New IshRa TS:...And The Two Become One(COMPLETED)

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..TeriDeewani..

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Posted: 10 years ago

A/N:Hey frnds..!!
Wel actually its been a long time tht I wrote any thing on IshRa so here I go.

This story is dedicated to my dearie frnds...Mano di,Harshi Didu,Inshu di,Vidss,Rashu Piyu di...this once for u all...Luv u all..🤗

This is actually my personal xperience which I xperienced some days back when I went for a wedding...😳
Most of it is fiction...let me tell u tht..hope u all will like it...plzz try givin long comments as it is my last write up for this year...n aftr tht I am gonna b hell busy wid my studies..

PS:This is first time I have tried writing sum1's POV(point of view) so bear wid me...n tell me if I shud continue this style or get back to my prev styles.

PSS: Special thanks to my Didu(.Harshita.) For helping me wid the title and the song selection even though I ended up choosing my ones.

PSSS:A big thank u to my dear frnd Vidss for sending a PM to all of u..

Edited by crazy_neha - 10 years ago

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..TeriDeewani..

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Note: This story consist of 3 parts which I hve posted all together one by one...

TS:...And The Two Become One

PART 1

Finally..!!!!!! They got married. I just wish that the government bans getting married in summers,it such a pain.This was the current feelings of 17 yrs old Ishita Iyer,who just came out of the Kalyanam Mandapam which killed her with so much hotness.

Ishita,was attending her favourite cousin Bala Anna's wedding who got married to his lady love Vandita. Ishita was happy for her Bala Anna even though she didn't like Vandita that much. But she was not concerned about that anymore,she was concerned about someone else.

"Ishu" chirped Simmi,the person who can shoo off her concern and her bestest friend.

"Hmm" Ishita said still about thinking abt him.

"What hmm we need to go to the reception venue asap!!" Said Simmi who expected an answer from Ishita before.

"Btw,Simmi I heard that some of your cousin are also coming for the reception..is it true?" Asked Ishita who wanted to know if he was present or not for the reception.

"Yeah.." Said Simmi.

"Who?" Ishita asked curiously.

"I don't know...now let me go please" said Simmi.

"Okay...go" Ishita said

Simmi just went with her father and sister Rinki for the reception venue living a restless Ishita back.

Ishita's POV

Reception venue

Uff!! This weather...its killing me. I looked at the sky n sent a silent prayer to Murugan to show some mercy on his kanna.

And as if Murugan was answering my silent prayers. Their he stood talking to Simmi and her family while wearing his green shirt.

My heart instructed my brain to walk towards him but my brain being my brain instructed me to go away from their.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Why does my heart make a noise?

Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Neither here, nor there

Teri ore chale
It walks only towards You

But Murugan was playing games with me...thats when Simmi called me.

"Ishu kahaan jaa rahi hain?"

I signaled her through my thumb towards my parents.

"Arre uncle-aunty ke saath hi rehti haina tu?"

I nodded in affirmatively and said

"Obviously..."

"Toh abhi mere saath rehna please..." By making a puppy face.

Awww...that puppy face..how can I say no to her.

So there I was sitting besides the guy I loved...Raman Kumar Bhalla who was just smirking at me continuously. I tried ignoring him but my efforts failed.

Raman's POV

I was just smiling at her continuously as many things were in my mind.

"Bhai mujhe kuch kaam hai I'll just come"Simmi said that to me.

I just nodded.

Now I wonder how Ishita is gonna get out of my trap.

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Why does my heart make a noise?

Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Neither here, nor there

Teri ore chale
It walks only towards You

"Hmmm...so what happened to your biggest distraction in your studies??" I smirked.

"Sorry...I didn't get you" She said avoiding the question.

"Oh...so you didn't get what I was saying. Wait a minute abhi samajh aa jayega" I said as I removed to show her our chats.

Her eyes just widened to tell me that she was shocked.

"Raman please rakho isse...warna agar koyi aa gaya toh.."She said in fear.

"Oh...so someone is scared haa...but madam chats pe toh badi bravery ke saath mujhe kahaan tha that 'I have fallen for you'..

"Raman stop please..!!!" She said while blushing.

I just looked at her eyes and I got lost in her eyes which was filled with innocence,care,love,lots and lots of love FOR ME.

