#3 - Char Kadam: IshRa FF (Note on 24, Epiogue on 26)

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..TeriDeewani..

@..TeriDeewani..

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#141

Originally posted by: .Harshita.

Tujhe bade majje aa rahe hain??? 😡 😡 😡 😆

Didu main aapki side le rahi thi...😭😭
@Mano di...Bechaare humaare Jiju...aisa kya karte aap k woh yeh kahe?? 😉

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asma18

@asma18

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#142

Sab se pehle aapko. .#3 thread k liye. .
congratulations. ...aaise hi aap k aur humare
chaar kadam badhte rahe. .
ooho last part bhi aagaya maine
dekha nahin
😭
..thoda busy iss liye check nahin kiya
ramazan ki taiyari mein busy thi. .
...
66 part superb tha. .

Ishita n gang ne milkar bechare
raman ko budhu banaya. ..dekha jaye toh ye
raman k liye accha tha. ..woh ishita k sath
time spend karsakta hai. .
...
par jab ishita ne kaha ye sab uss ne
apne guilt k liye kiya. ...Awww bechare ko phir se
Disappointment ka chera dekhna pada. .
...par jald hi ishita ne apne feelings ko samjha ki uss
ne jo kiya woh guilt nahin love hai jo woh raman se karti
hai. .

67 th part. .

kya kahen hum thnkx k humari request ko
accept kiya. ...
finally ishita ne. ...woh golden words jo raman one
year se wait karraha tha. ..ishita ne kehdiya. ...
...aaisi situation aur upar se barish. ...
Sahi hai boss. ...
song. ...

MASTANA MAUSAM HAI RANGEEN NAZARA.
...
HAYY my fav song ..aur woh bhi IshRa k
liye ye song mere liye aur bhi special hogaya. ...hai
...
thnkx dii,
In beautiful updates k liye. ...

rahi baat. ..
...
68 ...part k liye. ..jo abhi incomplete hai
toh humara. ..bhi comment incomplete mile
ga iss part k liye. ...
...bas itna kahongi k plzzz
update soon. ...

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Gaya3sb

@Gaya3sb

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#143

So the Char Kadam Saga came to an E.N.D 😭
It's a special story I used to enjoy in every bit
Gonna miss it
Try to continue if possible 😆

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Balasri

@Sri1091

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#144

Thanks for d awesome story dear... Loved every bit of it... 😊

Will miss char kadam 😭

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#145

readdd both the parts!! OMG!! i wana cryy.. Chaar kadam ends here! its painful but truly truly a beautiful superb romantic, poetic kahani... i loved it soo muchhh that i might read all the parts once more! <3 my favouriteee!!!

Do write moree!!! ur works are too awesomeee that i just hooked without myself realizing!

Lots of love to u for writing such a beautiful story and entertaining us in true sense with all the fun and suspense!

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Sreelakshmi

@AngelSREE

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#146

Omg omg omg I don't knw what condition I m in now...

My char kadam sach mea kadam hogaya...😭

This is my most fav story...

The last part... Wonderful marvellous fabulous jo kuch tareef bare words ho vo sab kuch add kardo...

Knock Knock

"Maanvir"

(Author) "Kya hua Ishita?"

"Ab tum hi hamari madad kar do"

(Author) "Your wish is my command!"

Lights Off!

Curtain Closed!

Volume muted!

(Author) "Ab na kuch dikhayi dega, na sunayi dega. Ishita Raman you continue!"

What is this di... Omg I can't stop laughing when I read this... U r a genius...

Will miss this char kadam very much... Very much means very much...

Is kahani ka anth ho sakti hai,

par ye CHAR KADAM to ab CHAR KANDHON par hi khatm hogi!

This is very touchy lines...

Waiting for the great epilogue...

BTW diii... Promise me that u will write a next story soon...

I knw u r going to be busy... But... Plz...

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Isha Pathare

@Isha_Pathare

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#147

itna aacha update tha par mujhe bura kyun lag raha hai ...feel like crying 😭 😭

update bhar has has ke loot poot hogayi but the end yet not the end made me sad

fav serial khatam hone pe bhi itna bura nahi laga tha mujhe 😒 jitna aaj lag raha hai

the update was damn hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

and i loved that you didn't wrote END but your trend question 😉

waiting for epilogue

bhai ramu aur ishu ke bachaa party se bhi milao 🤣

i am going miss you and chaar kadaam 😔

jalidi aana di

loved this line

Is kahani ka anth ho sakti hai,

par ye CHAR KADAM to ab CHAR KANDHON par hi khatm hogi!

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swaram

@swaram

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#148

Awesome Maanvir!👏👏👏

It was such an enjoyable journey. You have this brilliant clarity and aesthetics in your writing, each part was like poetry . Do keep writing and hope you come up with another beautiful story for us to relish. Thank you so much!🤗

Edited by swaram - 10 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#149

this was awesome
beautiful
awww in char kdmoki adat hume bhi pd gyi hain
kya karain?? last part ...:(
epilogue jaldi dena ha
hayeee u r writing is something which i always wanted to read