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Hey Pallavi dii
I have updated Part 2(whole story) of I AM SORRY written by friend Ambreen on page 135 of thread 1...

Hope its fine... not like the first time, all messed up...

hope you will like...

do give your valuable comments...
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Congrats for new thread. Dipa, amazing OS! Super loved it.
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What an inaugural os dipa
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Pallavi new thread Congo shongo
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Kaise Unhe Main Pukaron
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[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cjkz_N6rXk0[/YOUTUBE]

Gumsum gumsum gup chup, gumsum gup chup
Halchal halchal ho gayi teri, honth hai tere chup
Khalbal khalbal ho gayi teri, baithi hai tu gupchup

Ishita was seating in her room infront of the dressing table. few of her cousins were surrounding her. while someone was busy with her hairs, other was trying to make sure that her makeup was done perfectly. it shouldnt be over but it should be enough to make her beautiful facial features prominant. Mihika was busy pinning the duppata over her head that had to be followed on her shoulder. the single safety pin, that was tightly held in between her lips, was showing how concentrated she is.and why not, she was asked specially by Madhavi, Ishita's mother to look after everything aand being Ishita's bestfriend she was adamant that all came out perfect. Mihika choosed the sweet elbow length sleeved purple kameez having a patiala shalwar below. the silver work on the v-necked dress and on the sleeves was looking so pretty against her milky skinand Mihika made sure that the duppata is being wrapped in such a way that it will show that work. Ishita's lips were shinninh with a light gloss. her eyes were looking dazzling after kohl, eyeliner and mascara was applied on them. her cheeks were having the natural pink color, all credit to her blushes. her cousin's were mercilessly teasing her. "didi, tell us na...how r u feeling?" her younger cousin asked her in a teasing tone that made her face beet rooted red. "Ishita, are you too feelin butterflies in ur stomach like i felt for the first time your jeeju came to see me" now, her elder cousin aria asked in a dreamy tone. "didi" Ishita whinned with a cute face that made all her cousins giggled. "whats going on here?" Ishita mother asked as she entered the room and pushed all the girls aside to get close to Ishita "why are you teasing my Ishita?" she said with an affectionate tone hushing all girls away and turn to look at Ishita. "ohh..." a happy sound escaped from her mother's throat as she was unable to say anything else. Madhavi hands came up to cover her face as her eyes get teary. she cant believe that her daughter grew up so fast. it seems like yesterday she hold her for the first time in her hands while laying on that hospital bed. she was adoring her tiny baby but everytime, noticing her sweet features, and delicate body, all she qanted was to cherish this baby forever. time passed on quickly and now, her daughter is on the verge to start her own life. Ishita eyes too filled up seeing her mother teary, and getting up, she hugged her tightly. thekr hands were running on eachother backs, ensurring eachother that everything would be fine, and unknown to Madhavi and others, that hug gave her lots of confidence. "aunty, dont cry...see Ishita is also about to cry...and we havent worked so hard to let all that ruined by these awful tears...you both can have ur share after this rishta is finalized" Mihika comment
made all other smile as Madhavi break the hug and hushed her. "ok, i will call and then you can bring Ishita down" then she turnwd back to Ishita, applied a black mark behind her ars and after squeezing her hand, left the room.


Pyaare pyaare chehre lekar dediya ishaara
Dekha teri aankhon mein hai sapna koi pyaara
Humse gori naa tu sharma, kehde humse zara

Raman was sitting downstairs with his family. his parents Omprakash and Toshi Bhalla was just so happy that finally, there son has agreed to get married. was that easy? they had a whole lonf story to tell in the reply of this question but do they care. there son agreed and that was all that married. Raman cleared it before that he doesnt have any feelings for any girl and just was lingering on his wedding topic because he wanted to make his own name in his father's textile business and soon with his hard work and determination, he did it. he is 28 years old and really successful and now he kniw, as the struggling part is over, he would have time for his personal life too. Omprakash and Toshi immediately started the search of there to be bahu. while Omprakash wanted someone from fthe family of his business fellows, Toshi was out looking for a match with her kitty party friends daughter. Raman was fed up with the amount of pics, his parents showed to him and he was feeling so irritated. above that his sister, Rinki, instead of helping him, all will do is to laugh out loud on his miserable state as mostly he would b sitting in between his parents and each one will look at him with expactant eyes, and damn, he dont want to disapppoint any one. "then marry two girls, bhai" Rinki would chip in and all he wouldo is look daggers at her as she would giggle. "mom, dad...that enough..."finally he said one day. " i dont want to marry any business associate daughter or any kitty party's friends daughter...i want a simple girl...who will love to make this house a living heaven for me and for you with her love...not a business advisor or a party host, please" and that was the time, when his Pammi Massi came with an appropriate proposal and he agreed to go with it. Pammi Massi was close to Raman and knew him better than Toshi. Raman trusted her more than anyone so he even didn't dare look at the picture. and here, now, while sipping his tea, he was waiting for her entrance.

