AD-VEH-TURE 1.MDT.Reposting old story

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As many people requested.Reposting AD-VEH-TURE

PART 1

Scene starts with Raman and Ishita in shopping mall .They were shopping for Ruhi .Ishita was selecting few dresses for Ruhi and Raman was waiting their for finishing her shopping then Raman get's a call from office and he goes outside.Ishita was selecting dresses for Ruhi.

Outside while Raman was speaking in phone and after the call he is stopped by an unknown lady voice .He turns to see her.It is a familier face for him he has met her in Mihir's bachelore party.

Kajal "Do you remember me?"

Raman after little thinking gets her "Han I guess Kajal.Pub mey miley they."

Same time Ishita finishes her selection and comes out and notices Raman with other lady and wonders who she is .She decides not to interfere thinking some buisness meeting.

Then manager comes there and gives Raman his credit card.

Kajal "Aap yahan shopping key liyen aaye they."

Raman "Aap yahan.Shaayad shopping."

Kajal "Han friend key saath ayee thee.Are you free for a drink now."

Raman Funnily repeats" $e*on Beach?"

Ishita was shocked listening this from Raman.Ishita never drinks and neither does she know about drinks .

Kajal "I know you told kee aapko direct pasand hain but you have to try mixed once."

Raman "Yup life mey sab kuch seedha nahen hotha.e will try it other day."

Raman "Right now I am busy.Meet you later.Bye Kajal"

Ishita was still in thoughts of what they are speaking and she is thinking other way.Then Kajal leaves and Raman turns back to shop but sees Ishita already left and he calls her and they meet in parking lot.

They reach home and Ishita was still in thoughts of Kajal.

Then their waits another trouble.Their was some tour in Ruhi's schol and even for small kids and Ruhi's friends are going for it .Ruhi is adamant to go.

Ruhi "Ishima main bhee jaaongi merey saarey friends jaa rahen hain."

Ishita "Nahen ek huftha .Yhe naheen ho saktha.You are not going ."

Ruhi "Papa mujhey bhee jaana hain.Ishima ko bolo naa."

Raman "Ishita tumhey kyaa problem ho rahen hain.Ruhi jaana chahthey hain tho ."

Raman "Teachers hongey naa isska khyaal rakhney.Bass ek huftey kee baath hain."

Ishita "Raman itney logon key beech mey who log Ruhi ka khyaal nahen rakhengey."

Raman "Yeh tumhaari sooch hain.But usskey saath usskey friends bhee hongey naa.They will be togethr .Ruhi jaa rahen hain.That is my decision."

Ruhi higging Raman "Thankyou papa.I love you."

Raman "I love you too beta."

Ishita "Fir registration hogaya hain naa tho?"

Ruhi gets worried.

Raman "Main subaha jaakar Ruhi ko chod doonga .Whan main teacher ko request karoonga."

They finally come to truce and Ishita packs Ruhi's luggage.

Ishita was not yet over the scene she saw Raman speaking to kajal and their discussion.She is thinking in other way.

Then she see Raman speaking in phone and smiling and laughing .

Raman "Han main jaroor aunga Mumbai .I know we had a deal.i promise."

Ishita thinks Raman is speaking to Kajal but she is silent not asking questions.

Then next day Raman wakes up late and gets ready late.

Ruhi "Papa aap key wajaha sey late hoga abh kaisey main jaa nahen paaongi.?"

Raman "Nahin beta papa is ready thum jaroor jaaogi."

They leave in car in hurry.Ruhi was tensed as she may get late.

As she guessed they were late and busses left to tour before half an hour.

Ruhi becomes sad and annoyed over Raman for being late.

Raman "Ruhi sorry baba.Hum fir chalengey naa."

Ruhi was not speaking to him.

Raman "Ruhi theek hain hum bus ko chase karengey aur tumhey main bus mey choddoonga Papa's promise .OK"

Ruhi then gets hapy.

They chase the route the bus followed.Then Raman takes a short cut and then after one hour realizes he took wrong route.