Zara der mein yeh kya ho gaya
What's this happened in my heart in just a moment?

Nazar milte hi kahan kho gaya
After the meeting of our eyes, where has it lost?

"So how is your girlfriend Shagun?" She asked curiously.

"Well...I broke up with her"

"Again?"

"Yeah...she got shifted to Australia."

"Ohh..." She replied in just one word but her eyes were filled with so much happiness. We were sitting in a reception hall crowded by so many people but it felt as if we are the only two in this world. I could see many people behind her but for me she is the one.

Bheed mein logon ki woh hai wahan
In the crowd of people, she is there

Aur pyaar ke mele mein akela kitna hoon main yahan
And in the fair of love, I am so alone here

"Tujhe badi khushi ho rahi hai.."

"Ofcourse...shayad mera mauka ho.."

"Tere mauke ke chances" She looked at me with a hope.

"Hai almost 99.9%"

When I said that sentences...no one could deny that she was blushing profusely. I do loved her as it was a long time we were talking to each other. Ishita was a simple girl and I simply fell in love with this simple girl.

Shuru ho gayi kahani meri
My story has started

Mere dil ne baat na maani meri
My heart didn't listen to me

I came back to senses by the sound of my cellphone.

"Excuse me.."

"Yeah sure.." She said while showing her bestest smile reaching till her eyes.

Ishita's POV

He just excused himself to receive a call.

Murugan I am gonna tell him that I love him.

"Ishita..!!" A voice called my name. Who was none other than Simmi.

"Kya hua??" Simmi asked eagerly.

I just narrated the whole scene happened just now including the details.

"Toh ab kya karne waali hai tu??"

"Wahi jo mujhe bahut pehle karna chahiye tha..main apni feelings Raman ko bata dungi.."

"Aye haye kya baat hai...dekh bhai aa rahaan hai...main jaa rahi hoon. Sab bol dena"

I nodded affirmatively with lots of nervousness.

Hadd se bhi aagey yeh guzar hi gaya
It has crossed all the limits now

Khud bhi pareshaan hua
It troubled itself

Mujhko bhi yeh kar gaya
And it made me also tensed

Raman's POV

I just went towards Ishita picked up my bag and was about to leave.

"Raman kahaan jaa rahe ho??"

"Ishita, I can't stay here now.."

"But,hua kya?"

"Important work,I need to go.."

"Okk..jau but usse pehle I want to tell you something"

I just knew what she was about to say. And I knew what reply I should give to her,I can actually read that in her eyes.

"Raman,I...I LOVE YOU.."

Dil kyun yeh mera shor kare
Why does my heart make a noise?

Idhar nahin udhar nahin
Neither here, nor there

Teri ore chale
It walks only towards You

God why did she that...I couldn't say no to her but I had to do it,for her own good.

She looked at me with a hope.

"Ishita,look I actually don't have such feelings for you...so I am sorry" I said that with a heavy heart...because whatever I said that wasn't true.

"Raman please jhoot mat bolo...I know that you love me and I can see that in your eyes."

"Ishita it's just nothing...and for now you should focus on your studies...it's an important year for you. All the very best for your future and please mujhe bhool jau...I wish to see Dr.Ishita Iyer...not just any Ishita Iyer.

I just said that and turned around to go from there...leaving a shattered Ishita behind.

Edited by crazy_neha - 10 years ago

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..TeriDeewani..

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PART 2

Ishita's POV

It's been two months after that night...the worst day of my life. I still couldn't believe that Raman didn't love me...because what I saw that in his eyes was just love...unconditional love. After that night I didn't even tried sending him a 'Hi',nor did he initiated. I still remember our late night chats...our talks on how to get a 'Kick' in our lives...I just smiled reading our old chats. They were many other things I wanted to tell him but they remained unsaid. The nights felt incomplete to me. The days went boring nothing seemed interesting to me..I wanted just to go and ask him Why Raman?!!!. I just couldn't live without him.