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile

soon, the shimmering voice of the anklet ring in his ears. Strange, even in such bustle of there families talking, he could feel a real soothing presence. the giggles erupted from a corner. a silence took place in the hall and he lifted up his face to see what cause it when his eyes saw and witnessed the beauty of a God creation. she was looking so delicate. her persona seems so enchanting. her downcasted lashes and her crimson cheeks completely explaining her nervousness. the girls beside her wete supporting her as she lead them to the place, Raman and his family was sitting. "beautiful" Raman heard his mother whisper and Rinki, who was sitting beside him, nudged her with a knowing look. Ishita came and took blessings from his parents who blessed her with happy chirpy voices. Rinki was being introduced by Pammi Massi who was a friend of Ishita's chachi. and Rinki moving forward, hugged her tightly. Raman was quietly peeking in between to see her and his heart doesn't have enough fill to admire her while his mind, doesnt seem to find enough words to define her. Mihika made her sit on the sofa, opposite to him, the competant boy for her best friend, looking at her in awe. she bend closer to Ishita's ear and whispered. "just once, look up and see, how handsome he is...and how dreamingly, he is looking at you" Ishita blushed at Mihika's comment but looked up for a fraction of a second only to get caught by the dazzling brown eyes, she had ever seen.


Armaan naye aise dil mein khile,
Jinko kabhi main naa jaanoon

the chatters in the room weren't able to distract there thoughts as they both were busy to think about each other. there parents send them out in the back yard so they can discuss a little but they were too shy to say anything. the silence between them was conveying more messages but the silence was broken by the giggles of Mihika and Rinki who were quietly observing them while standing in the back door. and just after few seconds, they were being pulled inside by them saying "you both have a long life to look at eachother" Mihika teased. "or may be, you both will like to stay silent more" Rinki giggled and they were took inside and got seated in there earlier place. "so Raman...what do you think?" Pammi Massi asked with a hopeful look. Raman turn to look at his parents who were looking at him with raised brows and a smile on there lips. before turning back to Pammi Massi, he took a glimpse of Ishita who seemed to be seating with a batted heart. a side loop smile graced his face as he look at Massi and nodded, blinking his eyes once as in approval. "YES" Massi shouted in excitement and her gaze quickly turn to Ishita's chachi, who was standing behind Ishita's sofa, indicating her to ask Ishita. "Ishita beta, what do you say?" Ishita's chachi asked in a motherly tone. all eyes were now fixed on her. Mihika, aria, her cousins, her parents, her uncles and aunt, Raman parents, Pammi Massi and Rinki were gazing at her, not wanting to miss her approval nod. Raman crossed his fingers at his back, looking down, hoping to hear a yes. Ishita was feeling so nervous now. her hands were trembling. she was feeling so conscious of herself. she nudged Mihika, asking her to get closer and then she whispered softly in her ear. "mujhe kabol hai" and that light a 440 volt smile on Mihika's face as she squealed "Ishita said yes" and Raman felt like the most blessed man at rhat moment. they both don't know, who pulled them and made them stand and who were hugging them till few moments. everyone was in celebration mood. sweets were brought on the tables by the ladies of the house and were stuffed into there mouths but they were in a situation where they cant say no. Rinki and Mihika clicked many of there pics with there stuffed mouth, just to keep it in record and later have something to tease these two. they were just about to get spared from the elders of the house, when Mihika and Rinki approached these two showing a big fat laddu stuck in between there finger tips. they have that grin that say how-can-u-escape-now. Raman and Ishita both made a face. so much to get into a relationship but they didnt dare complain and they took the whole laddu in there mouth at once as it was pushed by Mihika and Rinki. Raman and Ishita almost whined while Mihika and Rinki high-fived eachother.