Ruhi "Papa aap key wajaha sey main tour naheen jaa rahen hun."

Raman "I am sorry yaar.Tumhey tour jaana hain naa.Ok theek hain hum jaayengey abhee jaayengey.Papa bhee tumhaarey saath.ok"

Ruhi "Hum donon."

Raman "Yes.Ok get ready let set go."

Raman starts his car in direction of tour cancelling all meetings.

Ruhi "Papa Ishima poochegi thoo."

Raman "Naheen bathaana .Bathayengey tho humey waapas bulaayegi aur mujhey taaney .Now its Papa and Ruhi sectret."

part 2

They start moving in direction of Araku Vally ,Andhra Pradesh.

Scene starts with Raman fixing the GPS and there is only one Araku vally so no problem of misjudgement this time.

Raman "Abh humey raastha patha hain hum jayengey tumhaarey bus sey pehley.Then on your mark set go ."

Raman starts driving his car in direction of point by guidance of his GPS.

Raman calls Mihir.

Raman "Mihir main ek huftey koi meeting attend naheen kar paonga.Tumhey manage karnaa hooga."

Mihir "Aap kahen jaa rahen hain?"

Raman "Han yaar Ruhi ko Araku jaana thaa aur mainey bus miss karwaaadey issliyen main hee jaarahan hun ussey dikhaaney.Tum please manage karon."

Mihir "That is all right bhai.Ruhi is important.Bhabhi ko patha hain?"

Raman "Galathee sey bhee ussey nahen patha chalnaa chahiye.Ussey patah chalega tho mujhey apney lecture sey postmortem karegi.Tum koi jhoot bolkey manage karlena."

Mihir "Theek hain bhai.Ghar mey sabko bol doonga.But bhabhi ko koi bahaana ."

Raman "Jho bhee kahaani bolthey hon who mujhey message kar deena.Nahin tho pakad legi Madraasan."

Mihir "Theek hain bhain."

Ruhi is enjoying her drive with her father.She was shouting loudly the moment Raman cut the call and turn off his blue tooth.

Ruhi "Papa fast .fast aur teej."

Raman "Kyon."

Ruhi "Humey uss ghaadi ko haraana hain.We have to over take it."

Ruhi was seeing a grey scorpio on road it is going at good speed and it just overtook Raman's car.

Raman "Beta jaaney do ussey.Speed nahe jaathey.Accident hoga."

Ruhi "Papa kuch nahen hoga.Merey papa ko driving acche aatha hain.Papa bass overtake karon ussey."

Raman "Ruhi ?"

Ruhi keeps a pouting face and Raman understood she is adamant now.

Then the race starts between Raman and that scorpio both are not giving an inch to the other as even Scorpio took the challenge and Raman was trying hard to break the lead it already took.

Ruhi was encouraging her father and is enjoying the ride and speed.Raman has tied a blanket around Ruhi and her seat and a pillow placed to her head so that she wont hit anything even if accident happens.

Then after around one hour Raman finally beats the scorpio and takes a big lead.Then he stops his car to celebrate his victory.

Ruhi "Papa hum jeetha gayen.Maza aaya.Mera papa best hain."

Raman "Yes .We won."Then hee looks at his GPS and they are no where in track to Araku.Raman followed that scorpio which was going to Agra and got separated from his route .

Ruhi also understood and she was acting as if she din't did anything.

Raman "Ruhi yahan dekho humey araku jaana hain Agra nahen.Abh dekho hum kahan pahunchey."

Ruhi was silent and acting as if not listening.

Raman "Main tumsey baath kar rahan hun."

Ruhi "Papa hum pehley Taj Mahal jaayengey fir Araku.Please aap Ruhi key liyen yeh nahen karengey." Cutely.

How can Raman resist this cuteness of his daughter.All his anger melted away and plans changed to Taj Mahal.

Then they spend time in Taj Mahal alone.They took photos in different places and Ruhi in all poses possible and they combined Ruhi with Raman and few hundreds of photos. Around 2 O' clock after noon they came out.

