*RES*
*UNRES*
Shagun dead would have not affected me if it didnt hurt Raman but seems they had a good relation...painful to read she is no more in his life 😭😭
Writing a character like Raman isn't an easy one. I somehow feel connected to his character now. And it does hurt me too while writing it up.
Ishita Subbu break up again a sad thing
I enjoyed writing this part though 😆
Mihika already telling Ishita to think about Raman was in a way funny but poor Ishita undergoing the breakup trauma...felt really bad for her
Yeah! She finds him charming right! From the day 1, when she had a photoshoot with him. " Pain and cigarette are directly proportional. Cigarette and alcohol is more of a habit. The denial mechanism"
Liked this quote a lot
Me too. In fact I totally agree with it.
Though not same, kind of similar things happened with me as well. So I love the quote too.
Their second meeting was again so different
aiyo Ishita's entering the men's washroom and her blunt dialogs...god she is misunderstanding him so much
Because she was angry right?
Somehow comes and tell ps you that you just flatter around and not have cup if coffee with a fellow human being. And then you pop ip your middle finger and walk away. If I would have been in Ishita's place, I would have done the same. XD
Good bye 😭😭 these two words are so hurting...but good to see it was not a lamba wala bye...his way of asking her for dinner was so cute
Good byes hurt! Badly they do.
And you see the irony Di? Good byes a never good. They're such a pain. 😭
dinner was so sober and subtle...i so wanted him to tell her the truth about Shagun but lets see how it all goes ahead
First meeting right. He just wanted their bitter relation to get better.
He wanted to, but he didn't. Because somehow Raman didn't want sympathy from her.
walk upto the clinic 😊😊
Yeah *drool drool* 😃
Piyu i cannot believe you are writing this...this is so damn different from your earlier write ups
i am really happy to see you exploring different genres of writing
continue soon please...i have started to feel connected with this one finally now and i am eager to know how things turn ahead
Aww di! I'm glad that you're able to connect to finally. Exactly! You're write. My previous ones are more of romance, passion and love. I wanted to get out of that box and try out something new.
And to he honest, writing a romance is much more easier than writing about the pain that someone's heart bears.
Will continue soon. I'm sure you'll enjoy the other parts as well. 😃 *hugs*
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Lamba chauda analysis de diya xD 😆
(Bolds mein commented) :D
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