Hey Nehu dear,
It is beyond perfect. Seriously I dont find words to appreciate you for this beautiful story. Iam so lost for words now. Take a bow from me. And a tight hug and kissie for you.
It was so beautiful. There was LIFE IN THIS STORY. I was able to feel it and it was like a short film on ishra. I juz loved it. I know that you are a writer. But never did I imagine that you are a brilliant writer. If you, a school going kid, write such stories, then you deserve a standing ovation for this. ( Applauding for this work, rising to my feet from my home).
And you own this style of writing.
I have bookmarked it. Will read it again n again whenever Iam free. But iam little heart broken because you said that this is your last write up for this year. But its okay. You concentrate on your studies.
Do write more when you're free.
Love you chotu.
Thanks,
Manasa.
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