Then track back to Araku.Then Raman gets a message from Mihir and Raman asks Ruhi to read it.

"Bhai main ney ghar mey sabko bathadiyan hain kee aap Ruhi ko lekar Araku jaa rahen hain.Sab log khish hain.Mainey bhahi ko nahen bathaaya aur sab log ko bhee yeh baath bathadiyan.Bhabhi ko bola kee aapko Mumbai mey koi meeting hain aapko jaldhee mey jaana pada.Aapko aaney mey late hoga.Network milnaa bhee mushkil hain."

Then Raman and Ruhi restarted their journey in full swing .

They covered one one fourth of journey then by time around 8 O' clock.

Raman decides to stop for that day as it is not good for Ruhi.

Then Raman and Ruhi book a room in a good hotel in a town on way.Then Ruhi notices there is an exhibition in that town.So you know what is next.



part 3

Scene starts with Raman and Ruhi entering their hotel room and Raman was tired of full day journey and Ruhi is full of energy to her age.Then she sees the poster of a carnival in the town and she gets excited of this .

Ruhi "Papa exhibition hain town mey hum bhee jayengey naa."

Raman who was tired "Ruhi aaj nahen.Papa is tired subaha sey driving kar rahan thaa."

Ruhi "Papa hum kall yaha n sey jaayengey naa tho humey waapas mauka kabh milega.Delhi mey carnival nahee aayega na har din."

Raman gaining his last bit of energy "Ok theek hain chltey hain.But first khaana.OK"

Ruhi "Ok.hugging her father."

Raman and Ruhi go down to have food and Ruhi was in hurry as she thinks Carnival will finish.

Raman "Ruhi tum kyaa khaogee."

Ruhi "Papa fried rice with extra sauce."

Raman "Ok .Same for me."

Raman know the reason as it can be cooked quickly and served faster compared to other items.

While they are having dinner.

ON other side Ishita is wondering how Raman went to Mumbai without telling her.

Ishita "Raman ney pehla aisa kabhee nahe kiyya.Hummesha mujhey bataakey jaathey they .Aaaj kyaa hogaya."

Ishita "Aaj Ruhi bhee nahen hain."

Ishita then remembers about phone call and Raman telling he will come to Mumbai the call which assumed is from KAJAL.Then discussion on mall .

Ishita "Raman uss ladkee sey milney tho nahen gayen."

Ishita "Raman itnaa nahen gir saktha.Who kabhee aisa anehn kar saktha."

Then she decides to call Raman.

Then on other side Raman and Ruhi just entered the carnival.It is first time for Ruhi along with Raman.

Ruhi is playing all games in her reach and getting everyride she wants and Raman is taking videos of all this.

Ruhi din't just stopped but she dragged Raman in few games and she is doing full masthi .Raman is enjoying his every moment with his daughter.

Then when Ruhi was in some ride and tehnRaman gets call from Ishita .

Raman "Main uthaunga tho mar jaonga.Kitney sawaal poochegi.Abh yahan sey bahaar bhe nahen jaa saktha.Ruhi yahen hain iss crowd mey Akeley nahen chod saktha."

He then takes the call as he know he can't avoid it.

Ishita is relieved as Raman took the call.

Ishita "Raman aap theek hain."

Raman "Yeh poochney key liyen phone kiyya?"

Ishita "Seedhey baath karon naa.Ulta bolney sey koi award nahen milney waaley hain."

Raman "Tumsey chutkaara tho milega who kaaffe hain."

Ishita "So funny.Aap ney Ruhi ko drop kiyya?"

Raman was struck but he comes back "Nahen ussko lekey diniyan ghoomarahan hun?"

Ishita "Raman.Seedhey boliyen.Kahan hain aap.Itnee awaaj kyon aa rahen hain?"

Raman "Mumbai mey hun."

Ishita "Raman jaanthe hun.But Mumbai meyt kahana hotel mey ya bahaar hain."

Raman din't get any idea and tells "Beach mey hun.Relax hon rahan hun.,tumsey itney dinon baad chutkaara mila hain."

