NEW TS___MY DREAM GIRL part 16 up on Page 59 by ASHA - Page 33

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Wonderful update gaya3
painting scenes are wonderful..


Thanks jaani 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: VENBA

This SS is really awesome..

Brilliant brilliant writing..
Just cant wait for next update
thanks for pm..😊😊


Thanks yaar and welcome 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hana_y

gaya you should take rest first yaar

ok i love paint wala scene it was too good flash back too was good

super from me gaya take rest ok


Yeah... I'm taking care 😃
Glad you enjoyed 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rufana10


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nice update gaya3
raman painted only ishita's portraits😳...loved it
take care of urself dear😊


Yeah he did only hers 😳
Thanks for loving it 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello everyone
So I am hear with the new part 😉

Their was so much sweetness in this story which I was not able to digest 😆

So I thought of this

Warning : read at ur own risk

It is not proof read

Plz avoid my mistakes 😳

Part 12
It starts from where it stopped ishu was in the flash back and she suddenly as she remembered all the horrible memories that came after that flashback

Flashback

It was one such evening when ishu was returning home after she met Raman

She almost reached her home when she felt some one pulling her into some car and blindfolded her

Ishu : kon ho thum chood chood muje ( she was struggling to set herself free )
( who r u leave leave me )

Man : abhi tho hath aye ho ethni jaldi kaise chod doon ( tightening his grip )

( now only u came In my hands how can I leave u so easily

Ishu : kon ho thum kya chayea thume ( tears flowing through her eyes wetting her blind fold )

( who r u what do u want )

Man : thum muje sirf thum chayea thum Jaise sundar bala ko tho mare baho mai hona chayea Raman bhalla ke pas Nahi ( coming closer)

( you I want only u beautiful things like u should be in my arms not with that Raman bhalla )

Ishu :(scared ) bachvo bachvo. Koi hai help

( save me save me some one is there help )

Man : yaha koi Nahi hai sirf mai aur thum ( coming more close )

( there is no one hear only me and u )

Ishu tried to struggle and set herself free in the process she pushed him and his hit his head to the steering of the car

Man : ( angrily ) thum !!! Ayse Nahi manogi thume tho mai bathatha hum
( u !!! U won't listen like this now I will show u )

And he pulled out a rope and tied her to the car seat and tied her mouth with and other cloth and started the car

Mean wile nishita who was searching.for ishu as she was never this late saw a faint image of a girl like ishu been dragged into a car but she ignored but as she reached down in search of ishu she found ishus mobile which was thrown out of the same car and she started panicking she immediately called Raman and narrated the whole incident to him as she started her car go follow that car

Raman : nishu don't worry I will be right there ( in a tensed tone )

Nishu : no Raman I am following the other car u have a tracking device right track my no and follow me
Raman : wait nishu it is not safe stay right there till I come

Nishu : r u insane my sisters life is in danger and u r asking me to stay do hell with u Raman I am going

And she started following that car

Raman : nishu nishu wait listen ( but he realized that the call was disconnected )

And Raman drove down the way scared to bits praying to God that nothing should happen to both of them as he drove tracking nishu s mobile

Her cell suddenly got off at one place near the hill top

Raman got out of the car and started searching for both of them screaming their names

And he heard a strange voice calling out for help

He followed the voice that lead to the store room and was almost near the room when he saw ishita running out of it she was in a horrible state her dress torn her kajal smujed tears flowing down her face
And followed her a man who had a mask on his face

Raman started running towards the direction where ishu ran he was hell scared and his blood was boiling at the same time

He saw ishita standing near the end of the hill top the man moving close to her step by step
And she kept backing away till she reached the end

Raman : ( shouts ) ishita

As he reached her quickly and held the man by his shirt and started hitting him black and blue till he fall on the ground

There ishu was so shocked scared and just sat down on the ground crying
Raman immediately ran towards her and covered her with his jacket and took her in a hug

Raman : ( consoling her ) sush !!!! I am hear every thing is fine nothing will happen to u we r find ! We r fine !

And ishu suddenly lifted her head to see the man standing up with a gun in his hand and she yelled

Ishu : Raman !!!!!!

As Raman turned he felt a force pushing him to the ground and his head hit a rock and he felt unconscious

Ishu : raaamaaan!!!!'

And she turned to wards the force and saw nishu there who wax just hit by a bullet on her head and was above to fall down the hill and ishu reavched to help her

Ishu : nishu Akka. Akka hold my hand Akka try Akka plz try plz hold my hand

And finally as nishu holed her hand and ishu was above to drag her on top she felt a hard stone hit her head and her grip on nishu s hand loosened and she fell on the ground shouting akkka !!!!!

Flash back ends -------

Ishu suddenly wakes up shouting Akka Akka plz don't go don't go plz don't leave me Akka ...
And that's when she feels a hand on her shoulder she instantly hugged the person without seeing who it was

Ishu : Akka Akka app aaa gaye Akka app plz muje chod kar math Javo I can't live like this Akka Akka plz plz

( u came plz don't leave me and go plz )

Person : ishu ishu plz carm down it is me

Ishu look up at the person in shock and suddenly jerked back mumbling a sry

Person : ishu y r u sry I am sry it is ok every thing will be ok plz calm down. ( rubbing her back )

Ishu : Mihika it is ok I am sry I was just ... I am sry ( with tears in her eyes )

Mihika just hugged he tight its ok I miss her too

And ishu hugged her tightly as she was not able to control any more she cried her heart out to her
Mihika just kept stroking her hair trying to calm her down it only increased her guilt seeing ishu in this state as she some where blamed herself for it

Slowly as ishu calmed down she made her lie on the bed and went out and her cell rang

Mihika : ya I was above to call u u were right maybe she had a nightmare she is fine now

Raman : thank u Mihika thanks a lot I would have come myself but ...

Mihika : u don't need to explain I understand this is the least I can do for her

Raman : thanks once again Mihika. Good night and plz take care of her

Mihika : yes I will good night Raman

Mihika : ( st) mihir see what u and ur brother did to them u should have not done this mihir u should have not

And tears started flowing from her eyes

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Ok friends that's all for now

Gaya3 off yo u

Have fun reading

Asha

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Posted: 10 years ago
Great yaar...👍🏼
So what now...
It's Mihika's surprise entry... 🤔
Let's see what I'm gonna do 😉
PS. You cheated me 😡
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb

Great yaar...👍🏼
So what now...
It's Mihika's surprise entry... 🤔
Let's see what I'm gonna do 😉
PS. You cheated me 😡


Now what did I do 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Asha and Gaya3,you guys are rocking with the updates. No words to describe how beautiful the story is. Simply superb. Waiting for the next update asap 😊 . A big huggie for both of you guys.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KP_DT_Fan

Asha and Gaya3,you guys are rocking with the updates. No words to describe how beautiful the story is. Simply superb. Waiting for the next update asap 😊 . A big huggie for both of you guys.


Thanks for reading and liking 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow asha lovely flashback it pain

n mihika surprise entry too wow

love it asha

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