SS___MANNMARZIYAN___Part-22 Pg-126 PART-23 PAGE 136 updated - Page 23

Originally posted by: shreepatil.

nice ss. loved it.

Thank you 😊

Thanks for pm :-)
Again tum "U TURN MARI AUTHOR SAIBA":->:->:->

DAMAKA DAR UPDATE:-D:-D:-D
u break the pot quickly without any confusion...readers prediction may spoil the taste of plot..

SO U CLEAVERLY PLAY THE GAME AUTHOR JI

coming to the point.. i give new name to raman;-)
VOILENT KUMAR:-P:-P:-P:-P

RAMAN AND ISHITA ENCOUNTER:
yeh raman and ishita encounter nahi hai..yeh hamara author and readers encounter..bcoz we hell shock with VOILENT KUMAR ACTION:-P

I:i'd like to come along with mani...(NAGA MANI)B-)B-)B-).I THINK OR SHOULD DATE SOME1 TO STOP SOME JERKS.

HER WORDS DIRECTLY HIT TO HIM...SHE OPEN UP AND TAKE STAND FOR HER..IT IS A GOOD MOVE:-):-):-)

CONFUSSION KUMAR:then why in the hell did you,RESPOND?
I:LOUDLY"DON'T KNOW"
yes she respond to his touch..bcoz of harmones overworking and out of her control.

Bcoz of her words LUSTKUMAR TURN TO VOILENT KUMAR:->:-/:-/:-(:-(
HE TOOK HER LIPS IN A VOILENT KISS...;-);-);-);-)

Kitni bar kaha hai iss ladki ko..LUST KUMAR SE PANGE MATH LENA...ABH DEKO KYA HOGAYA..DAMAGE HOGAYA...HUU BUKDHO:->:->:->

INTERSTING THOUGHT...

I:if it was before he asked her out to have XXX...WITH HIM.SHE WOULD HAVE RESPONDED...;-);-);-);-);-)

:-O:-O:-Oif he not ask her for XXX ..SHE WOULD HAVE RESPONDEDB-)B-)B-)...E KYA BATH KAR RAHAHAI ..SHE JUST SAID THAT...?:-P:-P:-P

He continued to drink her%-)%-)
I JUST FEEL SHY OF THIS ANTICTS BY RAMAN:he leaned again to take her lips but she pursed it up...HE PINCHED HER WAIST CAUSING HER TO OPEN HER MOUTH TO LET OUT A CRY.THEN HE BITTED HARD ON HER LOWER LIP AND WHISPERED IN A MEANANCING VOICE,"DONT DARE PLAY ME...U GOT IT...";-);-);-);-)

I:U CAN'T FORCE YOURSELF ON ME MR.BHALLA...
yea tum chup kar already damage huwahai..KITINI BOLTHI HAI YAAR...

This man don't have any feelings...AYYO FEELINGS HAINA LUST FEELINGS;-);-);-)

U DON'T EXPECT ANY CONCERN FROM THIS MAN...IT WILL TAKE TIME BABY...WAIT FOR THE WONDERFUL SWEET TIME;-);-)

i'm clear to u,you cannot REJECT RAMAN BHALLA..U R MINE AND MINE ONLY..:-/:-/:-/

O NOW HE IS REJECT KUMAR :-O:-O:-O
ISHITA AND RAMAN ARGUMENT:
I:till when?
R:CASUALLY,"I DON'T KNOW?
;->:->;->JERK;->;->
I:YOU'LL THROW ME D NEXT MOMENT U MANHOOD GETS SATISFIED;-(;-(
she directly hit the pot...

R:AFTER ALL U'RE JUST A WOMEN;->;->;->

"AND THE ONLY WOMEN WHOM U CANNOT BED WITH"
tum kyu uss ko lecture dhe rahi ho...HE WANT ACTIONS NOT LECTURES;-);-):-D:-D

may be u can force..i wont give away to u with all my heart..issko nahi patha what is the difference b/w LUST AND LOVE:-P:-P:-P:-P

SO HE WANT TO MAKE A DEAL WITH HER...;-);-);-)

YES ISHITA NOW NOT SCARED FOR HIM ...bcoz she hurted by his so called XXX DEAL..;->;->

ISHITA POV:
I WAS DEAD THE MOMENT HE ASKED ME OUT TO HAVE XXX...;-(;-(;-(;-(

PEEL OF MY SKIN,WHENEVER I REMEMBER HIM TOUCHING ME...;-(;-(;-(

HE MADE ME DIRTY...HOW COULD I LET HIS HAPPEN...

I Cried out loud siting on a corner inside the bathroom..

YEH BOTHROOM MAI RONAIKA TIME NAHI HAI ...UNKA ROOLA NAIKA TIME...BE READY FOR ACTIONB-)B-)B-).