Ishita was struck now thinking her doubt was right.

Ishita "Theek hain Raman main baath mey call karoongi."

Raman "No problem .Good night."

Ishita cuts the call.

Ishita "Raman Mumbai mey beach mey kyaa kar rahan hain raath ko gyaara bhajey."

Ishita thinks about kajal.

Then thjis side Raman is relieved as Ishita cut the call .He don't the bomb that is going to explode on his return.

Then finally around 11:30 Raman and Ruhi go back to their room .Ruhi is tired and sleeping in Raman's arms.

Raman places Ruhi in bed and watches her sleeping .He has tears in his eyes remembering whole day he spent with Ruhi alone and all her masthi.Then remembering how he used to behave with her when she was small.

Ruhi in sleep utters I Love You Papa and Raman was touched by it,

Raman "I love you too .kissing his sleeping daughter .

She wraps her arms around Raman and sleeps.Rman watches her sleeping and slowly slips to sleep.


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part 4

Scene starts with Ishita confused over recent turn of situations.One side what she saw and other her belief over Raman's character.

That side Raman is sleeping along with Ruhi.Then he wakes up at around 6'O clock morning by Ishita's call.

Ishita "Raman aap uth gayen."

Raman "Kyaa huan tumney itnaa subaha phone kyon kiyya?"

Ishita "Kuch nahen socha aap uthgayen hongey."

Raman "Main itnaa subaha kabhe uttha hun kyaa?"

Ishita "Kissko patha aap jagaha badalthey hee aadath badal lethey hain?"

Raman "Kyaa bol rahen hon yaar.Please mujhey neend aa rahen hain raath ko late soya tha aur tired hun.Please."

Raman "Main baad mey phone karoonga."

Raman cuts the call and sleeps and Ishita was wondering what was Raman doing late night.

She tries not to think over that matter but she is completely broken with the fact that Raman is maintaining a secret relation unknown to her.

She never thought Raman can do that and she always expected Raman to be special.She considers Raman is not like other men and he won't be in such influences.She has tears in her eyes as she imagines Raman with Kajal in romance.

Ishita "Raman ney ek baar bhee merey baarey mey nahen socha.Maanthe hun kee hummarey rishtha kabhee uss wore nahen bhada lekin ussney socha kaisey kee main doosrey ladkee ko merey jagah leney doongi.Main Raman sey pocch bhee nahen sakthee.Par mujhey poochnaa padega."

She has tears in her eyes.She had no control over it.

Then on other side time is around 10'O clock and Ruhiwoke up and got ready first and Raman don't have extra set of clothes .

Ruhi "Papa aapkey pass kuch nahen hain.NO clothes ,brush,paste.Abh hum kyaa karengey?"

Raman "Hum nayee khareed lengey."

Then Raman and Ruhi goes to shopping mall and Ruhi selects new clothes for Raman and you know how Ruhi's choice would be.

Then while in shopping mall Raman was trying his new outfit Ruhi has selected it is jeans pant and her Ishima's fav colour green T shirt and Ruhi has selected around 5 pairs in same combination.

Then Raman decides to wear it in mall itself as they had a trip to catch.

Then Raman wear a pair of Ruhi's selection and comes out Ruhi was not over yet and she was selecting more clothes for her Ishima.

Then Raman gets a call from Ishita.

Ishita "Raman aap kahan hon?"

Raman "Yaar tum bore nahen ho rahen hon iss sawaal sey kitney baar poochogee?"

Ishita "Raman main ney waisey hee poocha.Aap ko kyaa hogaya?"

Raman "Kyaa bolun yaar .Kall sey journey jar rahan hun aur subaha tumney itnaa subaha uthaaya."

Then same time sales girl comes there notices Raman is wearing his new clothes he just brought.

"Aap yeh kapadey pehenrahen hain." Raman signs yes and shows the bill.

"Theek hain aapkey who kapadey pack karthee hun." Raman signs Ok.