Voh humse, hum unse kabhi naa mile,
Kaise mile dil naa jaanoon
Ab kya kare, kya naam le,
Kaise unhe main pukaaroon

Ishita changed into her night suit. a plain white kameez with a green patiala shalwar below. she get under her quilt and remember, how in a matter of few minutes, she became engaged from being single. though the official engagement is announced to be done after two weeks, Ishita was feeling something different about herself. she shook her head to push away these thoughts and got ready to welcome her sleep as she closed her eyes with a smile on her lips when that blazing enchanting brown eyes flashed infront of her. her smile broadened. "ok, no one can hear me now...so i can appreciate his looks" Ishita told herself with a shy smile as she tuck one of her hand under her head and other came to hold the first one's elbow. "he has amazing eyes...so deep...so clear" she whispered. and she just wish to fall into there depth one day. her closed eyes were now drifting down to notice her's imaginery Raman's cheek which was showing his deep dimple. "oh God!!!!" she cried softly. how her lips wanna kiss that place. her eyes were off to check his smile when the vibration of her cell, placed beside her on the bed, make her groan and on opening her eyes. she made an irritating face and turn in her bed to get hold of her mobile. a message from an unknown number greet her and as she opened it, her breath got caught in her lungs. it was a message from Raman.

" wish you a very good night.

Raman"

her heart was almost jumping with excitement seeing this msg. she kept on looking at the message for few minutes. her eyes were shinning with adoration. her lips were giving a wide smile. her hands were clutching the mob tightly. and that was the first time she took his name "Raman" so softly that a new sensation run inside her body. and that was the very first day, she went to sleep to dream about her Raman who replaced the face of a stranger, she used to imagine and dream about her life partner. surly, he was way much better than her imagination.

Pehli hi nazar mein kuch hum,
Kuch tum ho jaate hai yun gum
Nainon se barse rim jhim,
Rim jhim humpe pyaar ka saavan

Few days later, it was a cold windy day when Ishita was standing in her room and keeping her hands on her hips, was looking down on the bed which was containing her various suits. she was confused. first time, she was going out with her to be fiance and she wanted to look extremely good. Raman's mother called yesterday night to her mother saying that Raman and Ishita should go out to select there engagement rings and dresses. when Madhavi told Ishita about this, she literally shiver. with excitement or with nervousness, Madhavi was unable to figure out but taking later one as a most probable situation, she decided to ease out her nervousness by telling her that Mihika and Rinki will accompany them that seem to make her feel good. Ishita was definitely excited about going out with Raman. in few days just through his Good night messages, he created a very sweet place in Ishita's heart. but his yesterday message, totally left her speechless.

"hey to be mrs Bhalla,
ready for first mini date with mr. Bhalla?"


as she read that her cheeks automatically got the blush which now has become a trade mark to tease her. anyone mention Raman, and she is all red and shy. but right now, what exciting her was that date part and she really wanna make that memorable. right than, her knight in shinning armor best friend, Mihika popped in the room and quickly decided on a red anarkali plain frock which had churidar sleeves and churidar pajama. and green fabric plates in the frock.the duppata and the border of her dress had fancy lace with a green gold patch which made it look so elegant and classy. Ishita surly was so happy with this dress. Mihika asked her to keep her hair loose and after a little make up they run out as they hear the car horn.

reaching near the main door, they stopped and after taking a second to make there breath normal, they open the door and step out. Raman was spell bound seeing this beauty infront of him. plain, simple, without any fake mask...she was just so mesmerizing. Rinki purposefully get out from the from the front seat and before Ishita could argue, sit at the back while pulling Mihika with herself and closed the door. Raman smiled and look down on the steering, saying a million thanks to Rinki while Ishita was playing with her fingers not knowing what to do. "my too be bhabhi g, please sit down quickly or instead of getting your engagement rings, at this speed rate, we will be buying the wedding rings" Mihika chuckled at Rinki's statement and joined in. "come on Ishita, you have to sit infront for the rest of your life...but its better if you start practicing it from now" and not giving them anymore chance to comment, Ishita quickly opened the door and sit beside Raman infront with a huff. she bite her nail in between her teeth to control her emotions and started looking out. Rinki was about to add a teasing remark when Raman looked into center mirror and stopped her. though he was enjoying the banter, but Ishita's flushed face told him how embarrassed she felt and he didnt want to make her more uneasy. Rinki stayed quite but decided to use this affection of her brother to tease him later on.