PARTY AVENUE:
so mihika in full swing to play prank on raman with the help of her ANTI-LUST KUMAR GROUP...:-P:-P
her akka spoil her game ..coming along with mani...so called NAGAMANI:-D

flirt bhalla also entered the venue before ishita.yeh flirt bhalla kab bangaya...FLIRT IS BETTER THAN LUST :-P:-PHE ALWAYS WANT LUST:-P:-P:-Praman doesn't like the company of mihika...:->:->

IS SHE REALLY A GIRL...?:-D :-D:-DHA HA HA:-D:-D

raman shock to see laxmi and mani..oops with ishita
MADRASAN IS REALLY TRYING TO PLAY ME..!
Raman pov:
The two most important persons of my life.DON'T ASK ME WHEN SHE GOT IN TO THE LIST.I DNT KNW!

COUPLE DANCE:
firecracker forwarded her hand for a dance.it was for the first time" I'M TOUCHING A GIRL WITH THIS MUCH DISLIKE"

abhi and ishita affecting him...till he think abhi is a gentleman..and he already have his ishita...but when laxmi discomfort with abhi..he is in lots of question...

Ishita's every move affecting him badly..
Raman feeling restless to see laxmi with abhi...he losing her?lots of questions loaded in his mind..which were impossible for him to answer...bcoz she is d one whom i need to touch so badly...
Yes laxmi is discomfort with abhi.
WHY CANT HE STORE ALL THESE FOREPLAY FOR HIS ISHITA:-D:-D:-D:-D

HONESTLY I HATE THIS ABHI,HE ALMOST KISS ISHITA SHOULDER;->;->;->

I NEVER FELT THIS possessive for any women .how many of ex were dances sensuously with other men in front of me.i dnt mind,bcoz i newed them..

I CANT BEAR D TOUCH OF OTHERMAN...BCOZ SHE IS MINE...:-O:-O:-O
RAMAN MAKE HER SAALE FELL DOWN BCOZ OF BIWI:-P:-P:-P

OUT SIDE OF PARTY VENUE:
at last mani raised question ..why raman is behaving weirdly...raman split the truth:-(

"U DID A BIG MISTAKE BY TOUCHING RKB GIRL"
hearing this ishita in could9.
SHE WANTED HIM HERSELF FOR A LIFE TIME.SHE COULDN'T THINK OF LOSING HIM AFTER HEARING HIM.SO SHE CHOOSE NOT TO HAVE HIM":-O:-O:-O:-O
Hearing all this mani hell shocked...
CONTINUE IN NEXT POST..

A big sorry for long and boring comment.next time i make sure to give chotu update..:-(
My review:
raman ethna jaldi kaisai badhal saktha hai?it's take time to him to realise what is love..?
Jealous raman ko maina nahi dekha...I JUST FEEL HE IS NOW REJECTED BY A COMMON GIRL.WHO HE BADLY WANTED THATS IT.
JEALOUSY tab hotha hai...if we love some one..care for some one...yeh CARE,LOVE,RESPECT,CONCERN ,AFFECTION YEH SAB DOORKI BATH HAI RAMAN KE LIFE MAI..:-P:-P:-P

LOTS OF DRAMA IS THERE TO READ...READERS HAVE TO WAIT FOR THAT..AND MANI MAY TURN IN TO NEGATIVE..:-):-PB-):-O

i want to enjoy this LUST kumar more.;-);-);-)then, after that i want LOVE KUMAR

OMG what an update!

When will you lusty kumar will fall in love with ishita?? Or he already fall for her but didn't realise his feelings?? M confused now

Eagerly waiting for next part

Originally posted by: divazfankau

superb update
only mani ni shita
dance I don't like
thank god raman ne bata toh ishita hi
laxmi hai continue soon

Thanks dear...
Will continue soon 😊

Originally posted by: jiyaa02

OMG what an update!

When will you lusty kumar will fall in love
with ishita?? Or he already fall for her but didn't realise his feelings?? M confused
now

Eagerly waiting for next part

Lusty Kumar and love... 😉
I'm also confused 😆

Yes i want LUST KUMAR IN SOME MORE UPDATE...THODA THADAP NA CHAHIYE YEA..
after all ,lots of girls danced BY HIS TUNES.

So ek dance bantha hai bhai ..esska be..:-P
he should dance by One and only ishita tunes:-P:-P:-P

raman-ishita encounter😲
Gaya3,u make him devil kumar😆
i like not so innocent ishita's fight back
but at d same time she is falling 4 d devil😉
gentleman abhi is back
he kissed ishita...how dare he😡
now devil become too much possessive😉
he even didn't give any attention 2 other girls
upate soon dear😊

Originally posted by: rufana10

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raman-ishita encounter😲
Gaya3,u make him devil kumar😆
i like not so innocent ishita's fight back
but at d same time she is falling 4 d devil😉
gentleman abhi is back
he kissed ishita...how dare he😡
now devil become too much possessive😉
he even didn't give any attention 2 other girls
upate soon dear😊

Thanks for liking it dear 😊
You felt him Devil Kumar but I wanted to give the name Dirty Kumar 😛
I was wondering after writing it, what I've done with the RKB 😲