But Ishita also hears the lady voice and her imagination goes different way.Then she cuts the call and Raman feels it strange but he has bigger headache now Ruhi.

On other side Ishita's doubts are getting worse.

Ishita "Who kaun hain jo Raman sey uskey kapadon key baarey mey pooch sakthee hain?Main bhee yeh directly pooch nahen sathee thee?Kya who ladakee Raman key liyen mujhsey jyaada important hain?But I am his wife mujhsey jyaada."

Ishita "Main yeh honey nahen doongi.Raman sey jaroor poochungi?"

Ishita "Main kyaa poochungi?Raman mujhey hummarey shaadi key contract key baarey mey yaad dilaaya tho."

Ishita "Ussney kahan kee main usskey personal bathey mey interfere naa karo.But who mera personnal hain.Main kaisey chup rahon jab mera pathee koi aur ladakee key saath.Chee ..."

Tears flowing in her eyes.She was sitting silently in her room.

Then here Raman and Ruhi started their journeyRaman is driving with great speed to catch the bus.According to schedule of Bus it would be reaching next day morning as it is taking small kids and they need constand guidance and will not be able to travel continuously.Ruhi is getting everything as it is her control.

Then around after noon Raman gets a call from Ishita .Ishita was just trying to speak to Raman more and make him realize he is married and should not be other women from his self con science.But Ishita don't knoe that other women is her daughter.Ishita fakes reason of Ruhi this time.

Ishita "Raman aapney Ruhi sey baath kiyen they kyaa?Hummesha who mujhey phone karthe thee but kyon ussney kall sey mujhsey baath nahen kiyya?"

Raman "Main abhee teacher ko phone kartha hun aut bathatha hun kee tumhey phone karey."

Ishita always has worries over Ruhi but this time Raman was bigger loosing him to other woman is making Ishita behave out of character.

Ruhi "Papa abh hum kyaa karengey ?Ishima sey mujhey baath karna hoga but kaisey."

Raman "Han yaar tumhaari Ishima na dentist key jagaha detective bane hothe tho accha hotha.Abh main teacher sey kaisey baath karwaon."

Raman and Ruhi are thinking how to make Ruhi call Ishita.Obvoiusly they can't call using Raman's mobile and by some road passer they have threat of Ishita calling back that number and they will be caught.



part 5


Scene starts with Raman thinking how to make Ruhi speak to Ishita.Then on road they will see a mobile shop and then Raman decides to buy new set and make call through it.

Then Ruhi sits for the selection of mobile and Raman provides his document for the new prepaid number.

Ruhi was seeing all mobiles available their and id not liking any one as all are of black or white couloured.

Raman "Tumney pehley he eek mobile select kiyaa tha merey liyen.Who pink wala.Ab kyaa aur ek pink chahiyen tumhey."

Ruhi "Uffo Papa Pink colour pasand naheen hain aapko."

Raman "Mujhey pink pasand hain but har cheez mey pink I don't like it.Jaldhee select karo."

Raman "Waisey bhee do din key use key liyen itnaa bada mobile kyon choota wala ley lon."

Ruhi "Papa mujhey select karney don."

She then turns few more down and finally selects a bedazzled one irritating Raman.Raman was supposed to pay in cash as the shop don't accept credit cards.

Then Raman and Ruhi restarted their journey.

Then on other side Ishita was upset on you know what.Then Mihika and Vandu come there to discuss something with Ishita.Ishita decides not to tell them as it will change everything.

Mihika "Akka suna hain kee jeeju ka birthday aaney waala hain next week."

Ishita "Han next Sunday hain.Kyon?"

Mihika "Akka ghar mey naa sab log decide kkiyan kee celebration hon iss baath kaa.Jeeju ney hummarey liyen kitnaa kiyaa tha.Mihir ney preperations suru kardee."

Ishita "Abhee bhee time hain naa itnaa jaldee kyon?"

Vandita "Ishita tum tho Raman ko jaanthe hon naa.Duan ka smell sey aag ka jagaha bathaadetha hain.Abh sey preparation karengey tho ussey easily patha nahen chalega."

