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Posted: 10 years ago
Gaya 3 I really love this part update. It had ll feeling in this chapter. Ishu get hurt by Raman encounter with her and she fight back and let him know all the women are not the same. He thought when he touch her and she response to his touch will lead to something that he waiting for but no not Ishu. I like she tell him when he get satisfied with her he will throw her out but she will not let that happen.then come with the heat argument Raman said she is his so he will not let her go.and then the challenge happen Ishu know Raman well so she will teach him a lesson not to play with girls.Raman got jeoalous with Abhi when he saw Ishu with him oh wow now he declar this part I like the most too. " You did a big mistake by touching Raman Kumar Bhalla .'s girl" 👏👏 now he feel possesive that he never feel lie this to any women before. How Ishu so,proud at this point. I am sure next update argument with this two guys will be more spicies. Will wait for next update. Really Love this update my dear. Thank for the Pm.👏👏 I hate to be first one to give comment if I made mistake pls forgive me.Wait for other to give comment since whole afternoon but no one here. So here you go girl.😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow amazing!!!!
I don't like abhi with ishu...
Please update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
That was shocking Gaya...

Haven't expected this raman...u really bring amazing twist...Loved fiesty ishu...I mean wow she give back to fight...But Raman really messed it...Hope ishu forgive him...or we may get some manaofying session. ...But yar Raman is totally possessive about her SHE IS HIS...One of the most imp person...big change...He doesn't look at other woman except his...

So abhi knows the truth...Ab ayega maza...I am really excited yar...Thats bad when I decided which one is my fav of ur story u bring twist in other one that I have to change my decision. ...okay I am done boring u...

Amazing it was...Continue soon...Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update...keep it up...👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
Bomb plant kar diya hai dhamaka hona baki hai 😉 abb yeh tho dek ne wali bath hai ki yeh girl kis ki girl banegi 😉😆 so mr rkb get redy for a blow 😆 u will do anything to have her 😉 acha. If that anything is love 😉 thab bhi. U will love her to have her aaa 😆 the real game is on I m so liking it
ishu ke maan mai ladu phuta 😆 very very interesting game ke andar game or us ke andar ek aur game 😉 but I am hating mr lust Kumar 😭 and waiting for this ravan to transform into ram 😆 which I know will happen but fully transform hoga ya Nahi is ka no idea 🥱 ok ravan Kumar thu karle jitney bhi sitam hass hass ke sahengay hum 😃 all the worst for the best rkb

Super update thanks for pm 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
its so beautifully presented . awesome update . The story is going to be a memorable one. continue soon. .
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Posted: 10 years ago
raman forcing on ishu is looked lik rude bt i enjyd their kiss...
whn raman said dnt play with me...ts awesome...

raman bhalla possesive nd jealous...superb...

i nvr expctd abji wil kiss ishita with out her concern...

finally spelled it out tht she is his..

bt i want to knw wht wil raman do if she cmes to knw tht laxmi is ishita...??

ishita feeling happy when raman argued with abhi is unexpctd... she is hating raman bt feeling good when raman shws right on her...

waiting fr next...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: usaonly

Gaya 3 I really love this part update. It had ll feeling in this chapter. Ishu get hurt by Raman encounter with her and she fight back and let him know all the women are not the same. He thought when he touch her and she response to his touch will lead to something that he waiting for but no not Ishu. I like she tell him when he get satisfied with her he will throw her out but she will not let that happen.then come with the heat argument Raman said she is his so he will not let her go.and then the challenge happen Ishu know Raman well so she will teach him a lesson not to play with girls.Raman got jeoalous with Abhi when he saw Ishu with him oh wow now he declar this part I like the most too. " You did a big mistake by touching Raman Kumar Bhalla .'s girl"👏👏now he feel possesive that he never feel lie this to any women before. How Ishu so,proud at this point. I am sure next update argument with this two guys will be more spicies. Will wait for next update. Really Love this update my dear. Thank for the Pm.👏👏I hate to be first one to give comment if I made mistake pls forgive me.Wait for other to give comment since whole afternoon but no one here. So here you go girl.😊😊


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Anyways, thank you so much for the review Jum 😃
I'm so happy that you liked it.
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sush_avina

Wow amazing!!!!

I don't like abhi with ishu...
Please update soon


Thanks dear...
Abhi & Ishu...just to make Raman realise something... 😉
Will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --abha--

That was shocking Gaya...

Haven't expected this raman...u really bring amazing twist...Loved fiesty ishu...I mean wow she give back to fight...But Raman really messed it...Hope ishu forgive him...or we may get some manaofying session. ...But yar Raman is totally possessive about her SHE IS HIS...One of the most imp person...big change...He doesn't look at other woman except his...

So abhi knows the truth...Ab ayega maza...I am really excited yar...Thats bad when I decided which one is my fav of ur story u bring twist in other one that I have to change my decision. ...okay I am done boring u...

Amazing it was...Continue soon...Thanks for pm


It's fun giving you shocks 😆
Thanks for loving my stories dear
Will continue soon

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