Sharm thodi thodi humko aaye to nazarein jhuk jaayen
Sitam thoda thoda humpe shok hawa bhi kar jaaye

Aisi chali, aanchal ude, dil mein ek toofaan uthe
Hum to lut gaye khade hi khade

Raman take them into a mall that was situated infront of the sea. he let the ladies get out from the car infront of the main entrance and went off to park the car. soon he joined them inside as the girls were just doing window shopping. Raman eyes were fixed on Ishita who was admiring a black and blue sari having nice zarbdosi work on the edges n pallu. but feeling him near her, she turn back to look at him and Mihika and Rinki too did the same as they went on to the jewellery shop to get the desired rings. "bhai what is the fun if you are going to buy ring for yourself...bhabhi should do the honors...doesnt she?" and Mihika agreed. Raman and Ishita for a moment look at each other and then looked away. Raman noticed the way how elegantly she pushed her hairs back and tuck them behind her ears. her shyness is one thing that gave his heart a lil jump but her elegance got him smitten. Ishita choose a gold ring having a square face and in the middle have a big blue stone. Raman though know that Ishita is a simple girl and a gold ring with stones will b her choice but for God sake. its an engagement ring. a symbol of there togetherness and that has to be sumthing unique and antique. and thats what he choosed. an antique style ring which was also have a square shape on the front and a design that was blended beautifully with white stones. the checked the sizes and were at the counter to pay the bills when Rinki and Mihika quietly sneek out and hide them-self in a far away shop. when Raman and Ishita realized they came out, and search for them in a few nearby shops but were unable to find them. Raman called Rinki who was enjoying looking at the duo while standind behind a glass door. "yes bhai" she answered. "where are you both now?" he asked still looking around. "bhai, stop looking around first...we are here...but we want you to spend some time with bhabhi alone...its your only chance as you will only get to see her after a week on your engagement day...so dont waste your time here and take her out for a drink or sumthing" Rinki's words made him smile so he looked around to not let Ishita see his expressions. "ok...but come soon" Raman said knowing that Ishita is hearing his words. "dont worry bhai...we know exactly what this come soon means...we will take our time" she ended with a chuckle as Mihika laughed in the back and cut the call.


Raman rub his temple to straighten his facial expression and when he was sure that its ok, he turned to Ishita. "they are looking for some dresses...they will be back in sometime...in the meantime, will you like to go for a coffee or something to eat?" he asked hesitantly. Ishita's heart did a little jump on thinking that she will be all alone with Raman. she wanted to go out from the mall to have a glass of tea on the road side stalls that she used to visit with her friends. she wanted to introduce Raman to her memories. her hesitation give a little hint to Raman. "you dont wanna go?" he asked with concerned voice. "no no, its not like that...actually...me and my friends used to visit this tea vendor near the beach...he serves amazing tea...will you mind if we can go..." she hesitated in the middle..and look up to check his facial expression. "its ok if you dont want to...we can go to a coffee shop" she added quickly as his expressions were unreadable then. Raman smiled at her hesitation and next moment, he hold her hand and dragged her out of the mall. Ishita was shocked first but feeling his fingers clutching between hers, his palm against hers, she was just looking down at there joined hands. Raman stop on the footpath for a second and look lrft and right to see any coming car, and assured, he lead Ishita to the other side of the road.

