New Ishra FF: Thodi Si Bewafai Part 15 On Page 132 - Page 92

Originally posted by: NeetuThakur

First Comment in short with the initials of your name
One letter for each chapter order wise
15 chapters 15 letters

P- Perfect
A- Accomplished
N- Non-artificial ( I meant relatable but letter se match karna tha so please adjust )
K- Khoobsurat
H- Hatke
U- Up to Snuff
R- Realistic
I- Impressive
- Ek letter kam tha toh adjust karna tha. For the missing letter you can take it as speechless
S- Superb, Sexy
H- Hot
U- Unblemished
K- Khoobsurat again
L- Lajawaab
A- Addictive ( Not just the part but the whole story )


Debts cleared till here

Comment on daily basis no on just like the writer has planned to give updates daily 😉😉😉

Aage badho hum tere saath hai

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Amazing

Thanks 4 The PM

Originally posted by: amenaDivAnhasan

This is too cute, can't wait for next update

Originally posted by: maanvir

Part 13

Pehle to I was upset kyunki mai suspense khulne ke intezar me jaldi jaldi aage badte gayi...
But hua ye ke update khatam ho gaya par suspense nahi...

and I realised k is wajah se I cudnt enjoy the updt...

now dat I knw k isme suspense nahi khulega I read it again...

so dis cmnt is purely abt dis updt...

haan haan mujhe bad bhi toh kaha tha is update ke chakkar mein...kabhi nahi bhulungi main 😭
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Sabse pehle to I ws confused k raman kisse baat kar raha hai...frst I thought k he ws talking to ishita...baad me jake pata chala k ye to Toshiji se baat kar raha tha... 😆

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 laga hi tha mujhe...log kuch acha toh soch nahi sakte na...bas romance hi chahie


just lyk Toshi mai b bahut zyada khush hun k raman ne realise kar liya hai k ishita usse kitna pyar karti hai aur ab he is on a mission to set things right...
Vijayi Bhava...my blessing to Raman 😉

Vijayi bhava se mujhe aapka diaog yaad aa gaya...aap har kisi ko kehti ho na vijayi bhava 😆😆😆

Ishu ne b sabse pehle apni sasuma ko call kiya naa ki apni amma ko...dat says k her equation wd her saas is better than that wd her mother...dis is probably bcz Toshi is the one who hs gvn her a new lyf...the one who acted lyk her mother wenshe ws abt to begin a new journey...Ishita aftr llosing her memory ws lyk a new born baby n Toshi is her mother in that sense...so dis moment ws perfect fr me...

you summed it up so rightly...ek update mein maine mention kiya toh tha ki ab Toshi Ji is her mother since she gave her this new life...you have put it together so beautifully di...thank you so much


The star of this updt was not raman...not Ishita...But Toshiji...one can not help but fall in love wd her goodness...

i swear...so cute na

I hd a gud laugh rmmbrng u telling me abt mkng Toshi a vry sweet person in dis story to make up fr her grey character in CKPC and maintain the balance...tussi sachhi mahaan ho 👏
😆 shukriya hai ji...assi toh mahaan hai hi


if u gv such cute updts one aftr anthr hw cn I complain dat u r bad fr nt revealing the suspense?
n nw dat u hv promised of daily updts I am just curious to read the lovey dovey moments btwn ishra...

ek baar toh kaha na...teer se nikla hua baan aur muh se nikla hua vachan wapis nahi aaya karte behna...bad keh diya na bas keh diya...😭

haan haan aapko toh bas lovey dovey moments hi chahie

ishra moments in ur stories hv alwys been a treat and droolworthy...
n I knw exactly wer it cms frm...personal experience haan 😉
😳 no comments

ye cmnt kuch zyada formal nahi ho gaya?
Yaar hindi me alag sa hi apnapan hai...hai na?

acha ji mera dialog mujhi pe chipka diya aapne...sahi ho aap badi bidu...formal or informal there was love and i could feel it bas

Behna maine hle b bataya hai aur ab bhi bol rahi hun I am in love with TSB and more than that I am in love with the author 🤗
KYUNKI TU DHADKAN MAI DIL

and the author is just sharmaying 😳

kyunki main dhadkan aap dil 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

PS: The longest cmnt typed frm my phone...aur aaj phone ne b mera sath diya [:D/]

phir toh banta hai...phone this is for you 👏

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Thats nice... Raman is going to confess his love.. Loved IshRa moments in the home and in the car. Continue soon..

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN

Update soon yr plz

Originally posted by: DEEPIKAA0123

SUPERB DEAR.

Originally posted by: rk654

i will unres later...abhi dono part read nahi kiya😕

Originally posted by: riYa09guPta

I'm really very sorry badi late ho gai...
Pichle update k comment k liye Unres
karne ka mann hi nahi hua to socha
dono ki tareef ek sath hi kar du...

arre not a problem dear...please don't be sorry

Part 13

Ishq ki ye makhmali dhun
Hone lage jisme hum gum
Jadu tera chhane laga aesa halke halke

Dhundhe mera dil kyu tujko
Yeh bata de aaj mujko
Khawaishe jo dil main tere
Mere dil se chalke
Dekho sab kho gaye jo the dil main gile
Mit gaye sare ab fasle
Teri baahon main din hoga roshan mera
Teri zulfon main shaame dhale

Chale jo tu sang mere sang mere...
Honge na hum tanha
Bahon main teri mene teri mene...
Paa liya sara jahan

Jis tarha ye story progress kar rahi hai
uske liye ye gaana mere zehen me bar
bar aa raha tha jise likhe bina mujhse
raha nahi gaya...

arre waah waah...kya song hai...i have this and i keep listening to it so many times...it is just so cute...thank you so much for dedicating it to my story 😊😊

Pehle to mujhe laga Raman Ishita se
baat kar raha hai par wo nikli toshi ji
and their conversation was just amazing...
He expressed his love for Ishita with
his mother...Awww
Aur ishita ne bhi sabse pehle toshi ji se
apni khusi zaahir ki...so sweet
And toshi ji was very happy for her Son
and DIL...just like Us..!!!
Par maine socha tha ki aap is update
me suspense reveal karoge...
But It was a brilliant update ...

thank you so much Riya...glad you liked the convo between Toshi ji and Ishra

suspense ka toh aisa hai ki ab bas dekhte jao step by step reveal ho hi jaega pakka promise

thank you so much for this cute sa comment...thanks a lot really

Part -14
Again u gave us a beautiful update full
of Ishra Nok-Jhok...
I really enjoyed this part very much
Raman apni hi biwi se sharma raha hai
aur sharmaye bhi kyun na abhi tak un
dono k bich 'ahem ahem 'jo nahi hua ...

ahem ahem jo nahi hua 🤣🤣🤣🤣 you sounded like a 90's ki heroine here...so cute you are

but thank you so much...glad you liked the update

Aur gaana to shayad aapke update k
liye hi bana hua hai...har update me
har gaana perfectly match ho jata hai..

aww that's such a huge compliment...thanks a lot dilse...you made me too happy

They are so cute...
Chalo ab finally in dono k bich sab theek
ho raha hai now am waiting for his surprise
for Ishita...
once again sorry for late cmmntng..!!!

thank you so much for this endearing comment dear...i am overwhelmed to know you liked it

please don't be sorry...you liked the update is enough for me

thanks a lot 😳😳😳