FF: DESIRE II Part 15A-Part21E

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Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#661

Puttar jealous 😆Puttar angry 😆

I'm loving this 👏 😳

Why the hell did Abhi want to dance 😡 Useless twit 🤢

Mihika...kya hoga Iska 😆

So puttar walks off in anger but I'm so glad he msgs her n told her to come n meet him 😳

Biwi running after puttar, Mihika running after Biwi, Mihir running after Mihika 😆 😆😆

I am sooo waiting for the next update now. 🤗 🤗

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-Gan-

@-Gan-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#662

Great updates Vee... That song from 'dil hai ke manta nahin' is a favorite and I loved.. Loved how you blended the lyrics with the scenes... I loved Raman's possessiveness and becayse of your vivid description could visualize the entire sequence... Perfect!

Can't wait for the next update...

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VENBA

@VENBA

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#663

Superb update..

Awesome story..👏👏

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florine_20

@florine_20

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#664

The song Nd the update perfectlt matching each other.
loved it

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Sunita

@avni_19

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#665

Sorry for the delay reply. Awesum update! Jallo Bhalla! Omg! I cud imagine his angry young look n his urge to eat away Ishita! Hahahha!

Abhi is suchaaa hhmmphhh!!! Peeche peeche jaa rh hai.. cant he allow her to breath!

Looking for the new bhalla couple's conversation!

I love the song! <3

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beckysharp

@beckysharp

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#666

Hiya Vee, awesome awesome awesome ! You know don't you I am your biggest fangirl ! And I loved the last two updates.

I so loved Raman and his very sentimental moment when he saw Ishu and Ruhi playing together ! I really loved it .

The next one had stupid Abhi back into the fray ! Ugh !

I want hotwa romance between puttar n biwi !

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143rhb

@143rhb

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#667

Super jealously update wow!

Now waiting for next.

U know keep ur readers on hook.

Love you yaar.

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Anuhyaa

@Anuhyaa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#668

V - Just caught up with this after a long time...

Wow & Double Wow...
How amazingly you are moving this forward.,..

If you are planning them to tadpofy more... I don't mind them living apart for some more time...

Can't wait for the next part ...

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AdventureGirl14

@AdventureGirl14

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#669

Awesome updates! Poor Ishita has to manage Abhi's over friendliness, her parents' constant matchmaking attempts, Mihika's suspicions, and RKB's anger all at once. Tough on her!

Which reminds me.. Jealous, possesive RKB.. Hayye

Looking forward to the next update!😳