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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 5


Ishita was looking into him.She was disheartened by knowing that he still doesn't recognise her.She thought its not his fault if he doesn't recognise her but its not her fault either that she love him unconditionally.A lone tear dropped from her eyes,she quickly wiped it but it doesn't go unnoticed by him.

Raman-Hey ishita don't cry I know its difficult for you to survive without ur beloved ones but u can't help it.

His concern for her brought memories of the past and she just can't stop her and hugged him tightly At first he was startled by her action but when he found she was sobbing he just let her do that.He was caressing her hair to the length and consoling her.She was crying hard because he doesn't know her but he thought she was crying because he reminds her of her parents.Both were sitting in the same position unless ishita realize her position she immediately shift and mouthed a sorry.

Raman-its ok do u want to talk

Ishita -no can we go home

Raman-ya sure but I want to spend some more time with u .I like ur company.

She smiled listening to him and replied I have a job in hand to do .

Raman -ok lets go

As they stand up and started walking it started raining.He just ran towards the car but she just stand right there and getting drenched in rain .

Raman-come ishita u will get sick.

Ishita -I don't care feeling rain on myself is the most favourite thing for me and I just love it.come on u also feel the rain it will give you immense pleasure.

Raman-I don't want pleasure u please come .

Ishita -no I will not and if u want then come catch me .

Saying so she started running.Raman thought giving challenge to Raman Kumar Bhalla is not good now just watch what I do.Thinking that he started following her.She was running and hewas following herbut could not catch her.Her saree got stuck andshe was about to fall just on time he pulled her and make him stand.She was panting heavily and laughing hard.She was looking very beautiful and he was gazing at her like anything.Suddenly she realized his gaze and look down to avoid his piercing gaze.He hold her chin and make her look at him.They were inches apart and before she could react he claimed her lips.She was stunned by his act and want topush him away but her body was melting in his arms and apart from pushing him away she pulled him towards herself and started responding to his assault.Taking it as asignal he deepen the kiss.For her it was the kiss of longingness and for him it was the kiss of passion and desire.They were standing in the rain and kissing each other senselessly.His hands were caressing her bare back and just pulled that single string which is holding her blouse.In a reflex she just turned and settled comfortably in his arms and he started dropping wet kisses on her shoulder.Her legs were giving up and anytime she will be on the ground if Raman had not hold her.She was enjoying his dominance over herself and she was ready to surrender herself to him but there was a thundering in the sky and her trance was broken.She realized her position and immediately covered herself.


Ishita-drop me home

Raman-but ishita,ishita cut his talk in between and mouthed a please.

Raman-ok u wait here and he go towards the car and brought a jacket and covered her.

Raman smiled and said -I don't want anybody to see u like this.
Ishita smiled at him and walked towards the car.the way back to hotel was a silent affair.Ishita came out of the car and said thankyou.

Raman walked out of the car and said -I should say thanks to u u have made my day and I just want to spend more time with you and gave a quick peck on her cheek.she blushed.


IN ISHITA QUARTER

She was laying in the bed and thinking about the date.How can I let it happen,how can I let somebody touch me but he was not anybody but he's Raman he is not a stranger and you love him ishu but he don't love me.i should stop him or its better if I stop meeting him .Yes it is right I should avoid him I can't bear one more heart break from him.Yes it is right I should avoid him.


NEXT DAY


In the evening marriage arrangements are being done .That was the day of simmi's marriage.Ishita thought she had avoided him full afternoon and she will do that further and tomorrow he will be gone and everything will be back to normal.She was wearing a red saree with long jhumkas,open hair and she was looking very beautiful and a pair of eyes was following her every move.

Finally it was the time of varmala Raman was looking for ishita but she was nowhere to be found.he asked the waiter and he replied room no 1056 guest called her urgently and since she a dedicated employee she just gone to his room

Raman-its parmeet room and he rushed towards the room.

IN PARMEET ROOM


Ishita -please let me go.

Parmeet -with much difficulty I got a hand over u how can I let u go if u want to go u can go but after fulfilling my desire of having you.saying so he approached her and ripped her saree in a go.


To be continued


That's all for now if u guys want quick update then comment fast
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Yaar u have stopped it here
Plz continue soon and coming to the update it's really nice
Hope Raman save ishita and teach a lesson to parmeet
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Its chotu update yar...end was scary...

Kiss was hot...I loved ishra and rain romance.
What will happen next...

Waiting to see when raman will fall in love with her.
And past to be disclosed
Update soonish
Pm me if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
nice update
hope raman sahi time
pe ajaye n parmeet ki toh
bad bajne wali hai wating early continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
O shut this parmeet;->;->
god ,raman save ishita:-(


ishra drench in romance..wow their first kiss;-),first hug;-)
PUTTAR TUM ETHNA JALDHI MAI KYU HO..U WANT TO TAKE THAT STEP;-) ...

i think their is a past which related to ishra..when they are in childhood..:-(

if raman remembered ishita..he turn as a arrogent ,rude to her..chance is their..

This parmeet incident may bring ishra close;-)

mr.bhallaji take the step to protect ishita and bring her to bhalla house...:-D:-D:-D

its my prediction re..:-D:-D:-D:-Dit will give spice to story.if they stay in same roof ..but it will take place ... before she come to bhallas house..raman should know the past ...;-);-)

After that ...nok jokh..fighting...oho

ha ha ha kya dream hai mera..:-D:-D:-D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: super_cutie

Yaar u have stopped it here

Plz continue soon and coming to the update it's really nice
Hope Raman save ishita and teach a lesson to parmeet





Thanks dear for liking my work will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: --abha--

Its chotu update yar...end was scary...

Kiss was hot...I loved ishra and rain romance.
What will happen next...

Waiting to see when raman will fall in love with her.
And past to be disclosed
Update soonish
Pm me if possible




Sorry dear can't pm you don't know how to do
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: divazfankau

nice update
hope raman sahi time
pe ajaye n parmeet ki toh
bad bajne wali hai wating early continue soon




Will continue soonish
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: janani_divan

O shut this parmeet;->;->
god ,raman save ishita:-(


ishra drench in romance..wow their first kiss;-),first hug;-)
PUTTAR TUM ETHNA JALDHI MAI KYU HO..U WANT TO TAKE THAT STEP;-) ...

i think their is a past which related to ishra..when they are in childhood..:-(

if raman remembered ishita..he turn as a arrogent ,rude to her..chance is their..

This parmeet incident may bring ishra close;-)

mr.bhallaji take the step to protect ishita and bring her to bhalla house...:-D:-D:-D

its my prediction re..:-D:-D:-D:-Dit will give spice to story.if they stay in same roof ..but it will take place ... before she come to bhallas house..raman should know the past ...;-);-)

After that ...nok jokh..fighting...oho

ha ha ha kya dream hai mera..:-D:-D:-D






Nice storyline dear but this is not going to be like that saved ur idea for next story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutieruhi






Nice storyline dear but this is not going to be like that saved ur idea for next story



im a reader not a writer..i just imagined to myself to laugh myself.if i hurt u sorry for that

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