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Hello Beautiful Friends!

I'm here with a small OS. This is not based on the current track of our YHM. Hope you like it...

Note: In this IshRa haven't confessed yet.

And I know I have to update my SS but this is my 2500th post. So wanted it to be bit special, so giving an OS

And yeah, I dedicate this OS specially to my sister and mentor, My Mehku di (..Mehak..) 😃

Happy Birthday!!! 🥳 Have a great year ahead. This one's a small gift from my side on your birthday on one of your favorite songs (I have tried added the lyrics in between).Love you 🤗

Special thanks to my crazy sister (crazy_neha) for proofreading this for me

Hope you all enjoy it!!! 😳

------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- JEENA JEENA


It was normal day in Bhalla household. Kids went to school and raman to his Office. Ishita chose to stay at home as she was having no appointments for the day. Just then her phone rings


"Hello Dr.Ishita"


"Hello Dr.batra"


"Actually aapke paas jo patient no.12 ke papers hai, kya aap use bhej denge" [Can you please send the papers of patient no.12]


"Yaa sure. I'll come right away"


"No that's not needed. I'll send someone over"


"Okay"


She hanged the call and went to her room to search for the papers.


"Kaha rakhe hai? Drawer main... nahi cupboard main rakhe honge " [Where did I keep? In drawer...no I kept it in cupboard]


She rummaged her cupboard a bit and found the papers. She took it out and in that process a book fell down. She kept her papers aside and picked up the fallen book.


It was diary. "Yeh kiska hai" [Whom does this belong to?]


She opened the book. Name was written in bold letters "RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA"


"Aiyoo... Yeh toh raman ki diary hai. Yeah... Padhte hai" [This is Raman's diary.Yeah... Let's read]


She opens the first page.



06th January 2007

Today, Shagun and I went out for shopping. She brought...


"Arrey... mujhe yeh nahi padhna hai" [I don't want to read this]


She turned some more pages


18th December 2013

Ufff... these madrasis irritate a lot.


"Raman bhi na..."


14th February 2014

Aaj meri shaadi hai...who bhi kisse...with that irritating Miss.Iyer


"hmm... Irritating and me...hmph"


30th April 2014

I'm afraid of cockroaches



After few more pages



17th October 2014

Today she was looking extremely pretty in red dress.her hairs, minimal make-up..."


"This raman...he writes all useless things. Nothing interesting"


Just then, something interesting meets her eyes. The last page i.e, yesterday's date


14th June 2015

Whenever I see Ishita, I feel something different. Kuch kuch hota hai

I feel like...


Raman comes into room "Ishita someone's waiting..."


He stood shocked. His diary in her hands. He rushed near her and snatched it away from her.


"Arrey Raman. When did you come?"


"Tabhi jab tum jasoosi kar rahi thi" [When you were spying]


"Jasoosi?" [Spying?]


"Aur kya? Sharam nahi aati.Doosron ki diary padhte huve" [Then what? Aren't you ashamed of reading other's diary]


"Kuch bhi" [Anything]


"Yeh meri nahi mihir ki diary hai" [This is not mine but Mihir's diary]


"Accha toh phir do na" [Oh then give it to me]


"Bas karo yaar. Everything has limits. You can't check my...I mean my brother's diary like this"


"Wo mera bhi bhai hai na" [He is even my brother]


"Chup. Go down, some one's come from your clinic"


"Oh...papers"


She runs down taking the papers. Raman took a sigh of relief


"Agar padh leti toh mere dil ki baat pata chal jaati usko and uske liye surprise nahi hota. Ab even I'll confess tonight.Wait Ishita" [If she would have read it. It wouldn't be a surprise anymore]


He quickly emptied the contents of his bag. He took out a deep red sari and hanged it in her cupboard. He also kept the matching jewelry he had brought for her on the dressing table. He left the place taking the diary with him.


He again left for office. Ishita went for searching his diary again.


"Kaha rakha hoga? Kya likha tha usme? What if raman wants to tell what I want to hear. May be or maybe not. Oh god! Diary...where are you?"


She tries finding it everywhere but in vain. She finally quits and settles on her bed. She again looks at the whole room. She notices a new sari hung with her old ones. She goes and picks it


"Raman might have given it." She hugs it


She turns to the mirror and keeps the sari on her and also notices the box of jewelry. Her happiness grew no bounds after this. She decided to confess her love for him today what so ever may happen.


She cooked up a plan and sent everyone out. Now she was alone and Raman was yet to come. She changed into the red sari and clad herself with the jewels, applied some minimal make-up and prayed for the clock to tick faster.


She dimmed the lights of the room, arranged some candles and flowers and eagerly waited for Raman to turn up.


Raman came home "Arrey itna andhera kyu hai?" [Why is it so dark here?]


He found his lady love seated in front of the mirror. He smiled and walked towards her.


Dehleez pe mere dil ki

Jo rakhe hain tune kadam

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum


He saw her fully dressed in what he wanted to see her. He was extremely happy. He went and rested his chin on her shoulder and stared at her in the mirror.


Haan seekha maine jeena jeena kaise jeena

Haan seekha maine jeena mere humdum

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena

Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum


He mouthed to her - beautiful and winked at her. She blushed at his words and looked down.


Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

She made her stood up and lifted her chin. They shared an eye-lock. He smiled at her


Sacchi si hain yeh taareefein

Dil se jo maine kari hain...

Jo tu mila to saji hain

Duniya meri humdum


He told " Bahot khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Waise you wanted to know right, what was written in that diary" [You're looking very pretty]


She replied "yes"


He said "Suno" and took out his diary. [Listen]


O aasma mila zameen ko meri

Aadhe aadhe poore hain hum

Tere naam pe meri zindagi

Likh di mere humdum


Raman "Iss main yeh likha hai ki - " [It is written that-]


Ishita "Jaldi bolo na" [Say it quickly]


He read aloud " Ishq tujhse karta hoon Main zindagi se zyada,

Main darta nahi maut se Teri judaai se zyada,


Chahe to azmale mujhe Kisi aur se zyada,

Meri zindagi me kuch nahi Teri mohabbat se zyada."


(My note: Howz this? I'm asking kyunki main shayar toh nahi 😳. Hope I made some sense here 😛)


"I Love you Raman" she hugged him


Raman "I love you too meri pagal madrasan"


Haan seekha maine jeena jeena, kaise jeena

Haan seekha maine jeena, mere humdum

Na seekha kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena

Na seekha jeena tere bina humdum


They shared a long hug till their hearts felt content.

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Thanks in advance for reading this

Drop your valuable comments may it be good or bad.

Love you all 🤗


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Res...
Will unres in a short while...

~~Unres~~
First of all, congrats Vidya you're a dazzler now!🥳🥳I'm sure you'll become a rocker very soon!

I'm the second one to comment! And coming to the OS, it was beautiful. I loved their simple yet satisfying confession. LOL Ishu's jasoosi mode on and she's reading Raman's diary, loved it just wished to have read more about the parts where he talked about Ishu, but still loved the way you wrote it! And I just want to mention, loved that small poem you wrote, so well written! And "I'm scared of cockroaches.😆" typical Raman there, loved it. Thanks for the wonderful OS! Keep writing fabulously and dazzling.😉


And a Happy Birthday to ..Mehak.. as well!
Edited by smilesforever98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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res

unres

hey, kiddo...lots of sorry to u dear. I know i am hell late o congratulate you. please accept my apology and forgive me. lots of congratulations to u baccha on becoming dazzler. finally u became dazzler 😛

now back to story. jeena jeena is one of my most fav songs whom I love to hear almost daily. it is not less then a ritual for me to hear this and reading this story brought smile on my face

the story is so beautiful vidu trust me. yaa ishita is not less then a angel of his life and her entry made his life beautiful like heaven. his diary writing and attempts to hide from her was so good. he didn't liked to sad her but he also wanted to surprise her. 👏

I liked the evening scene. where she was getting ready and he kept his chin on her shoulder. such kind of scenes are always looks so soulful. their confession was simple but sweet and hug was the perfect ending and yup ur shaayari...yahan par wats app ka clapping icon nahi hai varna I will defo used it. keep going girl bcz u seriously write so well. waiting for more stories from you

PS: u know n where I am busied now these days? just tying to spam sp, pray to god that they heard our requests. lots of loves to u as always
Edited by aarohi26 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Viddo, I love you. Res ;)

-edited-

It was so sweet of you Viddo to dedicate your 2500th post to me. I'm touched by your suprise. That's why you were asking me about my favourite song huh? You are too smart. :P Congo yar on becoming a Dazzler. 🤗 and coming to your OS. It was love. <3 loved your shayari and their simple love confession. It was so sweet and amazing at a same time. Ishu wearing Red Saree for Raman. Awww <3 loved it Jana. Amazing once again. :D
Love you baby, my Bacha. :D
Edited by ..Mehak.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Vidya become new Dazzler in YHM town.🥳🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely and cute os..
Really superb..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..Who wrote dat poem..Itis really good yaar..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats Vidya for becoming a dazzler.
Happy Birthday Mehak

It is double party time 🥳

Very nice OS
Thanks for the PM
Edited by mayasundar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...
meri pyaari behna is a dazzler nw.
Congratz baby.
Coming 2 OS,
It's so beautiful.
Story se zyaada I loved this line, 'oh god! Diary, where r u?'
"As if it answer her, 'oh dr, don't worry. I'm in hands of ur pyaari pati dev.' "
This is the thought came 2 my mind at the moment I read that line.
Me too talk with things around me smtimes like that.
Lovely story dr. I felt like I'm watching an ishra scene in the show.
That poem is really beautiful. U wrote it?
Bt I didn't understand the word 'azmale'. It's a new word 2 me. What's the meaning of it?
U distracted me frm the story by putting those lyrics. These days I'm going so crazy about jeena jeena. Yday got time 2 download it and in all my free time I listened it.
Hey, just came 2 my mind, write a story about ishra's diaries na? They sharing their secret feelings with diary and accidently read each others. It'd b so lovely story. Bt feel that idea is so stupid.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beutiful OS Vidya raman and his diary. Lucky Ishu not read all the pages. What in Poem writing please translate to english(pm also ok.) I always love Ishu wear red color it suit her skin tone.thank you for the Pm dear.🤗 HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO MEHAK.🥳🥳

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