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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rutu83
ok read it all and...i'm feeling two ways about it. on one hand the romance was brilliant and if i may say, as someone who's read all your stories, you're getting better and better :D. and i loved the concept as well 👍🏼
that being said it was...uncomfortable...with such physical romance between human and ghost/spirit/aatma. just felt unnatural and umm weird 😕 sorry but being honest :)

lol.. that part (love making wid bhoot idea) is borrowed from d movie alone.. not my idea really 😆😉

thank u for d other comments as well, happy to know tht u find me getting better with writing romance.lol. 😆😉

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ankita_sidana

I know si many have bounced...but will be more carrful this time
as for alone...i just got free today...will watch it fir sure

n btw madam, where r u dese days?

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chap 4

Par ishu tau raman k saath the mar kesr gaye

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chap 5

Ishu nhi tau divyanka hai na nyc twist

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wish I wud be more to it plx continue da luv story of raman n divyanka plx

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: NIDA.ISHRAFAN
Wish I wud be more to it plx continue da luv story of raman n divyanka plx

i am so glad u loved it so much nida.. so glad u commented on each part! 😊 I am extremely sorry but no tym to continue yaar..

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