New IshRa TS:...And The Two Become One(COMPLETED) - Page 5

Originally posted by: divazfankau

wow beautiful update

Thanks dear... 😃

Its been a long time:-)
u posted a OS..:-)
AWESOME OS:-)
I LOVE THIS PLOT
It starts from child hood and ended in a mature way:-)

i love one thing in this update... raman take back his proposal bcoz of her career:-)

ishita is not lesser than raman...she achieve her goal and wait for raman till day:-)

may be raman tell the reason y he is rejecting her proposal...it is easy to her..or he accept her proposal..her path may easy with the love of raman..

Ishita once again proposed him ..Awwe how cute she is:-*

neha i loved your writting style...and i love the song..:-)

thanks for pm vidyu :-)

Originally posted by: janani_divan

Its been a long time:-)
u posted a OS..:-)
AWESOME OS:-)
I LOVE THIS PLOT
It starts from child hood and ended in a mature way:-)

i love one thing in this update... raman take back his proposal bcoz of her career:-)

ishita is not lesser than raman...she achieve her goal and wait for raman till day:-)

may be raman tell the reason y he is rejecting her proposal...it is easy to her..or he accept her proposal..her path may easy with the love of raman..

Ishita once again proposed him ..Awwe how cute she is:-*

neha i loved your writting style...and i love the song..:-)

thanks for pm vidyu :-)

Yeah its actually been a long time...
Thank u so much Janani di...
Thanks again for reading my story..

finally unres karun dila page 1 var

Originally posted by: aarohi26

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hey sorry dear for late editing and thanx a lot for reminding me. tula wait karwaae karta kharas sorry chutki 😆

now back to update. I was surfing casually and saw ur post. that time u didn't post ur story and only res ur post. I was feeling so proud on myself ki kisine dekha hi nahi iss story ko and I res it immediately 😉

the teenage love story type of stuffs always attracts me. I don't know why but yup I like it always and this story was again a wonderful example of that.

the teenage love story...uff!!!! ishu is actually not so mature but I liked her boldness that she confessed her love & cute puttar...he is troubling her. but their love was so pure yaar. without any selfishness. truly it touched my heart

I liked simmi and ishitas friendships and actually romi and ramans friendship. where one friend consoling her other friend, where other friend telling him to save her life...that was wonderful dear. I also liked your song selection. and also claps for ur friend Harshita who helped u...

I was actually wondering will they met again? and I got y answer. they met finally on simmi marriage. their meeting 👏 I liked ishitas gesture like to help him with food and she even sit with him. the next day was of simmis marriage...e history repeats again. the work which they left some yrs ago, finally they completed it. their love got their destination finally. but I am happy that they also achieved success in their professional lives

this was perfect example of happy ending yaar. truly loved it. and like vids I also said u are good in writing POV. and dear continue ur stories bcz I am excited to read more from u. BTW, apart from my gappa goshti, u said u saw that similar kind of incident in wedding, so I am excited to hear about that luv story. plz share only f u are comfortable. sorry for delay again dear. luv u

😊

Its okk...Aarohi di..

Woh toh hai...u were really fast..

Really!! Even I like it...wht a coincidence..same pinch..

Even I njoyed writing the teasing part..

Thank u di...ofc the credits for song goes to Harshi Didu..

That was my point I wanted them to first b successful in their professional life thn their luv life...
I will try to if time permits but...I am busy this yr wid my studies..
Will surely tell u...it isn't a luv stry but an experience thts it...

Its okk di...luv u too

Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

It's amazing. :D

Thanks Mehak di... 😃

Originally posted by: Piyu97

Nehu! I'm so sorry for the late reply. I was really busy, and kal Vidu said that you dedicated the post to me, and I was like "oh really?"Peheli baat, uske liye thanks a lot bachcha. Love you to the core.🤗
Koyi nahi di...it's okk...I undrstnd..maine ussko bola tha not to tell u but chalo iss ka bhi ek gud side dekho aap comment toh dene aaye..love u too di..🤗
Okay, now, enough bak bak. Coming to the post..It's really tough to you know write from someone's point of view. When we write a story sort of thing, we actually place a character and we frame it accordingly. But kisi ke point of view se likhna, it's like placing yourself in that person's postition, living the situation and then realising how exactly would that person react to this particular case.
So true di...mere liye Raman's POV was a lil hard..even I was thinking if Raman I am Raman thn hw will I react...n all tht..
And to be honest, when I saw the length, all I went was like.. "Woah! that's a massive one"
I wanted it to b a lil massive..coz my prev stories r mostly short..
And yet it is, in terms of ideas that you injected into it. In terms of the firm base that you created.. everything was so perfect. And then look at your age😲How did your small hands manage to script down such a beautiful masterpeice?This is one of the best things I've read in the entire forum. And to be honest, this can't be categorised either.
Thank u so much di. Masterpiece really??!! Really di...thank u so much for this appreciating words..
Perfection at it's beauty. Is that what I should call?Yes! it is.
Thank u...I am blushing...☺️

Enough of gyaan.😆
Aur gyaan dete raho...I'll b happy..You know that you did a great job. But story ka review dena, I can't do that. I never do that infact. But I can always tell you how beautifully you managed to pen down such a wonderful write up.
Keep bringing up such stuffs.😃👏
Thank u so much di..will surely try to write more..

@Bold

Hi Neha,

Originally posted by: mayasundar

Hi Neha,

I just read it today beautiful TS

Hey Maya di...
Thanks for reading my story..