New IshRa TS:...And The Two Become One(COMPLETED) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Nehu dear,
It is beyond perfect. Seriously I dont find words to appreciate you for this beautiful story. Iam so lost for words now. Take a bow from me. And a tight hug and kissie for you.
It was so beautiful. There was LIFE IN THIS STORY. I was able to feel it and it was like a short film on ishra. I juz loved it. I know that you are a writer. But never did I imagine that you are a brilliant writer. If you, a school going kid, write such stories, then you deserve a standing ovation for this. ( Applauding for this work, rising to my feet from my home).
And you own this style of writing.
I have bookmarked it. Will read it again n again whenever Iam free. But iam little heart broken because you said that this is your last write up for this year. But its okay. You concentrate on your studies.
Do write more when you're free.
Love you chotu.
Thanks,
Manasa.
Edited by Yuvasreejai94 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
beautiful updt dear
well written
loved it
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Beautiful and Lovely update👏
I like the way of your writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Superb story yaar and beautifully written
Continue ur works
Will be waiting for ur next work
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nehuu..you have left me speechless and shocked. Thank you so much for adding my name to the list too, you're too sweet🤗. Well coming to the story, I have only one word and it's "PERFECT". You have penned down is in such a beautiful manner that I don't have enough words to appreciate you and your talents in the field of writing. I loved Ishita's character, just amazing!! And then, I loved how you showed their attraction, sadness and love. I am in love with this OS. The plot was amazing.

You are an amazing writer Nehu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
neha... its amazing dear.. too good..
the way u have shown the two POV its super cool..
ty for it..
vidz ty for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
This one was so sweet and amazing three shot neha...loved it...

I loved song selection...
The way story goes...ishita love for him...girl proposing him was so cool and uniqu

Loved it completely
Continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi neh,
after long time got a chance read ur story.
I'm so lazy nw 2 hit the like button. So here goes my likes 4 ur story.
I like it,
I like it,
I like it.
3 parts, 3 likes.
Beautiful story dr.
Do write more often.
I like ur writing style.
Tnx 4 pm vidu baby.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww such a nice story
loved it
beautiful
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Harshita.

Heyy Chotti...🤗
Well itss really sweet of u that am also in the list of ur people to whome the story is dedicated...
lolzz...
believe me its a special feeling...😳..
..And am always there for u whenever you need me...🤗
Comingg to the story...
Wat a writer u are...
.Hats off dearie... 👏 👏
Very well written...
The plot, storyline, characters and the incidents...everything is just Amazingg...
Totally luvdd the fact how teenage crush turned into everlasting love...
Ur story has every phase of love...attaraction, longingness, sacrifice, sadness, happines, memories, pain n reunion...
Totally Beautiful...it is!!!
N a spcl. thanxx to u for that 'Tere bin nahi laage jiya' song...u remembered it...😳
I luvdd Ishita's character... I somewhere found myself in Teenager Ishita(age also same 😉)
Thank you soo much for this TS chotti...
N am really sorry that am unable to give proper ...
I hope u'll understand...'ll try to give proper comment if time permits!!
No gunnite n sweet dreams... Soja jaakar...kal school h na...
Study hard...make me proud!! 😊
Stay blessed dear!!


Hey Didu..🤗
Aapko toh hona hi tha na Didu...main apni Mumma ko kaise bhool sakti hoon.. 😛
Baap re so much tareef...main toh mar hi jaungi...well Thankxxx...ur appreciation means a lot to me coz u urself r a superb writer..
Kya di..koyi apni beti ko Thanks bolta hai... 😭
Jokes apart,TBH I realized tht u really wanted this song on IshRa...or u wouldn't hv posted a topic for tht OS...issliye yeh maine meri Mumma/Didu k liye kiya not for u... 😆
Even I... 😉 actually the feelings of teenager Ishita r somewhere my feelings... 😳
Its Okk...Didu aur iss comment ko chhota kehte ho...its big enough for me...
Ofcourse...Didu I will make u feel proud on ur baccha/chhoti...🤗

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