he stopped and turn to look at her. "to which vendor you liked to go?" he asked looking around. Ishita got her senses back with his question. "huh" she was just able to utter that. "which vendor Ishita?" and looking ahead, she pointed towards the one. Raman at her pointed way and lead her there. there hands were still connected but it felt so right. while before, Ishita was shocked, now she was all smiling in the back. Raman stopped near the vendor and ordered two tea. it was the 1st time, he was about to taste any road side thing but he wanted to experience it with Ishita especially thats the 1st time, she asked him for something. they left eachother hand to grab the hot glasses but there heart felt so bad. while Raman took out his handkerchief to hold it, Ishita hold it in the pallu of her duppata. the sea side was giving all a different taste and smell to the tea. Raman took a sip and really enjoyed that. "its amazing" he commented that brought a bright smile on Ishita's lips before they touched her glass. the wind was niw blowing strongly as it was about to sunset. many couples were standing on the shore to witness that beautiful sight but Raman Ishita were busy witnessing that in each other eyes. Raman returned the empty glass to vendor and paid him when a strong blow of air messed Ishita's hair and now half of them were coming on the front, allowing Raman to witness a glimpse of her back a little. the deep u cut of the back and the dori above were hardly able to cover that dark black mole that was looking so devilish. as if teasing him. Ishita was struggling with her hairs and duppata, trying to keep them in place. Raman decided to help her and pulled her duppata. Ishita looked at him with stunned eyes as his eyes too looked deep in her's and the next moment, he wrapped the duppata around her shoulders also covering her head in between. his eyes telling her to trust him and right that moment, she felt herself to be the most luckiest girl in the world. his sincerity and promise to her words, showed her how beautiful her life is going to be and her heart wasn't able to say thanx to God a million times to send this amazing man in her life. They were busy looking at eachother and thats how Rinki and Mihika found them and couldn't stop themselves to take a picture of this scene. Raman Ishita in the front, almost a black image of them and the sun setting in the background.

Kehna hi kya yeh nain ek anjaan se jo mile
Chalne lage mohabbat ke jaise yeh silsile
Ishita moved her hand above the picture of
herself and Raman on the beachside as it was
now gracefully placed inside there memory
album, they have created of themselves. they
put all there private pictures they clicked before
there wedding and after that. one of next
contained there engagement picture where
Raman was putting the ring in her finger. she was
looking down shyly and Raman's eyes were fixed
on her face. once again, Rinki's captured
moment. Ishita smiled as she remembered how
many moments of them were made and
destroyed by Rinki and Mihika during there pre-wedding period. they both would make excuse
with there families to take them out and let
them spend sometime alone but would layer
interupt them and tease them to the great
extent. but it all was worth. Raman and Ishita
couldn't thank those devils enough to help them
out as it really helped to take there relationship
to a comfort level. the initial hesitation of them
left the house with there each meeting. and
soon, they were married and were one in every
possible way. the passion of that night could
still sent shivers through Ishita's body even after
8 months of there wedding. it was passionate,
fierce yet gentle and unforgettable.

Leaving the album on the bed, Ishita get up to
take a bath so she can get ready for tonight
function. its her parents-in-laws 30th wedding
anniversary and this time, it was Ishita who took
the charge of all the arrangements of the party.
usually the family like to celebrate there events
in between themselves as it give them a chance
to spend valuable time with eachother. like on
Rinki's birthday 2 month back, they all went out
to a picnic in a nearby resort and totally enjoyed
it. but this time, Raman and Rinki along with Ishita
pressurized Toshi and Omprakash to celebrate it on
a large scale.


inh honton ne manga sargam, sargam tu or tera he pyar hai
ankhain dhoonday hai jiss ko har dam, har dam tu or tera hi pyar hai

She get out wearing her robe, planning in her
mind what she still have to do now. she rub her
wet here with a towel and threw in on the bed.
Her thoughts got interrupted by a call. she
stretched on the bed to get hold of her mobile
perfectly knowing who's call is this. "hellooo"
she said in a lovely tone. "hello wifey" a husky
reply came her way that made her smile. "what
are you doing?" he asked further. "hmmm...just
took a bath" she replied while playing with one
of the wet strands, rolling it on her finger.
"hmmm" came a dreamy voice. "what hmmm?"
she asked with an thoughful expression. "was
just imagining you in ur bathrobe...your long
legs...fresh smell...mmm...your red kissable
lips...your..." "suniyeee...please stop..." she
stopped in a warning tone but her cheeks were
flushed with shyness. "oh...u cant blame me for
imagining that." Raman replied with a chuckle
that raise Ishita's temperature. "well its ur
fault...you are the one who is away on a
business trip...when are you coming back?" her
tone change to complaining one. Raman missed
her more than ever now. "right now sitting in
waiting lounge of the airport...waiting for the
boarding...just few hours and i will be there with
you" sigh. "next time, you are coming with me
on each trip...even if it is just for a day" he
ordered that made Ishita's heart filled with love.
"you missed me so much?" she asked in a soft
tone. "you cant imagine how much i missed
you" another sigh followed. "ok, boarding
started, i need to go now...see you soon
wifey""bye take care, and i am...waiting for you"
she wished him. "between, i hope you are
gonna wear that blue and black sari" he asked
in a teasing tone. "you wish" he chuckled at her
reply and cut the call.