Ishita "Theek hain.Kuch chahiyen?"

Mihika "Kyaa naa akka.Abh right time hain yeh tumhey bathaaney key liyen.Fir jeeju ayengey tho batha nahen payengey."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Vanditha "Kyaa hain naa party Raman key liyen surprise hain.Tho tumhey Raman ko maximum late karwaana hain uss din bahaar aaney sey."

Ishita "What?"

Mihika "Kyaa hain naa akka.Mihir ney kuch old slides plan kiyyaa hain aur jeeju key poraaney doston ko aur bahuth kuch.So who nahen chahtha kee jeeju uss din subaha bahaar ayen.So you have to stop him."

Ishita "But kaisey?"

Mihika "Akka office sey phone nahen aayengey aur perosnnal cheezey aapko rokhna hoga."

Ishita "Kaisey?"

Mihika "Akka kyaa hain yeh.Yeh hee mujhey bathaana pad rahan hain.Kiss do jeeju ko who kaam karega.Romantic mode mey rakho."

Ishita "Kiss sey kissey ko rokh saktey hain kyaa.Kyaa tum bhee na Mihika."

Vandu "Ishu Mihika sach kehrahen hain.You can give time by it."

Mihika "Akka .Shaadi tho pehley aapka huin hain but sab kuch mujhey bathaana pad rahan hain.Ladkey naa kuch cheezon key kuch bhee kar saktey hainin that one is romance .You can trade to anything for them.Main tho abh bhee Mihir sey kuch bhee lethi hun aisey hee.You have to use this as trumpcard and avoid romance unless they request you then you should loosen up trading for something."

Ishita was confused.

Mihika "Mujhey lagatha hain kee aap jeeju ko hummesha dethey rehtey hon issliye who trich kaam nahen karega.Waisey litney baar detho hon din mey.20-30."

Ishita "Shut up Mihika."

Ishita "Hum completely avoid karey tho kyaa hoga."

Vandu "Who humpar interest kho jaayega.Aur you know what illegal ways."

Mihika and Vandu goes away from there and Ishita again started.

"Main tho kabhee Raman ko respond hee nahen kiyya.But sach mey koi itnaa gir saktha hain iss cheez key liyen.I can't believe this."

"Raman bhee" again started crying but she gets a call now and she lifts it and it is from Ruhi.

Ishita stops crying .

Ruhi "Ishima,Aap kya kar rahen hon."

Ishita "Kuch nahen .Aapko kya hogayan do din laga phone karney.Ishima ko bhool gayen hon kyaa."

Ruhi "Nahen Ishima.Main friends key saath thee na tho ussey fever ho gaya thaa.Main usskey saath thee.Fir papa ney teacher ko phone kiyaa aur keha kee aapko phone karnaa hon."

Ishita "Tumney papa sey baath kee?"

Ruhi "Han."

Ishita "Yhe kisska phone hain.Teacher kaa."

Ruhi "Han."

Ishita "Kyaa naam hain unka."

Ruhi thinking few time "Aap believe nahen karogi .Ravan Kumar."

Ishita smiles at this "Ravan Kumar .Thek ussey phone don."

Ruhi signs to Raman and Ishita will recogonize Raman's voice any moment.So he has to avoid it.

Raman calls home through his mobile and Ishita goes to attend excusing Ruhi to call later.

Scene shifts to Raman and they restart their journey.

It is night time and they were very near to their destination around four hours more.They made a halt for that day in a town and they booked a hotel there.

Then Ruhi gets attention of dog show there and trade.

Ruhi request Raman to go and she can do it even though Raman is tired.It is her energy which matters and that she has full seing her father with her.

Raman "Ruhi tumm uss bus mey bhee itnaa masthee karogi kyaa?Ya sirf merey pass?"

Ruhi "Kyaa papa main masthi apney papa key saath he karoongi naa."

Then she is enjoying the dog show and Raman was carrying her around as she is wasting time few places.Then she sees a girl requesting money for treatment.Ruhi feels pity and donates the money from her fathers wallet .

