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Humko Pyaar Hua
Puri Hui Dua

No no don't think i have gone mad to sing such songs abruptly

i am actually in love

with whom?

with you all beautiful readers

itne saare comments 😲😲😲

matlab kya bolun...i am just pleasantly shocked and the shock has left me speechless

today i have accepted the fact that the thing from which you expect the least gives you the most

thanks is just a mere word but thanks a lottt

keeping my promise, here i am with the next update

and and and this update is dedicated to each and everyone in love 😳

so the update belongs to my love and all the lovers

hope you all like it and i live upto your expectations

also i am really hoping that this is the last update on this thread...the next update is ready too but i surrender this thread to you...spam it or do whatever you want and take the next update in a new thread 😳😳😳


P.S. for the first time i am posting two pics to give you an idea of the place that they are at and from the personal experience all i can say is that the place is beautifulll

ofcourse it was't booked entirely for me like it is booked privately in the update 😆😆but the experience with crowd as well was just awesome

ok bahut lamba note ho gaya aaj ka toh

here goes part 15

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Finally after a long drive of about an hour, they reached the destination.

As soon as he stopped the car at the entrance, he hurriedly came out and ran to her side. Opening the car door for her, he forwarded his hand helping her out.

And as she was out, she was blindfolded much to her shock.

Raman kya hai yeh...meri aankhen kyun band ki aapne...kahaan aaye hain hum, her never ending question box opened.

(Raman what is this...why have you closed my eyes...where have we come, her never ending question box opened.)

Ishita have some patience yaar...kisi achi jagah hi aaye hain...tum bas chup chaap chalti raho ander, he answered while holding one hand of hers in his hand and wrapping the other hand around her shoulder.

(Ishita have some patience...we have obviously come to a good place...you just keep walking silently, he answered while holding one hand of hers in his hand and wrapping the other hand around her shoulder.)

Baby I can see the sun rising in your eyes.

Baby every time I think of you, you make me smile.

As they walked in, their ears got to hear some sort of soothing noise.

And the tone the lyrics of the song she heard, it was clear to her that some sort of vintage romance was waiting for her today.

Baby I will be your every dream you should know.

Baby I will never ever wanna let you go.

As they went inside, the music continued to get deeper.

And now that they were finally at the place they had to be, he opened her blindfold.

As she opened her eyes, she saw nothing but darkness around.




















Raman hum kahaan aaye hain...yahan toh itna andhera hai, she asked confused.

(Raman where have we come...it is so dark here, she asked confused.)

Andhera kahaan hai Ishita...ab tak tha andhera toh...aaj hi toh savera hua hai, he replied with some meaningful words like a poet.

(There is no darkness Ishita...infact it was dark till now...the dawn has spread just today, he replied with some meaningful words like a poet.)

Zindagi Ki Neendon Ki Subah Ishq Hai

(Love is the light to the life's darkness)

Badi ajeeb jagah hai yeh Raman...ek toh itna andhera aur upar se itni thand...yeh toh bataiye hum aaye kahaan hai aakhir, she started to lose her leftover patience.

(This place is very different Raman...firstly it is too dark and on top of that it is so cold here...tell me now atleast where are we, she started to lose her leftover patience.)

Subah se keh raha tha baahon mein aa jao...tum nakhre kar rahi thi islie ab saza milegi...ab aisi jagah le aaya hoon ki baahon se jaa hi nahi paogi, he pulled her into a hug mischievously.

(I was asking you to come in my arms since the morning...you were throwing fits so now you will be punished...now I have brought you to such a place that you will not be able to leave my arms for even a second, he pulled her into a hug mischievously.)

Badi Khoobsurat Si Saza Ishq Hai

(Love is a very beautiful punishment)

Raman, she moaned.

Ssshhh...aaj sirf main bolunga aur tum sunogi...badi mushkil se toh ehsaas hua hai...aaj bas kehne do, he placed his finger at her lips making her shiver at his intimate touch.

(Ssshhh...today only I will speak and you will listen...I have felt this after so long...today just let me go on, he placed his finger at her lips making her shiver at his intimate touch.)

Humko Pyaar Hua

Poori Hui Dua

(My prayer is answered and finally I am in love)

Understanding the intensity of his words and realizing the passion of the moment, she decided to remain silent and just surrender to what was being done to her by him, her Raman.

Hum aaj chale aaye hain ek aisi jagah jahaan agar hum bhi chaahen bhi toh ek dusre se dur nahi reh sakte...humen paas rehna hi padega...aas paas dekho tumhe samajh aa jaega, he winked and then looked away in a certain direction to send a signal to someone.

(Today we have come to a place where even if we want then too we cannot stay away from each other...we will have to stay close...just look around and you will understand, he winked and then looked away in a certain direction to send a signal to someone.)

