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Originally posted by: shrutireddy

pls continue yar ...eager to knw wat will be cmg nxt ...

Originally posted by: mayraa

OMG...

Jo socho wo hota ni aur Jo kabhi sapane me bhi na soch ho use krna koi gaya se sikhe...

Loved it ...

Ishu is so trying to be bold just because of that subbu🤢

Raman is so flirty and at the same despo to ...

Eagerly waiting for ur next shock...

Originally posted by: TamannaSethi

Gayu dii

I read just now the prologue...

I was like... What!!!!!...

Ishu... Itni bold...

Baba re!!!!

I liked it...

Interesting concept...

Till now I haven't read this concept in the forum...

Jldi-Jldi update krna please...

Baki stories ki trh mat tapdana... Please...

Originally posted by: TamannaSethi

Read... Part 1..

Chapter 1--- To-o-uch

First of all... I would like to clap...

FABULOUS update...

I think this is the first time you gave the update so soon...

A huggy for the giving the update so soon...

Now coming to update...

I would suggest you write BOLD/MATURE in the update...

As it is unexpected... Till now I haven't read the BOLD Ishita..

What is this happening?

Ishita is flirting with Raman... Why?

Why she wants to prove Subbu something...?

They are engaged... Hell... Why?

These all WHYs... Are eating my head...

And all the answers to them are with You...

I think there are some twists also...

Because till I now... You can't give a straight away story...

So... I know... Your DEVIL is working on full speed...

Next update mn bada DHAMAKA milne vala h..

I can guess that shock... But I won't speak here...

Aap update kro... Dekhte h kya twist aata h...

Post soon please... By tomorrow ...please... Dii...

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

subbu is cheap
n update was fabulous

Originally posted by: sukanksha

New concept... N again unique.
Do continue... Even I think it has. SO much scope... Can't possible to complete in one or two chaps.
P.s. I hate subbu here too :P

Originally posted by: rufana10

it's really different
subbu and ishita r engaged 🤢
cheap subbu 😡 what is going on ishita's mind 🤔
raman has become despo for her 😛
continue it soon 😳

GAYA did I confuse after reading part one. Ishu engage with Subbu and he want sex with her did they made it. And now Ishu appear in the pub and drinking like Raman said the Iyer not drink.what made her want to go to bed with Raman the way she behave did not look like decent girl for me sorry to say that.but very interesting it play out even I love to read more to see what are you planing for new thing.😉

Originally posted by: usaonly

GAYA did I confuse after reading part one. Ishu engage with Subbu and he want sex with her did they made it. And now Ishu appear in the pub and drinking like Raman said the Iyer not drink.what made her want to go to bed with Raman the way she behave did not look like decent girl for me sorry to say that.but very interesting it play out even I love to read more to see what are you planing for new thing.😉

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Gaya, thats amazing but Ishu and Subbu making yuckk. 🤬 I thought Ishu was innocent but don't make her so bold.