Ishita went towards her wardrobe and go
through her dresses. though she had choosed a
mustard silk sari for herself, but right then her
eyes fell on the black and blue net sari, she was
looking at on there first date and surprisingly,
Raman was well aware enough of her gaze as he
gifted her that sari after the 1st month
anniversary. she was surprised too see that sari
and Raman promising words "i want to fulfill each
of your desire and wishes" still ring in her mind.
she wore it once just on Raman's request in the
boundary of there room and didn't dare wear it
again as its blouse was deep from front and
just had a strap in the back. she got a new
matching blouse with the sari and thought to
surprise Raman. he was requesting her to wear
that sari tonyt from so many days, but she
always felt to shy to say yes to it. "you wish"
she had replied though but how can she explain
him that all his wishes are her commands too.
she took out the sari and the new blouse she
got but looked at the other one still hanging in
there, looking at her as if pouting. "you know
you are hot...but unfortunately, i cant show you
off in a gathering...may be, later, just for my
husband eyes, i will allow you a chance" she
winked at the blouse with a naughty smile and
closed her wardrobe to get ready.


mehfil main bhi, tanha hai dil aise dil aise
tujhko kho na day, darta hai ye aise, ye aise


As expected, the large living hall of there
mansion was totally filled with guests. its rare
that Bhalla's hold a party and whenever they
do, its surly a success. Omprakash and Toshi
greeted the guests while Rinki was busy with
checking on the guests and music and Ishita
was busy with instructing the caterers and
making sure, everything is perfect but nothing
could stop her to look at the entrance of the
home from time to time. Raman said he will be
there and the driver, who went to pick Raman,
already informed that the flight has landed an
hour back, then why he is not till here. Ishita
wondered. she was feeling restless now. her
hands were curling into eachother as she
silently prayed for his well being. every pore of
her body was wishing and hoping for his safe
arrival and as if she was having a connection
with the Above one, he appeared. his warm
dimple smile was gracing his lips and that was
the only thong that could provode sooth to her
restless heart. she said a silent thank you to
God and turn her gaze back at him who was
himself looking at her from afar. her heart did a
little dance feeling his gaze as he flashed a side
looped smiled at her and she blushed. His eyes
twinkled seeing the sari she was wearing. His
choice. ahaan. But soon, a frown took place on
his forehead as he narrowed his eyes at her.
before he could proceed to her, he was called
by his father who was truly elated seeing his
son back. he shared warm hug with Omprakash,
Toshi and Rinki as he wih Omprakash and Toshi
happy anniversary. "mom, dad...i will just be
back after a quick change...ok" his parents
nodded as he approached Ishita who.was busy
talking to some guests. "excuse me" he politely
said to the ladies who wished him hi and went
away perfectly knowing that he need to talk to
Ishita. "your clothes are on the bed" she made
an attempt to keep him away perfectly knowing
that its useless. "come with me" as if he didnt
listen, he entwined there fingers together and
pulled her with himself towards there room.

