

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Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Hey Di...

You are awesome writter...kitne achche se song ko scene me convert kar diya...👏

Now leaving with a teasing teaser

Part 9: Sapna Mera Toota Toota

(Translation: My Dream is broken)

PS: Have u noticed the change in the title?

YES Di, maine notice kiya...Ishita ka sapna tuta hai...par Raman to uske khwabo se jaa na saka...hai na...😉

& yeh to bahot achcha hua ki Raman ko Ishita ke bare me sab pata chal gaya...

& aap soch rahi ho ki PART 8 me itna achcha response kaise mila...kyonki...hum ko pata chal gaya tha ki ab jald hi Raman ko bhi Ishita ke bare me pata chal jayega...iss liye...jo part 9 me ho gaya...& Simmi ne bahot achcha kiya...apne bhai ka nahi par Bhabhi ka saath diya...jo pata nahi...kab... aap ki kripa se Simmi ki Bhabhi banegi...

Edited by prayosha - 10 years ago

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khizrahere001

@khizrahere001

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Superb update girl! 😃
Simmi jesii nand tou sab ko mley
ek din m 2 updates kardo. Ppaaallleeaassseee
P.S:show raman's point of view too mjhe nae lagta ishu ko raman bhool gya hgaa

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Richajin

@Richajin

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#530

Till now i almost knew this moment will come...like rkb the raman.. Then shagun with raman and ishita witnessing their proximity... Simmi disclosure at such an early stage was unexpected ( given your track record of introducing cliffhangers at every stage and leaving all of us guessing when will the moment of realization will come).. And the worst is i know what will be next.. Ishita separation.. Coz she is married to some angad malhotra( god no no no only u know who he is) but what remains to be seen is raman's reaction.. Any thoughts about raman's pov???? But then on other thoughts let it wait... The gloom continues.. Woh mile.. Phir milne ka wada kar ke bichde... Phir taqdeer ne unhe milaya.. Lekin ajnabee ki tarah... Ab ek doosre se roobru hue toh aise ki phir kabhi milne ki khwahish hi na rahi... Wah wah wah.. I m seriously not enjoying this ff... Coz i hate gloomy love stories... Something like ek tu na mila saari duniya mile bhi toh kya hai... But mainly coz of my loyalty to u mere dost i end up reading this and after two three updates my loyalty takes a reality check and comments... I dunno what have i written and if at all it makes sense..
Keep the updates flowing like dreams flow at night...