ISHRA SS: Katra-Katra (Horror)

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Indie2121

@Indie2121

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

U write so beautifully!!!

I've thoroughly enjoyed your writing thus far!

Got nauseated for a few seconds as I read abt Raman cozying up to Shagun...thank heavens you turned things around!!!!

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Abhinaiscool

@Abhinaiscool

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

Wow it was lovely... Was this the last part...

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janani

@janani_divan

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Hatts off to your brilliant writting,u always take your readers in to another level.v never xpect what u planning.ishita is no more;-(.i love divra meeting.hope u continue this.very intresting story pallu dear.pls continue it.:-)thanks for wonderful story.:-)

Edited by janani_divan - 10 years ago

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Suman

@_SUMAN_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Wow what an update!

Please yaar continue this ss woth DivRa jodi, you are just awesome in writing these stuff!

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RIA ROY

@wrizaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

@peace...awesome ...shagun deserved that... and finally he met divyanka tripathi... loved Raman in ur whole SS...

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raksha

@cutieruhi

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#66

Cute story wonderful ending or maybe a new beginning

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Anamika

@Impossible.Girl

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

Wow...Pallavi di

Loved it totally

you managed to keep us in suspense through out the story

At first when Raman called up Shagun - I was shocked.Kya kar raha hai Raman

Through out when he was acting - I was like raman calm down baby woh iske laayak nahi hai.Don't do that

The way raman acted in front of shagun and exposed her...too good

so ishita wanted to make raman realize she wasn't dead in a landslide but was murdered by shagun

yeah...Shagun is dead

I love you Raman.

We will meet Again. ...was so sweet

What Divyanka knows raman's name!!! how

end karte karte bhi suspense ha

it was the same familiar one - this is what ishita meant by we will meet soon?

Edited by vidya_prasad - 10 years ago

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peace..

@peace..

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#68

People,

dere is a small correction( in case u read d last part earlier).

Neelu dint pick up d phone when. Shagun picked up d phone and pretended to be Neelu. 😉😆

Edited by peace.. - 10 years ago

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peace..

@peace..

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: vidya_prasad
Wow...Pallavi di
Loved it totally
you managed to keep us in suspense through out the story

At first when Raman called up Shagun - I was shocked.Kya kar raha hai Raman
Through out when he was acting - I was like raman calm down babay woh iske laayak nahi hai.Don't do that
The way raman acted in front of shagun and exposed her...too good
so ishita wanted to make raman realize she wasn't dead in a landslide but was murdered by shagun
yeah...Shagun is dead

I love you Raman.
We will meet Again. ...was so sweet
What Divyanka knows raman's name!!! how
end karte karte bhi suspense ha
it was the same familiar one - this is what ishita meant by we will meet soon?

bold: yes.

Will respond to d rest of ur comments soon. 😊

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--HANISA--

@--HANISA--

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#70

yaar pallavi brilliant yaar to good I was sure she got killed by shagun after you say he got familiar earing I guess it n you shown it wow

the way he make her reveal the truth was to good too

so she is death but met divyanka in plane wow love that too
but why finish it in a suspence place

he regonise her glint in her eyes what does that means yaar she has been save n she know his name too wow please clear me

thx for such awesome ss dear