Chal Chalen Kahin

Udke Hum Chalen Kahin

(Let's fly and go somewhere)

As his signal reached the concerned person, the lights were slowly switched on.

And that was it...!!!

As she looked around, she could not believe her vision.





Each and everything she could see was nothing but snow. Tables, chairs, stools, partitions, curtains, chandeliers and anything that filled that room was made up of ice.

The white color of the ice and the blue reflection of the lights just made it look like a sky filled with love, their love.

Aasmaan Ishq Hai Khwaishon Sa Khula Hai

(Sky is full of love and desires)

Raman yeh sab, she tried to ask while still struggling to compose her astonished state.

(Raman all this, she tried to ask while still struggling to compose her astonished state.)

Ssshhh...kaha na aaj sirf main bolunga, he again silenced her while pulling her into a closer hug than before in a way that her head found its place in his chest while her hands wrapped him under his coat.

(Ssshhh...didn't I just say that today only I will speak, he again silenced her while pulling her into a closer hug than before in a way that her head found its place in his chest while her hands wrapped him under his coat.)

Tumhe pata hai tum ek apsara ho...aasmaan se utri hui apsara...aur yeh meri khushnasibi hai ki tum mere liye utri ho...toh maine socha kyun na is khushnasibi ko celebrate kiya jaaye...apsara ko uske khoobsurat aasmaan mein laaya jaaye, he finally started.

(You know you are a fairy...a fairy who has descended from the heaven...and it is my good fortune that you have descended for me...so I thought why should I not be celebrating my good fortune...the fairy should be brought to her heaven, he finally started.)

His words created such an impact on her that she started to lose herself. And so what would his actions do when his incomplete confession gave her an orgasm already was unimaginable.

Mujhko Chu Gaya

Ek Ehsaas Unchua

(A feeling that I never felt before just touched me)

Islie main le aaya tumhe tumhi se milane...udhar dekho, he turned her around while still keeping her covered in his embrace.

(And so I got you here to introduce you to yourself...look there, he turned her around while still keeping her covered in his embrace.)

She looked to where he pointed and got another pleasant shock, almost unbelievable.

Her photos from every phase of the life; childhood, teenage, adulthood and old age (thanks to photo editors) were carved in the opposite wall again made up of ice.

And the reflection of the wall was even visible in the alternative fall making it look like as if it was only she everywhere.

Jaise Koi Nasha Aasmaan Mein Ghula Hai

(Some sort of magic is mixed in the sky)

Jaise is jagah mein jo ki is waqt ek aakaash ke jaisa hai sirf tum hi tum samaayi ho waise hi meri har saans mein mere kan kan mein mere rom rom mein aur mujhmein bas tum hi tum ho tum hi basi ho, he finally said it all.

(Just like you are everywhere in this place which is more like the universe, same way you are everywhere in me and my heartbeats, he finally said it all.)

Pyaar Hua

(I am in love)

Mrs. Ishita Raman Bhalla ne Miss Ishita Iyyer...I love you and I love you as much that only this limitless sky can define the limit of my love...I might just die if I don't have you for me...will you please help me in staying alive, he went on his knees and forwarded his hand to her while looking at her with expecting eyes.

Humko Pyaar Hua

Poori Hui Dua

(My prayer is answered and finally I am in love)

"Raman", was all she could utter before she went down on her knees and eventually landed into his arms.

Humko Pyaar Hua

Poori Hui Dua

(My prayer is answered and finally I am in love)

Gaining the ultimate solace any couple would long for; they stood up still squeezed into each other and just continued to feel each other's heartbeats.

Baby I can see the sun rising in your eyes.

Baby every time I think of you, you make me smile.

Baby I will be your every dream you should know.

Baby I will never ever wanna let you go.

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Tumhe pata hai main kitna jyada lucky hoon...logo ko sacha pyaar ek baar milta hai...agar galti se woh pyaar bichad jaaye toh phir ya toh tanhai milti hai ya phir compromise...mujhe mera sacha pyaar do baar mila...tum mujhe jab pehle mili thi tab bhi tumse pehli hi nazar mein pyaar kar baitha tha...aur ab jo tumhe khoke dobara paaya hai toh lagta hai jaise woh pehli nazar ka pyaar aur gehra ho gaya...maine kabhi bhi nahi socha tha ki mujhe do do baar apna sacha pyaar mil jaega, he started to reveal his secrets to her as they sat on the chair so close that to each other that only air could pass by.

(You know I am very lucky...people get true love once in a lifetime...and if god forbid that love separates then people either compromise or get loneliness...i got my true love twice...when I met you first even then I was in love with you at the very first sight...and now that I have found you again after losing once, I feel that love of first site has become even deeper...I never thought that I will find my true love twice, he started to reveal his secrets to her as they sat on the chair so close that to each other that only air could pass by.)