Ishita get in the room with a sigh as he closed
the door behind themselves. "Why have you got
this new blouse?" was a question that came
straight out from his mouth. Ishita turned to him
with an open mouth. Was he really expecting
her to wear that all to body showed off blouse in
such a great gathering. She hoped that her
action will make him realize how inappropriate
that question was but seeing the confused
expression on his face, she hold herself back
and replied in a calm tone. "Kia appko lagta hai
k i would have wore that barely able to hide
anything blouse in such a party...I cant let
anyone see me the way you do" as realization
dawned upon Raman, he took quick steps
towards her and got her in a tight hug. "I myself
can't let anyone see you that way...you belong
to me...You are mine...just mine" Raman said
possesively as Ishita let herself drowned in his
warmth. God, she missed him soo much...his
embrace, his kisses, his love, his eyes the way
they get fill with love and desire as they look at
him, his lips from which her name sounded so
extra sweet and sexy, his touch that can ignite
her body. They stand there for few moments
before Raman move his lips near her ears and
whispered softly. "May be, you can wear that
blouse for me...later on" and she blushed even
more as he smiled. "I have to attend the
guests...Your suit is right there on the
bed...come out soon" and she left the room
without giving him a glance.

He got out soon to see his wife receiving and
serving the guests. Aww she truly hold the
Bhalla charms with herself. He thought with
proud but he observed with time that she was
on purpose staying away from him. he
wondered why but that mischievous smile
played on her lips give him a slight hint and he
decided to play along. he himself stayed away
from her but the teasing glances they shared
from time to time was enough to burn up there
passion. At some point, Ishita even wondered
that will Raman allow her to change her blouse.
and her cheeks turn crimson with just the mere
thought. They both were pulled towards the
main table that holds the beautiful huge cake by
Omprakash and Toshi and clapped for them. Inside
they both wished that one day, there own
children will celebrate there anniversaries in
this same manner. Raman and Rinki feed the
cake to there parents first and Ishita came up
with the gifts that were a joint gift from Raman,
Ishita and Rinki. It was indeed a fun party.

As last of the guests leave, Raman slumped down
on the sofa as there housekeepers clean the
hall. Ishita was instructing them. Toshi, Omprakash
and Rinki had already retired to there rooms.
"Ishita, lets go...I am so tired now" Raman whined
seeing Ishita still going around the hall,
checking on everything. "Why don't you go and
take a shower first...I will be coming shortly"
Ishita suggested and Raman agreed.

