ISHRA SS: Katra-Katra (Horror)

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peace..

@peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: sukanksha
I am going to comment for part 3,4 together.
Part-3
Fishy fishy
Ishita not going with him but reaching later.
Then dhaba b usi ne choose Kia.
Then table bhi 'koi humein dekh na sake' type
Then eating in one plate.
C.I.D.- Abhijeet kuch toh gadbad hai.

Ishita! Kya kar rahi ho tum! Tum khaana kam khaa rahi ho aur mujhe zyaada kha rahi ho!

Hahahahahahahahaha

Next... Bhole bhake Bache aisi baaton par Ni bolte.. Hawww naughty girl...
Toh bus itna kahungi. It was ahem ahem...

Part 4.

You just clarified what I imagined about the ghosty...

She is dead eh toh pakka... N he dreamt or gone there still kaan-fused.
But kahin Raman Marne toh Ni wala to become the tingu Tara.

I love this song chadariyaa jheeni re jheeni.

N last but not the least Mai aj b thoda darri. Galti meri hai I always read it in night.

Sorry for being late (as always).
N thanks for the ON TIME pm... :)

Sukku! 🤗

Thanks for putting ur comments as u read the story..they r great fun to read 😆👏

See u r soo smart..u noticed all dose elements where ishita behaved fishy..all of dem.kudos 👏👏

N u guessed it correctly that she was dead 👏

bold: this cracked me up totally. 🤣 Infact I have incorporated it in the next part. 😆

glad u liked d song.

Yey! i scared u again 😆😆

Thanks again for all dese comments..u know how much i love them. 🤗

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peace..

@peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: Anum_says
Oh God... awsome and emotional update Peace...
i m still cnfused... ishita is alive or not...
awsome update...

p.s i hope ishita zinda ho

sorry for responding late..i know u read last part too 😊

glad u liked dis part so much 😃😃

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peace..

@peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Originally posted by: Anum_says
this was brilliant @peace...
i was about to cry bcoz i cant digest tht ishita is not alive...
but then aeroplane wala scene parh k acha laga...

but is line ne mjhe cnfuse krdia...
''Raman recognised the glint in her eyes..it
was the same familiar one.."

plzzz clear kro k iska mtlb kia hai...

aww..my apologies if i hurt you! glad u likdd aeroplane scene.

As for d last line, i leave it to ur own interpretation, but u can consider dese:

Divyanka is the same soul as Ishita

Ishita's ghost entered Divyanka's body

Ishita=Divyanka

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sakshigupta09

@sakshigupta09

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#74

yaaarrr horror story...

well written.. but m a bit darpok..

but i read all the 5 parts in 1 go..

n how do u get these ideas..

m amazed..

looking forward to see more of your writings..

please ishita ko zinda kara dete 😛

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sneharjun92

@sneharjun92

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#75

amazing ss. loved it.

kind of horror one, but nice.

😊

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Sunita

@avni_19

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Ishita no more is so painful to read. Raman getting intimate with shagun ws ewwwee yuck! The only thought disgusts me but again as a part of yr story it ws great. Raman killed shagun. Superb happy!

At the end u mentioned raman n divyanka became life partners right! Beautiful ending! Loved it!

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peace..

@peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: avni_19
Ishita no more is so painful to read. Raman getting intimate with shagun ws ewwwee yuck! The only thought disgusts me but again as a part of yr story it ws great. Raman killed shagun. Superb happy!

At the end u mentioned raman n divyanka became life partners right! Beautiful ending! Loved it!

hey raman dint kill shagun. Ishita's spirit killed shagun. Will comment on d rest of ur comments soon.

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Rashmi

@Intuitive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Brilliant Pallavi di

When I read Ishita wasn't alive😭

Later when DT came into scene😆

I was wrong Ishita isn't alive😭 but DT is

Beautifully return👏

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peace..

@peace..

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: nividances
Bohut na insafi hai Pallavi. Tum suspense ko kheech kheech ke humein anxiety de rahi ho. Agle part mein pura mystery clear kar do...please! 😉

i saw u read d last part too. 😃 Glad u enjoyed the suspense n d story overall.