Ye Raatein Ab Nahi Dhadakti
These nights have stopped beating (like heart-beats) anymore

Din Bhi Saansein Nahi Lete
The days don't breathe anymore

Ab Toh Aa Jao Mere Soneya...
Please come to me now, my beloved

Baatein Reh Gayi Adhoori, Mere Labon Pe Zaroori
Important talks resting on my lips are still incomplete

Aake Sun Jao Mere Soneya...
Please come and listen to them, my beloved

My thoughts were interrupted by Simmi...I met her after two months. I was ignoring each and every person related to him,which didn't let me move on.

Simmi just came and sat beside me and said

"Kaisi hai tu??"

"Tu yeh baat jaanti haina...phir kyu poochh rahi hai..I can't live without him yaar.."

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

Tere Bin... Ab To Aaja Piya
Without You, please come to me now

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

"Ishita,bhool jaa bhai ko...woh tujhse pyaar nahi karta" she said avoiding an eye contact with me.

I don't know why I felt there was something fishy.

"Tu yeh baat kaise keh sakti hai...maine khud Raman ke aakhon mein khud ke liye pyaar dekha hai.."

"Ishu,tujhe koyi misunderstanding hui hogi..."

"Simmi tu mujhse kuch chhupa rahi hai?? I said firmly as I was confident that she was hiding something from me.

"Arre..aisa kuch." Said Simmi avoiding my question.

I took her hand and kept on head and said
"Simmi tujhe meri kasam bata mujhe kya chhupa rahi hai tu??"

"Ishita actually Bhai..."

"Main batata hoon Ishita ke Simmi tumse kya chhupa rahi hai..." A voice said from behind and I was kind of shocked because I didn't expect him to be here at this moment.

"Tu jaanta hai???" I said in shock.

Raman's POV

It is the month June...when her favourite season arrives..I still remember once she said

Raman,baarish aur zameen do long lost lovers ki tarah hote hai...baarish bhalle hi saal mein ek baar hi aati hai...aur woh bhi kuch dino ke liye...par jab woh aati hai tab zameen itni khushi se khilti hai ke hume woh mitti ki khushboo milti hai..

Godd!! Who could have thought that way...well Ishita can only think that way.

It was raining heavily..the windows were letting some of the rain to enter my room and hit my face. I never liked this season that much because,according to me the only thing this season did was to make people wet but her love for rain..made me look at the rain in a different way. I started enjoying them but the rains were incomplete without her.

Pehle Jaise Mausam Bhi Aate Nahi Hai
Seasons aren't arriving like they did previously

Baarishon Mein Pehle Jaisi Baatein Nahi Hai
Monsoon doesn't have that same delight like it did previously

Pehle Jaise Mausam Bhi Aate Nahi Hai
Seasons aren't arriving like they did previously

Baarishon Mein Pehle Jaisi Baatein Nahi Hai
Monsoon doesn't have that same delight like it did previously

Sookhe Sookhe Alfaaz, Khali Khali Mere Haathon Ki Laqeerein Bulaave Soneya...
My dry words and empty lines (of fate) written on my hands are calling out to You, my beloved

I remembered that wedding night where before her confession.

Flashback

I excused myself and received the call,it was Romi..my best friend and a classmate cum friend of Ishita.

"Hey Bhai..kaisi chal rahi hai phir shaadi??"

"Bhai,shaadi ke liye yahaan kaun aaya hai...main Ishita ke liye aaya hoon. Lagta hai aaj mujhe woh propose kar degi aur main bhi usse haa bol dunga...because main bhi usse pyaar karta hoon.

"Arre...bhai Ishita ko haan mat bol" said Romi.

"Kyu?? Kya problem hai??"

"Arre tujhe pata hai Ishita ka aaj kal...padhaii pe dhyaan hi nahi..sirf Raman Raman karti rehti hai.."

"Kya?? Aisa nahi ho sakta...Ishita ko padhaii se pyaar hai.."

"Aisa hi hua hai bhai...woh toh aapna dream to become world's best cardiologist woh bhi bhool chuki hai...toh soch agar tune usse haa kahaan toh usske career ka kya hoga..aur tera bhi toh career haina"

"Romi...main tujhse baad mein baat karta hoon"

"Thik hai..."

I hanged up my cellphone.

Ishita,I won't let you ruin your dreams because of me.

Flashback ends

At that moment I had to act strong,stay strong because of her but now I can't take it.

