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dristi64

@dristi64

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Seriousreader

😆

Nahi nahi Nisha! U carry on with the noble work. We r just burning pages here. Wouldn't want u to get distracted 😆

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taramira

@taramira

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
HOLY HELL
JUST when I start writing the next chapter, you girls crawl out of the woodwork?

SABHI SOSY PREMIYON SE HARDIK NIVEDAN HAI KI NISHA RANI KO DISTURB NAA KAREN TAKI WO AGLA UPDATE POORE TAN AUR MAN SE LIKH SAKEN AUR HUM SABHI KA MANORANJAN KAREN!

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Seriousreader

@Seriousreader

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: taramira

SABHI SOSY PREMIYON SE HARDIK NIVEDAN HAI KI NISHA RANI KO DISTURB NAA KAREN TAKI WO AGLA UPDATE POORE TAN AUR MAN SE LIKH SAKEN AUR HUM SABHI KA MANORANJAN KAREN!

Yes...I solemnly swear to speak in whispers while our madam writer is at work😊

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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

silence for few minutes will be no problem.

Wait little more.

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Seriousreader

@Seriousreader

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: SAKIV-RAM
silence for few minutes will be no problem.
Wait little more.

Setting a subtle timeline😆

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namratha

@NSB7

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Nisha one smart title for the update...its like a statement made for the whole update
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SAKIV

@SAKIVIAM

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Seriousreader

Setting a subtle timeline😆

on a avg.

it will take 45 minutes to write an update.when it is all planned out.

If updtae is lengty time increases proportionally.

fix it to around 1hr.

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Orangen

@Orangen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: Nisha0604
HOLY HELL
JUST when I start writing the next chapter, you girls crawl out of the woodwork?

Please do write too there is a beautiful German word 'unruhig' which means many things - disquiet, restless. noisy twitchy worrisome etc.

That is where you have left me...and others too I guess. So write ...we are waiting to hear how this went.

Apologies if my writing sounds abrupt like I said I speak better German than Englisch.

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Orangen

@Orangen

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: Divashni
Actually we mostly tend 2 read togethr in @ least groups of 3 since the 2 goris dn't understnd the hindi dialogues nd they hav 2 b translatd.

I wish I was there too. I speak a spattering of Hindi but ya google traslator helps..

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Nisha0604

@Nisha0604

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Evil Eye

Ranjan had heard the whole thing... not "heard" it but heard the sounds and shouting... he sat on the floor in despair and sobbed... attempted to go to the second floor multiple times and returned 4 times

He practiced blasting his son, he didnt know WHERE to begin...

R&B felt her forehead she had a really high fever

R&B felt her pulse with a trembling hand... her wrist was burning hot. He immediately called a Doc... the Doc showed a good 40 minutes later

Ranjan panicked seriously " Dr Baig?" "Kee haal hai, kee hoya?"

"Your son called Ranjan" he said, he was of Ranjan's age... grew up together in Punjab

Ranjan slipped on a step as he climbed, Baig caught him, holding his hand... "Calm down Ranjan" "Did u just get home?" (Is that why you dont know?)

"Ummm... pehle chalo

Ranjan fearfully opened the twin glass doors, and rushed towards the master, his son was feeling his daughter in law's cheek

"Dr Baig" he nodded his voice was hoarse

"Are u sick?"

"Ummm...uhh...hmmm, (he cleared his throat) no... its my wife" he pointed

"What happened?"

"Umm she threw up and passed out" R&B's voice quivered

"Is she pregnant?" he asked holding her wrist

"Umm... no... shudnt be" he said after a pause

"She has a really high fever" "I think she might be severely dehydrated" he said opening her eyes

"WHAT HAPPENED" Ranjan shouted

"Ummm... we disagreed" he muttered

"Beta... tuada dil oob gaya ho, bitiya nu ghar pej do" he ordered his voice (send her back if u are tired of her)
"Jhelne di koi load nahi hai puttarji" (dont have to tolerate her) "She has a doting family"
"MR IYER KO KYA KAHOONGA?" he panicked

Dr Baig: Ranjan please sit down

Ranjan cried softly "Rabba kiski nazar lag gayi"

Dr Baig:She has a high fever she is severely dehydrated... I am afraid to suggest, (he was texting), I am calling for IV and other supplements
If she doesnt gain consciousness we will move her to Max Saket in the morning

R&B nodded
Dr Baig prepped for a injection... an emergency vehicle parked outside and a few health care workers brought things up

Dr Baig: What happened? (looking at R&B) Did she complain of discomfort? Looks like she hasnt had water in hours... cant explain the fever... could be an infection

"Send her back beta... she doesnt deserve this" Ranjan spoke to his son fearlessly for the first time in 4 years and 3 months.

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