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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 7



Ishita was laying in the bed besides Raman looking his face.He was sleeping and she was thinking how her life turned 360 degree upside down.When she became gods favourite that he granted her single wish.How her prayers has been answered in the form of her husband her Raman .A smile crept on her face on the word husband.A single word changed her life for ever for good and she can't wish for anything more.She was reliving the moment spend with him ,his touch which have the power to look into her soul.Her years of loneliness came to an end when he loved her,touched her,kisses her.Whatever happened tonight will always be treasured in her memory.A lone tear escape from her eyes and fell on Raman cheek .He stirred in his sleep,ishita came closer and cuddles him in her arms like he is her most prized possession.


Ishita kissed his forehead lovingly then his eyes then his cheeks and his earlobe.

Raman -ishita what are u doing let me sleep I am tired.

Ishita -no I will not let you sleep who sleeps on his first night.

Raman -I sleep because I am tired.

Ishita -no I will not talk to me naa

Raman-eyes closed -go on I am listening

Ishita -ok then tell me how much u love me

Raman opening his eyes said this much.Saying so he captured her lips and started kissing her first softly then passionately and start exploring her naked body firstly by his hands which later replaced by his lips and started making love over and over again.Tired out of their make out sessions both slept hugging each other.


IN THE MORNING

Raman open his eyes only to see her fully showered and changed into a blue anarkali suit.Raman said shit I missed the morning session and winked at her .She smiled and said wake up and get ready I have a surprise for u .

Raman-don't u know how to wish ur husband good morning

And pulled her towards himself and before she can protest he starts kissing her lips in between he said u r beautiful ishita I can love u day and night .he wants to love her once more but she pushed her inside the washroom.

When he came out ishita was nowhere to be found.

Raman-ishita where are u come out.and then he feel somebody hand from his back whose tieing a ribbon onhis eyes

Raman-what u are upto wanna make blind love

Ishita -dirty mind always have that on ur mind I said na I have a surprise for you just be a little patient

Raman-ok


Ishita took her to the lobby than inside a room and many people shouted SURPRISE

Raman was startled and took off his ribbon only to see his parents,simmi and mihir standing there and ishita was standing with them.


Simmi-bhai ur a rockstar atlast u chooses a girl of my choice.

Mrs. bhalla-I am very happy for both of u.

Mr. Bhalla-I amvery proud of u son

Mihir -u r such a jerk yaar done so much and not let anyone know.

Ishita -do u like the surprise


Raman who was shocked to see them now understood its ishita plan.He shouted at the top of his voice HOW DARE YOU DO THAT WHAT DO YOU THINK OF URSELF.

Everyone was shocked by his yelling.

Mr. bhalla-what is this ?why are u shouting like this?u love her she loves you than what's the problem.

Raman-the problem is that that I don't love her

Ishita started sobbing -what are u telling Raman u said u loved me.


Raman oh ho u know my name u know me then u should have understood that I am playing with uu are just a time pass


Ishita -but why aisa kyon kiya mere saath Maine kya bigaada Tha tumhaara Ki duniya Mein hazzaron khilone hone ke baad bhi tumne khelne ke liye mere dil ko choona.(why what bad I have done to u that u played with my heart.


Raman-listen don't have to be over dramatic its nothing personal its just I bet on u.



FLASHBACK

When Raman ran behind ishita and couldn't find her He comes back to the counter

Parmeet-gone u couldn't get her I must say she is mind-blowing man


Raman -ya she is good

Parmeet-I will make her mine before ur sister marriage.

Raman-you can't do that

Parmeet-u don't trust me naa ok let bet who can win her

Raman -let it be yaar she seems to be a good girl.

Parmeet-ur afraid naa that u will lost


Raman -Raman is not scared of losing ok bet I will win her before simmi marriage.


FLASHBACK ENDS

Raman-toh tumhe kya laga Ki mujhe pyaar ho gaya tumse .Aukaat kyahai tumhari Ki tum Mrs. Raman Kumar bhalla banane ke sapne dekho(what you thought I fell in love with u what ur standard that u dream of becoming my wife.



Ishita was stunned by his words and chattak hewas slapped..


He turn to the hand who slapped him and found it belongs to his mother

Raman -maau slapped me for her


Mrs bhalla-I should have slapped you earlier so u shouldn't done such a disgusting thing to any girl


She go towards ishita and fold her hand

Mrs. bhalla-I am sorry ishita for whatever he done to you its ur fault to love him but I will rectify ur and his fault.He promised to marry u naa I will make him marry u


Ishita -no aunty if loving him is my mistake then I shouldn't commit one more mistake by marry him.

Saying so she walked towards Raman

Ishita-Raman Maine tumse bahut pyar kiya hai isliye chahoon toh bhi tumhe baddua nahi de sakti par tumhare liye ek dua jaroor mangongi Ki jo tumne mere saath kiya koi tumhare saath naa kare.(I always loved u so can't talk evil about u but want to pray the god that what you do to me nobody ever does to you)good bye and take care Raman


Saying so she walked outside the room her eyes were moist her heart was broken her soul was shattered




TUNE DIL MERA TODA

KAHIN KA NAA CHODA

SANAM BEWAFA

THAT'S ALL FOR NOW
NOW I WANT MORE AND LONG COMMENTS
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Posted: 10 years ago
#62
I know something is fishy...RKB is jerk...Ishitaa should be careful...I am feeling bad for her...

Well written but I hate Raman...Make sure he suffer too much before reunion...


Loved the Ishitaa answer...No need to be with a creep...Lets stand straight...Param is cheap so is Raman...


Looking forward for Raman Redemption...


Continue Soon...


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Edited by --abha-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
I feel like crying for ishitha yaar
Raman is such a jerk
I want him to get punishment for this yaar
And very beautifully written
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64
I am crying ...how could Raman do this to her? He should be punished...its a beautiful update. .looking forward...waiting for next update eagerly
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Now what is dis new twist??? Raman is such a jerk . Der is no difference between param and raman... Bechari ishita she is totally heart broken for d second tym hope he will realise his mistake
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: --abha--

I know something is fishy...RKB is jerk...Ishitaa should be careful...I am feeling bad for her...


Well written but I hate Raman...Make sure he suffer too much before reunion...


Loved the Ishitaa answer...No need to be with a creep...Lets stand straight...Param is cheap so is Raman...


Looking forward for Raman Redemption...


Continue Soon...


pm me if possible






Thanks for liking dear will try to update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: super_cutie

I feel like crying for ishitha yaar

Raman is such a jerk
I want him to get punishment for this yaar
And very beautifully written
Thanks for the PM
Waiting for next update





Thanks for liking Raman will be punished for his doing
Will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sri1091

Now what is dis new twist??? Raman is such a jerk . Der is no difference between param and raman... Bechari ishita she is totally heart broken for d second tym hope he will realise his mistake





He will realize his mistake
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Posted: 10 years ago
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update soonish..hope raman will realize his mistake..update soon...love yr story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read part 6-7 are very good update . But it sad of the turn of event Raman is hurt Ishu and her love so badly.i want to know too why the beginning Ishu leave him and now she will leave him forever. I am glad Raman parents know everything and Accept Ishu. Now I will see how Ishu will deal with him. Raman not regret for everything and he still not remember Ishu .Actually the mistake also half done by Ishu too cause she let her love cross the boundary and higher than her dignity that she save for herself long time. Will wait for next update. Thank you for fabulous update dear.😊

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