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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_rddt

marwana kyun chahti ho???


Abb mai ne kis ko marwaya😲 yeh tho suspense hai. Ha if want me to kill some one in this story ( ishra). I will think about it nice idea by the way 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu



Abb mai ne kis ko marwaya😲yeh tho suspense hai. Ha if want me to kill some one in this story ( ishra). I will think about it nice idea by the way😉


My update will be so late today yaar 🤔
I'm not feeling well...
Moreover I didn't even plan it 😔
I can't focus...
That's why I didn't update JTJB and Mannmarziyan (I completed typing this evening 🤔)
Please bear the delay mere yaaron... 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Gaya3sb


My update will be so late today yaar 🤔
I'm not feeling well...
Moreover I didn't even plan it 😔
I can't focus...
That's why I didn't update JTJB and Mannmarziyan (I completed typing this evening 🤔)
Please bear the delay mere yaaron... 😭


Ok 😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
@sushasha kitna tang karte ho tum usko...let her breathe...
ja jile apni zindagii Gaya😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

@sushasha kitna tang karte ho tum usko...let her breathe...

ja jile apni zindagii Gaya😉😆


That is y I stopped yar 😭 mai uski sad Nahi karna chathi. Kasam se 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu


That is y I stopped yar 😭 mai uski sad Nahi karna chathi. Kasam se 😭

why are u crying...she loves u and love this spamming😎...i think
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

why are u crying...she loves u and love this spamming😎...i think


Nahi yar she sad in that comment na dint u see that she was sad and all that 😭 so I promised her I will stop guessin in open 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu


Nahi yar she sad in that comment na dint u see that she was sad and all that 😭 so I promised her I will stop guessin in open 😉

guessing in open😆...i think she is tired...4 updates in a day too much too ask...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

guessing in open😆...i think she is tired...4 updates in a day too much too ask...

Y ur right 😲 Kuch zayada hi ho Gaya 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi Kutties...😊

Owing to my fever I'm posting a short shot (kind of a filler 😔
Asha will compensate for it 🤣


PART-11


Ishita heaved a sigh of longing when Raman left the place. She lied in the bed and thought about the past moments once again. It gave her a sort of will power. She was wondering how her life changed within somedays. From the very moment Gurveer Bohra entered her life with his younger brother Mihir Bohra. When Mihir seemed to be a soft and gentle person Guru appeared to be the opposite. She couldn't back off from thinking the dreadful past.


FLASHBACK


Ishita and Raman were sitting in Raman's room reading some random poetry. Raman was a LOVER OF ARTS which is the sole reason that brought Ishita closer to him. They both used to spend quality time together giving their love a strength of amicability.


Painting was his passion when Ishita isn't being counted. He only used to paint the most beautiful creation of the world for him, Ishita. She didn't know that he had perfected a number of canvases by her face and his love.


It was one such a happy day that Ishita accidently got inside the room. She was pleasantly shocked is an understatement. Her jaw dropped to the floor watching her portraits hanging on the wall. She was wondering how he noticed her this much. She looked at all the paitings and touched her face to make her understand that it is not some reverie.


Some unfinished works were kept on stands voicing out that whoever is the artist, he is working hard everyday. Raman stood behind her smacking his head for being late. He wanted to stop her but fate! He didn't want this to be like this. But now when she saw it she must have assumed the meaning.


Raman: stammering here and there, "Voh...kya hai nah...tum bahut expressive ho...isiliye...see shop of expressions."

(It's just because you're so expressive)


Ishita in shock, "Bejhne keliye kiya hai?"

(Made for sale?)


Raman shook his head vigorously saying, "No way...It's just time pass"


She questioned him expectantly, "Aur kuch nahin?"

(Nothing else?)


Raman walked towards her while she stepped back. Pinning her on the wall he asked her huskily,"Aur kya hona chahiye?"

(What else you want?)


She tilted her head feeling his hot breath on her cheek. That was when she saw a beautiful portrait of her being kissed in the eye. It didn't need a rocket scuence to find the owner of the lips which is relishing her eyes in the painting. She interrogated him pointing at the portrait were written; To My Love, of My Love's...by your Love, "What's that? Expression?"

Raman: "Voh...ek...ek poem...poem likhne ka man kar rahe dhe...assonance acha hai na...Love..Love...Love..."

(I wanted to write a poem. That assonance is good right...love love love...)


Ishita: "Yeah of course rhythmical. And what about the portrait?"

Raman: "I felt your face apt for it. Don't worry...I'm not going sell it or share it. You're safe!"


She was pissed off by his behaviour. It was vivid that he do love her but was not ready to tell.


"Egoistic Ravan"


She muttered curses under her breath and opened the door. Without looking up and acknowledging the presence of someone standing in front of her, she kept on walking. Bumping into the stranger she was almost fell back on the floor but a pair of musculine hands protectively encircled around her waist. Raman who came out after her to tease her some more saw Ishita in someone else's arms. But the person's face made his lips curve in to a smile.


"Guru Bhaii...!!!"



TO BE CONTINUED BY ASHA...

Other updates will be late (I'm really sick buddies and so is my lappy) 🤔
Bear the delay 😳



Gaya3

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