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

Tere Bin... Ab To Aaja Piya
Without You, please come to me now

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya...
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

Ishita's POV

I was sitting over my big French window and looking at the surroundings,the beautiful night. After a long time I removed my old radio and songs were going in the background...if a normal was in my place right at presence then she would have enjoyed this moment to the fullest.
Whatever I got know to know in the previous hours was shocking as well as surprising.
I wonder can I really love someone till this end??

The volume of my old radio increased automatically and the song,its lyrics were actually expressing my feelings.

Ho... Ho... Ho...
Chaand Bhi Wahin Hai, Wahin Hai Sitaare
The Moon is where it was and so are the stars

Tere Baad Pheeke Pheeke Lagte Hain Saare
Without You, they all seem colourless

Chaand Bhi Wahin Hai, Wahin Hai Sitaare
The Moon is where it was and so are the stars

Tere Baad Pheeke Pheeke Lagte Hain Saare
Without You, they all seem colourless

Aaja Leke Tu Savere Kar Ja Door Ye Andhere
Come and bring new mornings(light) with Your arrival, take away these darkness's

Teri Doori Tadpaave Soneya...
Your separation is tormenting me, my beloved

I chuckled sarcastically at the thought..that even the universe was sprinkling salt over my wounds. I miss you Raman.

Raman's POV

Whoa!! What a trying a day. I sat on the sofa spreading my legs and resting my head over the sofa. No one was home all were at Simmi's place for some reason. Even I was there for sometime after that I came back,I wanted to be there for more time but I didn't wait. My cellphone buzzed it was a random message from a company advertising their products...I ignored it and went to the Gallery option. I hardly had any of her photos. I just zoomed one of her photo with Simmi.

I rubbed my thumb against her face her smile...the world's best smile. We will soon be together Ishita I can't wait for that day to come.

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

Tere Bin... Ab To Aaja Piya
Without You, please come to me now

Tere Bin... Nahi Laage Jiya
Without You, my heart doesn't attach itself to anything else

Tere Bin... Tere Bin... Tere Bin
Without You, without You

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..TeriDeewani..

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PART 3 Raman's POV

Heart is in the left...but it's always right..so for it to be right..it needs to be HEALTHY-Dr. Ishita Iyer

I just smiled reading the headline of the most famous medical magazine. She indeed had become a doctor. Its been 10 years..after that night,after I met her. Its not like that I haven't her in this 10 years...we met but not that way.

Nahi Jeena Tere Baaju, Nahi Jeena, Nahi Jeena
I don't want to live without You, I don't want to live

Nahi Jeena Tere Baaju, Nahi Jeena, Nahi Jeena
I don't want to live without You, I don't want to live

She was the highest in her entrance exam for medical. Ishita got the best college..with full scholarship. After that their was no turning back for her. Simmi and Romi use to keep me updated about her. 5years ago I left Delhi and came to Mumbai to pursue my dreams.

My flight landed at the Delhi airport at 11:30 pm..our usual late night chats use to start at this time. I just smiled at that thought. I guess I am gonna meet her this time. I will,because I don't think that she will miss her best friend's wedding. It was Simmi's wedding. I came out of the airport,caught a taxi and headed to Mayur Vihar.

The whole place was silent...I expected it to be with full of noise but it was the opposite of it.

Ishita's POV

I was in Simmi's house when I heard a click sound..it sounded as if the door was opening and their I saw him..Awww he looking so handsome. I saw him almost after 5 years..the last time I saw him was the time when he was going to Mumbai. He started walking towards my direction. He saw me and just mouthed aHi..

I replied with a smile.

"Tum yahaan??"

"Simmi ki shaadi hai,agar aapko pata nahi.." I said sarcastically.

"Mujhe yeh baat pata hai...I meant tum iss waqt yahaan kya kar rahi ho??"

"Ohh..actually Simmi wanted me to over here as its her last night here so.."

"Achha.."

He went towards the refrigerator and removed himself a glass of water and drank it in one go. I guess his thirsty or hungry..that's why I asked

"Khaana khaaoge??"

"Tum rehnedo main kar lunga"

I started heating all the dishes which were available.

"Main kar rahi hoon na..."

Main Tainu Samjhawan Ki
How should I explain it to (convince) You?

Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Without You, my heart is always anxious

Main Tainu Samjhawan Ki
How should I explain it to You?

Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Without You, my heart is always anxious

Tu Ki Jaane Pyaar Mera
What do You know about my love?
(You don't know to what extent I love You)

Main Karoon Intezaar Tera
I'm waiting for You

Tu Dil Tuiyon Jaan Meri
You are my heart and soul

Raman's POV

Godd..!! I expected her meet at the wedding but here I met at Simmi's house. I don't know why but I didn't go to my house but directly just came here.

She heated the food for me placed it on the table,she turned up towards me and asked

"Do you want me to stay here till you finish your food??" She asked me.

" Only if it's possible for you.."

She pulled a chair out and sat besides me...

I didn't even utter a word nor did she...I finished eating and picked my plate. I started cleaning my plate when she said

"Arre main kar deti na..."

"Nope..I'm fine"

"Tum sone jaa sakti ho.." I said as she looked really tired.

"Okk...Good Night" she said with a smile.

"Good night.." I replied.

Main Tainu Samjhawan Ki
How should I explain it to (convince) You?

Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Without You, my heart is always anxious

Main Tainu Samjhawan Ki
How should I explain it to You?

Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Without You, my heart is always anxious

Tu Ki Jaane Pyaar Mera
What do You know about my love?
(You don't know to what extent I love You)

Main Karoon Intezaar Tera
I'm waiting for You

Tu Dil Tuiyon Jaan Meri
You are my heart and soul

Ishita's POV

I said good night and came to my house to sleep. I sat on my bed and just stared at the new edition of a famous business magazine.

It stated that Raman Kumar Bhalla,the most young CEO gets the awarded as the CEO of the year. She was really proud of him. He had achieved so much in his life. When I got to know that his going to Mumbai,I was really upset at that time...but then I thought practically. I was still in love with him...and tomorrow Raman has to face me and my questions. With this thought I slept as I needed to look good for tomorrow.

Raman's POV

When I woke up...I saw a big crowd in the room. I realized that I was sleeping in the living room. All of them warmly welcomed...I went to freshen up because I was told that we should reach the venue to the earliest. When I came out I realized that all of them left,I got dressed and left for the venue.

When I reached the venue...the environment was the same as it was at home but here the only difference was that there was Ishita their. I was mesmerized by her beauty. She was wearing a royal blue color anarkali and was looking beautiful in it. The wedding started but my whole and soul attention was over Ishita.

Mere Dil Ne Chun Laiya Ne
My heart chose

Tere Dil Diyaan Raahaan
The path that leads to Your heart

Tu Jo Mere Naal Ture Taan
If You walk/move with me

Turpe Meriyaan Saaha
My breath goes on/runs
(I'm alive as long as you're by my side)

The wedding got over and the reception started. I sat on a chair of the last row. That's when Ishita came and sat besides me.

"Hey.."she said

"Hi"

"Achhe lag rahe ho..."

"Thanks..tum bhi"

"Thanks..waise Raman main aaj bhi aapse pyaar karti hoon."

Whatever she said..that shifted the whole world upside down...I didn't expect her to say this.

"Really??"

"Haan.."

Jeena Mera... Hoye... Hun Hai Tera... Ki Main Karaan
I'll live/pass my life only with You, I can't do anything about it
(I'll live my life only with You, that's my deepest desire)

Tu Kar Aitbaar Mera
Have faith in me (Trust me)

Main Karoon Intezaar Tera
I'm waiting for You

Tu Dil Tuiyon Jaan Meri
You are my heart and soul

Main Tainu Samjhawan Ki
How should I explain it to You?

Na Tere Bina Lagda Jee
Without You, my heart is always anxious

Ishita's POV

"Waise Raman..Romi ne aapko kahaan tha na ke...aap mujhe haa na kahe??"

"Tumhe kaise pata??" He said in shock

"Ussi ne mujhe bataya..Raman agar aap mere saath hote na toh shayad mere liye yeh safar easy hota.."

Ve Changa Nahion Keetaan Beeba
You didn't do the right thing, O decent one!

Dil Mera Tod Ke
By breaking my heart

Ve Bada Pachhtaiyaan Akhaan
These eyes regretted a lot

Naal Tere Jod Ke...
After they got connected with Your eyes/gaze
(I'm regretting a lot by striking a gaze with You)

"Ishita...I am sorry..mujhe laga tum meri wajah se...iss liye maine.."