Khwabon Mein Kabhi

Maine Socha Tha Nahi

(I never thought even in my dreams)

Abki baar jo tumhe paaya hai toh yeh mera vaada hai Ishita kabhi dobara tumhe khudse bichadne nahi dunga...khud ki kismat par na vishwaas hi nahi aa raha hai ki sach mein tumhe paa liya hai, he continued while the brunch was being served.

(Now that I have found you this time I will never let you separate from me...i still cannot believe my luck that I have really found you again, he continued while the brunch was being served.)

Chahton Ka Khuda Mujhko Itna Yun Dega

(I never thought in my dreams that the god of love will give me so much)

Jaanti ho Ishita jab tumse pehli baar mila tha na tab milna tak nahi chahta tha...Maa ne zid ki thi sirf isilie aaya tha...mujhe lagta tha ki commitment mujhe baandh degi...mujhe ek aazad panchi ki tarah bas udna tha, he accepted a truth while feeding her the first bite of the royal food served.

(Do you know Ishita when I met you for the first time, I didn't even want to meet you that time...Maa forced me so I had come...I thought commitment will restrict me...I had to fly like a free bird , he accepted a truth while feeding her the first bite of the royal food served.)

Befikar Chala

Apni Yeh Dagar Chala

(I used to walk my own path freely without caring for anyone)

Par us din jab tumhe dekha toh kuch aisa hua ki sab badal gaya...aazad panchi ki tarah udne se jyada mujhe tumhari kaid mein band hona pasand aaya...tab mujhe kya pata tha kitni sunder cheez hai yeh pyaar, he peeped into her moist eyes as she fed him a bite in return.

(But that day as soon as I saw everything changed...I found getting caged in your prison better than flying like a free better...before that I never knew how beautiful love is, he peeped into her moist eyes as she fed him a bite in return.)

Kya Pata Tha Ki Dil Teri Khaatir Rukega

(Who knew my heart would stop for you)

Tumse us ek mulaqaat ne sab badal diya...and I am so glad ki mujhe pyaar hua...nothing is better than this feeling, he kissed the eyes which were filled with evident unconditional love for him.

(One meeting with you changed everything completely...and I am so glad that love happened to me... nothing is better than this feeling, he kissed the eyes which were filled with evident unconditional love for him.)

Pyaar Hua

Humko Pyaar Hua

Puri Hui Dua

(My prayer is answered and finally I am in love)

As he went on and on opening his heart to her, he didn't even realize that she hadn't spoken a single word all this while.

The realization only happened when she brought her tongue out making an uncomfortable noise and closed her eyes tight probably because of the extra spicy food.

Tum thik ho Ishita, he asked concerned.

(Are you fine Ishita, he asked concerned.)

Haan haan...aaj se pehle kabhi itni thik nahi thi shayad, she finally spoke.

(Yes yes...I have never been better than this ever before, she finally spoke.)

Tum khush ho, he innocently looked at her.

(Are you happy, he innocently looked at her.)

Beintehaa, she replied rubbing her hand over his.

(Unconditionally, she replied rubbing her hand over his.)

Toh kuch kaho na...kabse main hi bole jaa raha hoon, he rested his head on her shoulder.

(Then say something atleast...Only I have been speaking since long, he rested his head on her shoulder.)

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Shaayad aaj aapne jo kiya Raman aisi hi kuch rahi hogi humari woh mulaqaat jab humne ek dusre se apne pyaar ka izhaar kiya hoga...main sab bhul chuki hoon islie shaayad aapko dobara sab waise hi karna pada taaki mujhe kuch toh yaad aa jaaye...par aapko sach mein bataun mujhe lag raha hai jaise yeh ek naya safar shuru hua hai...mujhe purana kal jaanne ki zarurat hi nahi mehsus ho rahi hai kyunki mera aaj bahut hi jyada sunder hai, she pecked his hand.

(Maybe what you did today Raman is somewhat like our that meeting when we would have confessed our love to each other...since I have forgotten everything so you did this again with a hope that I can recall something atleast...but if I tell you honestly I am feeling as if a new journey has started...i am not feeling like knowing my past since my present is just so beautiful, she pecked his hand.)

Kahe Mujhe Mera Yeh Raasta Hai

Kyun Na Zara Sa Tu Bhatakta Hai

(My way tells me to wander a little)

Aap hain na toh bas yeh safar suhaana hai...kuch na yaad hone se bhatakne ka darr hai hi nahi kyunki aanewale kal ki raah dikhane ke liye aap humsafar jo hain, she caressed his forehead.

(Since you are there, this journey is pleasurable...i don't have the fear of getting lost because of my memory since you are there as my companion to show me the way to the future, she caressed his forehead.)

