Ishra SS- Ek haseen itefaak part 2 on pg 16 16th sept

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Prologue...

Raman bhalla..the successful hot and charming businessman. The heartbeat of every girl..successful but still down to earth personality. Today he took another step on the ladder of success. He has just got the contract which was his dream project. He was happy beyond the limits..he just took the keys of his car and left his office. He asked the gate keeper to lock the door..

Raman was driving his car normally..a song was playing on and he was humming it. He so love Delhi..no traffic..no jams (although its a lie😆). He took the turn which will lead him towards his house and applied the break as suddenly a girl came and collided with his car and fell. He quickly gets down and look at the girl..blood strains on her saree..head bleeding. Bangles broken..mangalsutra around her neck. She is married..he looked around to see if is there or not as the girl was murmuring "please go away..dont kill me..dont kill me.."

She was running away from someone but why..he dont have much time to think about it. He picked her up in his arms and made her lie on the back seat. He turned the car towards a hospital..

With the help of nurse. He managed to get her in. He did the formalities and asked the doctor to check her. He was standing outside the ward. He was worried for her..and that's when doctor came out and she was looking tensed..

"Raman..do u know her??" She asked
"No..i guess she was saving herself from someone. She might be running and failed to notice my car. She got collided with it and fell..i dont know anything about her.." he replied.
Doctor took a deep breath "raman..she was pregnant. And she had lost her baby. She is injured badly..even she is bleeding internally too. Since u dont know her i want to ask u if u want us to continue operating her or not. I mean its ur money so u decide"
Raman was shocked..with the revealation of her being pregnant and then he composed himself "of course i want u to operate her. And dont worry about the bill.."

Doctor nodded and left leaving a disturbed raman behind.


Index
part 1-pg 7
Note on pg 14
Part 2-pg 16


My first SS on this forum. Do hit like if u want me to continue it. 😃
And i need ur help with the title. Suggestions are required. Waiting for it and love u all. Keep showering ur love on me. Muaahhh..
Ankita :)
P.S- do let me know what u think about the prologue :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Intresting start continue soon... Who was dat lady?? Ishita??
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wow... nice prologue... continue soon...and the title can be "HAMSAFARS"
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Interesting concept. ...
for the title... kaise mujhe tum mil gayi

I dont know what the further story will be but after reading the prologue the first song came in my mind was kaise mujhe tum mil gayi kismat pe aaye na yakeen... so may be
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Superb
can u pls add me to your pm list
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Interesting prologue. Continue soon. Pm me the next update if u can.
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Interesting start...
Pls continue soon..
Thanx for the pm..
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Interesting prologue...
I m sure its going be beautiful story...
Waiting for next...
Updated soon..
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Hi really interesting ya. I hope that the girl should be vandu or mihika not ishu. Ishu should be for raman only.
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Interesting start
AWESOME
Please continue

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