Tum Mere Khwabon Se Jaa Na Sake: FF (Created New Thread) - Page 17

updated my comment on page 19 after reading the whole update...reply awaited 😊😊

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

awww such a cute update
they were so cute
bahu dhundli was awesome
then y d hell they separated

Thnx Prachi...Ye tos sirf trailer tha abhi picture baki hai

Originally posted by: Anum_says

OMG Manooo .

Innnaaa cuteee updateee.

I love you and the kiss.. Jealousyyy.

Beautifully written.

But Ishita is not Raman's Biwi ..

I can't wait to read more

Want to know about Raman.. Where is he ...

Surf Ishu k dreams mai kyunnn ...

Yar just tell me one thing.

Tmhare dimagh k keeray itna acha or different kese soch lete hain. Lots of love to Ur Dimagh k keerrayyy .

Update soon

Hey Anum!
Thnx fr the lovely cmnt...
Dheere dheere sab sawalon ka jawab milega...

Dimag ke keede 🤣
Bas kahin se aa jate hain...pata nahi kaise...mere frnds aur relatives b poochte rehte hain k aose unique thoughts tere dimag me kahan se ate hain...

Habeebi to kehte hain ke Serial dekhne band kardo... 😆

Jiju, Angad ke baad ab Dimag Ke Keede ke b fans...
yaar kitne fan clubs open karun ab??? 😉

Originally posted by: ISHRARULZ

I just Loved it .these two are adorable.waiting to see how the story continues.plz update soon!and pm me.

Hey!
A new reader...Welcome to the gang...
Added u to buddy list...vl send pms...
thnx fr the cmnt...

PS: Wat cn I call u?

Originally posted by: sulochana90

I just loved it
So adorable

Hey Sulo!
Thnx yaar...
tera melodrama miss karti hun...

Originally posted by: Wings-of-Fire

Cause

a) You separated IshRa!😭

b) You're going to separate Ishita and Habeebi.😭(No story ends where it started and it started with Ishita and Habeebi together.)

🤢 I am dead!
Ab to aisa lag raha hai ke story ko yahin chodke bhaag jaun...run for dear life 😛

Originally posted by: mayraa

Awww such a cute update Di...

It's make me remember my childhood with my frndz...we actually fought like this for partners...

Raman is possessive about ishu...raman is jealous to abhi...

That I Love You and Kisssooo cute Di...their childhood love story...loved it all...

After reading this... I just want to say app ki story humare khwabon se ja na Saki...😉

Thnx Mayraa!
Bachpan ki yadein best hoti hain na akhir...

Wow dat was a super cute cmnt...
Khwab me dekh ke batana ke aage kya hua 😉

Originally posted by: Richajin

Update not seen????
Yes.. Sorry i opened page no 21.. And commented instantly... Then realized my mistake...
Ohh now you want my cmments...
What do you want to know from me that this story is so different and indeed it is..
That you write brilliantly.. Off course you do...
You are an expert in throwing bombs... Soon the scientists from the world over will invite you for a special conference seeking knowledge about how get the readers hooked on a plot and leave them guessing update and update over.. This was my actual state when i read the part 1. The love chit chat was going on between ishita and raman and suddenly you conclude the chapter by introducing some angad malhotra.. This time made him much more than that ajnabi who was still tolerable(when ishita thought she loved him) and poor souls like me kept praying ajnabi and raman to be one person.. But this time angad malhotra direct husband... And raman in dreams... Boo hooo...
Part 2... Usual routine of household going on... Every wife somewgat faces it on routine basis... Ishita happily in love with her husband and dreaming about raman.. Now i have issues.. I personally dont like unrequitted love stories.. I mean ishita and raman should be together but when they are not its like an emptiness engulfing the mind and soul... U think about the person, dream as much as you can about him/her... But the reality us you cannot live with that person.. Share your life with that one.. That is what my heart never accepts and the story becomes a sad one... And not a love story anymore...
I continued reading coz i wanted to know certain whys and hows...
Its like saying she loved him and he loved her but it was but it was not that simple...
Now part 3.. Simply love bachpan ki mohabbat... Innocent si.. Woh unharmed possessiveness.. It is something i die for literally... And to know bachpan ki mohabbat adhoori reh gayi as far as the story has progressed till now i am still with a sad face..
But the loyal reader will not leave this story coz i still wanna know Why and How could you do this to the characters who were in love right from their bachpan...
Now that u r writin it.. Its your story.. U only will decide how to make it a perfect imperfect story.. And make that khwab a haqeqat...

Hey Richa!

I missed those witty cmnts...
Scientists lukng after me 🤣
I can't stop laughing

ooo...mujhe isi baat ka dar tha ke pata nahi this story will be acceptable or nt..
isiliye maine climax par abhi tak kuch final decision nahi li...

but I am glad ke u didn't quit reading & u vl continue to read...
feedbacks dete rehna kyunki usse pata chalta hai ke readers kya soch rahe hain...
obviously mai apna plot nahi chng karungi bt kuch cheezon ko mold karna padega...
abd as always complaints & compliments r both appreciated

Originally posted by: maanvir

Thnx Mayraa!
Bachpan ki yadein best hoti hain na akhir...

Wow dat was a super cute cmnt...
Khwab me dekh ke batana ke aage kya hua 😉

awesome update hajmain
ke goli ne bhot asar kiya
ishra cute moment just loved
itni si umar main shadi bhi karne ke
sapne dekh liye