Ab Toh Hai Naayaab Yeh Safar

(Since this journey is so royal)

Aur jab aap humsafar hain toh yeh safar itna special hai ki manzil tak bhi pahunchne ki koi chah nahi...bas aapke saath chalte jaana hai, she nuzzled his eyes.

(And now that you are my companion on this journey, this journey is so special that I don't want to reach the destination...i just want to keep on walking with you, she nuzzled his eyes.)

Zara Kahun Toh Meri Manzil Se

Dekhe Meri Woh Raah Saahil Se

(I should tell my destination to just keep waiting for me patiently)

Thank you so much Raman...meri zindagi mein aane ke liye...meri zindagi ko ek sunder sapna banane ke liye aur har ek kadam par mera saath nibhane ke liye...I love you and will always love you till the time I breathe, she finally confessed placing her lips on his.

(Thank you so much Raman...for coming into my life...for making my life no less than a beautiful dream and for always being there for me...I love you and will always love you till the time I breathe, she finally confessed placing her lips on his.)

Tu Hai Toh Khwaab Hai Yeh Safar

(This journey is like a dream because of you)

Giving each other the moment of ultimate bliss, they hitched due to the pain of pleasure, the nibbling caused them.

Kari Dil Ne Thodi Si Beimaaniyaan

Di Hain Khoobsurat Si Pareshaaniyaan

(My heart has done a few mischiefs and given me some beautiful troubles)

They hummed while gazing at each other shyly after enjoying a moment that was pending forever.

Humko Pyaar Hua

Puri Hui Dua

Humko Pyaar Hua

Puri Hui Dua

(My prayer is answered and finally I am in love)

Surrounded in the cold, they celebrated their union dancing to the rhythms of love giving the warmth of love to each other.

Baby I can see the sun rising in your eyes.

Baby every time I think of you, you make me smile.

Baby I will be your every dream you should know.

Baby I will never ever wanna let you go.



Edited by DivanIsh - 9 years ago
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Res for pata nahi kitne parts di 😉😉
Chalo ready for all jootas and chappals
Itne jaldi Maine unres Jo kar diya 😉😉
Ab bhi is thread KO dekhkar yaad aa gayi is unres
OK abhi batati hu story me baare mein

Chalo ek hi sentence mein sab kuch samjha deti hu
I FEEL SO LUCKY I GOT TO READ THIS.I COULD NEVER THANK YOU ENOUGH FOR WRITING THIS PIECE.
U r one of the very few most fav writers on this forum for me
Ek ek update se mera anxiety badta gaya
Kitna bhi dimag pe jor daalu kuch samaj mein nahi aata akhir waja kya hai in donom ki dooriyon ke lite
Ishita ko kuch yaad nahi hai so jaahir so baat hai had aurat ki Farah vo apni pati se pyar karne lagi
Par Raman bechara sab kuch yaad hai ,uski patni se behad pyar karta hai lekin keh nahi pata
He is being stopped by something that is so decisive for their lives which has happened on that engagement day I think
Ek special baat hai is story se Jo mai feel karti hu
Jab bhi mail yeh story padti hu pata nahi kyu mujhe ishita mein divyanka nazar nahi aati.I get a blur of sargun in ishita
That shows how beautifully u have portrayed teri meri love stories part in ur own way
Thank you for everything diii which u gave us through this story
Edited by Ishradivani - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivanIsh




awww no problem Deep

will wait


and that smiley 😳😳😳


humse thodi si bhi bewafai mat karna

thank you 😛

Are kon hai O Adami hume bhi to dikhao jo apni beheno se bewafai karta hai😆
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ek aur res
par pata nahi kab
unres honge🤣
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finally res
kya kar rahi ho yaar
mere comment pending pe pending pade hai
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omg ur dialogue were so intense and romantic. such deep feelings they contained.
brilliant storyline
amazingly penned down
everthing was just perfect.
the essence nd the ambience of the date, the setting, well potrayed emotions, everthing just perfect to the core.
Edited by florine_20 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
You really want me describe how was your update

I can only say MESMERISING

Pankhuri... What to say I m in Ishra land
I dont want to come out of it.

Pictures you posted ... They were amazing
And the song
Humko pyar hua...
I m in love with this new Raman

Hats off to your creativity

I loved your work but now I have become your fan.

Love you yar...
Already read this update twice

Now I dont care for that suspense.

I m loving this
Loving this Romantic Bhalla

Let me stop now... I will keep on typing

Lastly ...love you again

Post next part soon
Thanks for pm

Edited by ruhi_ishra - 9 years ago
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SO beautiful. Icy place. Wow
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Marvellous update... perfect length, perfect moments, my favourite song and a wonderful rendition of words; yet again! I'm in love with the idea of love!

This update was so blissful and romantic... Dil khush hogaya, by God 👏 😳

Update soon!! 😃

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