"Achha yeh sab chhodo...aaj main aap se phir kehti hoon ke "

I went down on my knees and said

"Mr.Raman Kumar Bhalla would like to spend your whole life with me??"

He came down on his knees and said

"Ofcourse...that would be my favourite job.."

The whole universe was just smiling and showering blessing to this beautiful couple...because after so many days they were together...AND THE TWO BECOME ONE...

Edited by crazy_neha - 10 years ago

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hey sorry dear for late editing and thanx a lot for reminding me. tula wait karwaae karta kharas sorry chutki 😆

now back to update. I was surfing casually and saw ur post. that time u didn't post ur story and only res ur post. I was feeling so proud on myself ki kisine dekha hi nahi iss story ko and I res it immediately 😉

the teenage love story type of stuffs always attracts me. I don't know why but yup I like it always and this story was again a wonderful example of that.

the teenage love story...uff!!!! ishu is actually not so mature but I liked her boldness that she confessed her love & cute puttar...he is troubling her. but their love was so pure yaar. without any selfishness. truly it touched my heart

I liked simmi and ishitas friendships and actually romi and ramans friendship. where one friend consoling her other friend, where other friend telling him to save her life...that was wonderful dear. I also liked your song selection. and also claps for ur friend Harshita who helped u...

I was actually wondering will they met again? and I got y answer. they met finally on simmi marriage. their meeting 👏 I liked ishitas gesture like to help him with food and she even sit with him. the next day was of simmis marriage...e history repeats again. the work which they left some yrs ago, finally they completed it. their love got their destination finally. but I am happy that they also achieved success in their professional lives

this was perfect example of happy ending yaar. truly loved it. and like vids I also said u are good in writing POV. and dear continue ur stories bcz I am excited to read more from u. BTW, apart from my gappa goshti, u said u saw that similar kind of incident in wedding, so I am excited to hear about that luv story. plz share only f u are comfortable. sorry for delay again dear. luv u

😊

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Anamika

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umm... What a Fab TS Ne.. !!!
I just loved it
I've read it over and over again
Indeed I must say... You're a good Story-Maker

The songs you chose... Brilliant
actually this title suits better

Such a simple story with no haddis...
Positivity all through
I was completely involved the story...
I could Visualize each and every bit you have written

I love this concept of Teen love ... *Ahem*
Bahot accha lagta hai when two people who love eachother selflessly, indeed end up together. Dil ko sukoon milta hai (Kahi tho sahi 😉)

tu POV's bahot acchi likhti hai yaar
me sad... This is your last write-up
Beautiful mistake ke saath nainsaafi mat kar
Make time for it... Please ... Please

Overall... Beautiful TS. 😃

P.S - Love you Ne... 🤗
It's my pleasure to send Pm's for this

Your Vidss 😳

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.Harshita.

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Heyy Chotti...🤗
Well itss really sweet of u that am also in the list of ur people to whome the story is dedicated...
lolzz...
believe me its a special feeling...😳..
..And am always there for u whenever you need me...🤗
Comingg to the story...
Wat a writer u are...
.Hats off dearie... 👏 👏
Very well written...
The plot, storyline, characters and the incidents...everything is just Amazingg...
Totally luvdd the fact how teenage crush turned into everlasting love...
Ur story has every phase of love...attaraction, longingness, sacrifice, sadness, happines, memories, pain n reunion...
Totally Beautiful...it is!!!
N a spcl. thanxx to u for that 'Tere bin nahi laage jiya' song...u remembered it...😳
I luvdd Ishita's character... I somewhere found myself in Teenager Ishita(age also same 😉)
Thank you soo much for this TS chotti...
N am really sorry that am unable to give proper ...
I hope u'll understand...'ll try to give proper comment if time permits!!
No gunnite n sweet dreams... Soja jaakar...kal school h na...
Study hard...make me proud!! 😊
Stay blessed dear!!

Edited by .Harshita. - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

Okk..nw I am off to sleep..plzz give long comments coz it was painful task for me to write it thru my cell...appreciation and criticism both r welcome... 😃
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