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Posted: 10 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

Omg this is superb. ..

yoyyy didu.. u r awesome u know..
well infact I am in love with i already so it's okay hehe..
so bold and W*F she doesn't remember what happened wooo

hohohohohoho 😆😆😆
happy that you liked it 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

hohohohohoho 😆😆😆
happy that you liked it 😳

haha n I imagined u laughing like Santa clause hahahha
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Posted: 10 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: mayraa

What is happening...

I really can't understand...
It's like a mistery...
Ways going on with ishu...she can't remember anything about last...how can this possible ...
Is she suffering from some kind of amnesia...
One thing I love about all ur stories that is RKB itself...
U write about every shade of his personality...

Loved this update...
Waiting for next...

Mystery...you can call it so😆
amnesia 😉 we can anme the disease later 😆
glad you liked this flirty despo RKB also 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#74
Bitter truth of this update..:-(

ishu not remember anything ,what happen to her in last n8?she not remember raman also great..

She lost her virginity..raman is clueless now,y she left him without informing him?puttar is so despo to findout her.raman findout ,y ishu acting weired while doing s**,y she is despo to do s** with him?

Mimi engagement,it means raman entry is coming up,so we readers witness ishra meeting in engagement cermoney.;-);-)

Raman recognise ishu ,if they met by chance,but what about gajini ishu?

Most cracking scene is ,ishu checking out her body in mirror ,what a hilarious ,how she bite herself..:-D:-D:-D
she findout what she lost in n8...

she cover up her body with full of clothes and high make up,but how she cover up truth of her life?

If ishu is not remember anything?how she reached home?how she come from raman bed to her bed?it is a mystery..

Im waiting for ishra meeting,r u planned their meeting in mimi engagement or in shopping mall?it is up to u..

Thanks for pm..
Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#75
Hi Gaya,
Your second part is little confusing for me. The first part Ishu is hurt by Subbu words and is trying to find solace in Raman but the second part why was Raman searching for Ishu in his house and if she was not in her sense how did she come home and how are the going to meet again if she doesn't remember Raman.

Thanks for the PM and waiting for the next part to see whether that would clear my confusion.
Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: --abha--

Res...
U updated will read afterwards.
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Chapter 2

Ru-u-ush

What was that...No whatever it was I loved it...
OMG!!!!!! Gayu...Its her subconscious mind...Bravo to the thought...
She don't know what happened...
Pinch me is it true,...

And Raman...omg she is in his thoughts...
Its her engagement and why I feel Raman will be there
Ofcourse due to mihir and he will feel pang in his heart...
She will not recognise him...
Jo bhi ho I am more than excited...jumping

Subbu dubbu ki band bajayega RKB...
But this risky nhi...
To much inferiority complex...
I remember a tv show based on this concept.
Name emmm jyoti I think...

I am damn excited...
Response to milna hi tha tum ho hi great...

Maine kahan kabhi tujhse I luv u ...😆
Main abhi bhi nhi kahungi 😆

Update next...
U will give bcoz u are damn excited for this story ...
I know ...
If u are excited u give back to back updates


kitty giving long and thoughtful reviews 😆
I'm waiting to hear your ILU 😳
PS. You're right. When I'm interested...I'll give back to back update...😉
Expect next part soon 😊
Because I'm excited 🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Bitter truth of this update..:-(

ishu not remember anything ,what happen to her in last n8?she not remember raman also great..

She lost her virginity..raman is clueless now,y she left him without informing him?puttar is so despo to findout her.raman findout ,y ishu acting weired while doing s**,y she is despo to do s** with him?

Mimi engagement,it means raman entry is coming up,so we readers witness ishra meeting in engagement cermoney.;-);-)

Raman recognise ishu ,if they met by chance,but what about gajini ishu?

Most cracking scene is ,ishu checking out her body in mirror ,what a hilarious ,how she bite herself..:-D:-D:-D
she findout what she lost in n8...

she cover up her body with full of clothes and high make up,but how she cover up truth of her life?

If ishu is not remember anything?how she reached home?how she come from raman bed to her bed?it is a mystery..

Im waiting for ishra meeting,r u planned their meeting in mimi engagement or in shopping mall?it is up to u..

Thanks for pm..

Hi Jaaniii...😃
Firstly...
I miss you so much...😔
coming to the comment
very good observation 👏
Glad you liked it 😊
Next will be IshRa meeting...
Of course in the mall...
No twists 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Gaya,

Your second part is little confusing for me. The first part Ishu is hurt by Subbu words and is trying to find solace in Raman but the second part why was Raman searching for Ishu in his house and if she was not in her sense how did she come home and how are the going to meet again if she doesn't remember Raman.

Thanks for the PM and waiting for the next part to see whether that would clear my confusion.

I'm afraid if you could clear the confusions so soon 🤔
Well...I'll try not to lag everything 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#79
So now RKB ll meet her in Mimi's engagement?
Edited by kaa1202 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Heyy second part was so mysterious .. Y ? Is ishita acting all clueless.. I don't know I sense something fishy... Hope they meet soon... Anyway loved the part... Beautifully written ... Please continue soon... Take care... Love aish :)

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