FF || My First Fling || #Mature || Completed on Page-107!!! - Page 18

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyachaudhary

OH MY GOSH GAYA...
ITS AWESOME...
FIRST I THOUGHT IT WILL BE BORIG AFTER AFTER FIRST PART
THE SAME SEXUAL ENCOUNTER AND THEN WILL FALL IN LOVE
BUT HOW CAN WE FORGET THAT U R WRITER SO HOW IT CAN BE BORING...
LOVED THE TWIST
I THINK DUE TO ALL THE HUMILIATION SHE FACED BY SUBBU
SHE HAS MULTI PERSONALITY DISORDER...
SHE WANTED TO PROVE SUBBU WRONG AND THATS WHAT SHE IS DOING BUT WITH SUBCONSCIOUS MIND👏


Glad you changed the prejudice 😳
And yeah...
Great guess work 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Good story. Keep up the good work.
Pls update your other stories too. You have a gift👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update yaar...
Loved it...
Suspense is killing me now...😉
I Like Ishu's cute antics with Raman...
She so insecure about herself...
Update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
heyya!!!!
u updated also!!!!
wohooo their pleases worked ya?

Too good i mean the flash back's re!!!!
kissy to u from my side!!!
ab kya hga?
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow very nice gaya love how she call hm ram
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Posted: 10 years ago
read 4 parts in one go...

this subbu...😡😡😡


i love the way raman is caring fr ishita...


waiting fr next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I want to add something...
Their room, our bedroom by him shows like now this is only truth...
He is so much chamged with her presence so this word...
I really liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
I read thrice gayu,...I am bored studying and I think I am spamming...
I want update plzzx...
U promised 3 today yaad rakhna
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Posted: 10 years ago
Heyy loved part 4 ... I don't know y ishita is so clueless about the whole incident but Raman's care n the flashbacks have something to tell.. I hope next part gives a clear picture abt ishita... I hope she realizes her love for Raman soon... .. Please continue soon .. Eagerly waiting. . take care. ...love aish :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
oteri she act as a child wow n calling him ram too wow lovely it short but ok

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