aj milli, aisi khushi
jhoom uthi duniya ye meri
tumko paya tau pai zindagi

The shower was surly a great idea as it refill his
energy. He was feeling so relaxed and strainfree
after the warm bath and came out to see Ishita
standing infront of the mirror, taking out her
bindi and attaching that to the mirror. His life,
his house even his room changed alot after
there marriage.
now along with his, her things also need to be
there. on dinning, a chair of her was fixed
beside him. in his room, her pillows are settled
beside her. her dresses are hanged beside his
suits in the wardrobe. her heels and sandals are
placed in shoe rack beside his shoes. her scrub
and cleanser is placed beside his shaving kit in
bathroom. heven her shampoo is placed beside
his and God, he loved the flowery intoxicated
smell. Ishita was unpinning her sari when his
hands ce around her waist, mking her gasp. he
nuzzled her neck slowly, tracing her long neck
with the tip of his nose, making her sigh in
pleasure. "you smell so...hmmm...good" he
commented as he removed the pallu from the
shoulder and his fingers traced her belly at the
edge of her blouse. "this blouse
soo...disappoint me today" he whispered softly
in her ears as he turned her around. his one
hand cupped her face, caressing it softly,
making her shudder. she bend her face to get
that more in touch with his palm. her eyes werr
getting heavy. her breath getting slow. he
enjoyed the power he had on her for a few
minutes before moving her face up and kissing
her nose. his lips didnt leave her skin as they
move up and kissed her forehead and temple.
Ishita clutched his night suit tightly to get a little
support before Raman left her temples and get a
hold of her lips. she moaned as his lips capture
the soft lips of hers. he sucked them lightly just
enough to make her loose her senses. her
hands came up to round his neck for support as
his hands slowly moved at her back to unhook
the blouse. one, two, three...all six hooks were
open in the matter of a minute. Raman removed it
carefully as his lips moved down to her neck
only to hear her whimpering sound of her
objection. but he didnt care. he missed her so
much in these last three days. everynight,
sleeping without her, not feeling her kisses in
the morning, her teasing glances, he missed all
that so much to now consider anything else
than satisfying his hunger for his wife and Ishita
let him take over as she trusted him more than
anything else. Raman undressed her quickly
while leading back to the bed. making her lay,
he got over the bed and started kissing her feet,
making his movements up. his hands werw
tracing her body in there own way. Ishita try to
grab his shoulder but he kept himself out from
her grasp so ultimately, she run her hand
through her hairs with a groan. Raman took his
sweet little time to reach her belly and felt that a
little puffy. his lips stopped moving as now his
hands were examining her. Ishita bit her lower
lip. her eyes were shut and her cheeks were a
light blushed. she knew its time to reveal the
secret . "Ishita, why your belly is swelling?
everything ok...you checked with the doctor"
Ishita wondered. how in this moment of
passion, his concern came out breaking the
trance. she smiled still biting her lip. Raman was
worried cause of her silence and moved up on
her to read her facial expression. "will you say
something now?" Ishita opened her eyes to see
his worried face. she felt so happy having such
a caring husband. her eyes get teary. she
moved her hands up to trace his face. Raman got
more tensed with her actions and moreover her
tears. "you are scaring me now" he said with a
bated heart that make her concern. she need
to say it now before he get more panicked. still
cupping his face, she brought him closer to her
face and whispered, looking deep into his eyes.
"suniye...we are gonna have a baby" she said
with a clear voice. Raman heart stop for a
moment, before it worked in its normal
condition. a pool of warmth, love, affection and
care run through his body. he looked in her eyes
for confirmation and she nodded. suddenly, he
get off her thinking that may b his weight will
cause any problem and lay beside her. his hand
moved down to her belly and caressed it softly
as Ishita caressed his hairs. tears formed in his
eyes and he slipped down to her waist. he put
his ear with her tummy as if to hear something.
"say it again Ishita...with my name in it now" he
requested and Ishita felt wetness on her tummy.
she knew he was getting emotional right now
and thats exactly what she expected. he was
such a soft hearted person that these
emotional things surly get him have tears. "we
are having a baby Raman...your baby, my
baby...our going to be first born" Raman looked
up at her with a wide smile. she rarely call him
by his name. Raman always have to force her. but
in these moments of them, he felt so good when
she take his names. he kissed her tummy
before he moved up to kiss her insanely. his lips
met hers again and again. this feeling that she
is his and this baby is a proof of there
togetherness give him a new kind of happiness.
"i love you Ishita...i love you so much" he said
after breaking the kiss and looking at her
intently. "i love you too" Ishita said as Raman
slumped beside her, pulling her close to
himself. they keep looking at eachother for
sumtime when Ishita pulled him close. "i
think...we were in between something before
you heard the news" damn, not only him, she
also missed there closeness in past few days
and before when he took the charge, she was
more than ready to give in. she initially planned
to disclosed the news after there...hmmm...but
Raman was so observant that she had to tell him.
"do you think...that..our...that...it will be ok for
the baby" he asked hesitantly and Ishita found
herself falling once again for him. "i talked to
the doctor..." she tugged on his vest and moved
her hand inside it to caress his body. "she said
its ok till first trimester and i am just a month
pregnant now" she said hoarsely and kissed his
cheek. "and i do think the baby need a great
reception from his father" she said with a
twinkle in her eyes that made Raman grin. "now
how can i have my baby and her mother having
complains with me" Raman said as he was back
to his earlier task and surly he does welcomed
his baby with many deep kisses.

kehna hi kia ye nain ik anjan se jo mile
PS:Please ignore errors...It was written from mobile so not proof read.
Please Hit like and give comments...
will surly edit it in morning...too sleepy right now :)

Take care...Hugs...
Ana
Edited by ..oneOone.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@DipaRB6

The Inaugural is so emotional.
What cv's could not do you did.
The emotions he was feeling while travelling
Loved the old man's character.
His views on love life were awesome. One can learn a lot from it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: sukanksha

@DipaRB6

The Inaugural is so emotional.
What cv's could not do you did.
The emotions he was feeling while travelling
Loved the old man's character.
His views on love life were awesome. One can learn a lot from it



Thank you thank you! Glad you could connect to it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Mehak..

Congrats for new thread. Dipa, amazing OS! Super loved it.



Thanks Mehak :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: yhmfflover

What an inaugural os dipa

Loved it truly!



Thanks so much dear!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dipa...
wonderful shot dear 👏
such a wonderful piece of writing
Amazing work yaar

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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