Then after leaving from there Raman realizes she donated alst penny from there.

Raman "Ruhi tumhey mujhey poochkar donate karna chaiyen thaa.Abh hummarey pass paisey nahen hain."

Ruhi was shocked "Hummarey pass paisey nahin hain tho .Hum kaisey jaayengey."

Raman "Credit cards hain.But sabh hotels mey accept nahen hongey."

Ruhi "Sorry papa .Hum unsey waapas nahen le saktey naa."

Raman "Koi problem nahen.Hum koi solution doodengey." Seeing her sad.

She again went to her masthi mode bazaaing Raman's band in all possible ways.

It is not over and then she makes a decision to buy a dog.Ruhi caught attention of.

It is a white boxed well bred and trained.

Ruhi "Papa kitnee cute hain.Mujhey chahiyen.Mutthu is so small."

Raman "Cute hain.Mujhey tumhaarey Ishima sye jyaada daraawani lag rahen hain."

Ruhi "Papa.?"

Raman "Mazak kar rahn hun."

Raman "But ghar meyy allow nahen hain naa.Aur hum ghar kaisey le jaayengey."

Ruhi "Papa please .Hum manage karengey naa.Main daadi ko manaungi.Yeh tho trained hain mutthu trained nahen hain naa."

Raman turning to dealer "Card chalega."

Dealer "Yes sir "

Raman "Usskey related har cheez chahiyen .Kyaa khatha hain sab kuch ."

Raman makes deal and Ruhi gets her new pet.She gets a name "HERCULES " for it as it is bigger than others in that area.

Then Ruhi is playing with it and to Raman's tensions it is listening only to Ruhi and Raman is feeling difficult to control and Raman gets tired running after it.

Then Ishita calls him on sudden.

Raman picks the call before speaking to Ishita he requests dog "Plase tum apnaa moo badh rakho mera Biwi ka phone hain nahen uthaunga tho maardegi mujhey."

Raman was breathing fast as he got tired running and Ishita heard his words to dog .

She assumed Raman is telling to some girl.As dog accepted the request and was silent.

Ishita hears Raman breathing fast and Assumes what you know.

Ishita "Raman main baath mey call karoongi."

Ishita breaks down again thinking Raman just spent a moment with other woman.

Ishita "Raman .kyaa ho gaya aapko.Aaap itnaa kaisey gir saktey hain."

Ishita "Raman aapney mujhsey poocha hotha tho shaayad main sochteee iss bath key liyen but.Aap ney doosra solution ley lee apney liyen."

Ishita "Raman .Mujhey ek mauka tho diyan hotha."

Then she is sad thinking she made it herself by always making Ruhi come in between them.

Then on other side Raman feels weard as Ishita cut the call without speaking.

Then his boxer is listening to him on request instead of order.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 6

Scene starts with Ishita thinking about Raman and his deceit.

Then on other side Ruhi is sleeping along with her new friend Hercules.Raman watches them sleeping and feels happy.He is missing Ishita and decides to call her.

Then Ishita gets a call from Raman but she is dejected seeing this she started hating Raman with her doubt on him.Still she takes the call having hope Raman may comeback to her.

Ishita "Aaap abhee tak soyen naheen?"

Raman "Naa.Abh thak busy thaa.Abh free huan hun.Socha tumsey baath karoon kall sey free nahen mil rahan thaa."

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahen hain aap ?"

Raman "Abhee abhee room ayan hun .Bass tumney phone kiyya than a uss samay thoda busy thaa?"

Ishita "Kyaa kar rahen they?" casually not to cause any doubt to him .

Raman "Mummy ko math bathaana.Yahan dog fare thaa.Ruhi key liyen ek nayan pet khareedha.I hope ussey pasand ayen."

Ishita "What ?Raman aap jaanthey hain mummyji ko pasand nahen hain."

Raman "Han but yeh trained hain mutthu key taraha nahen hain.Cute hain Ruhi kee baasha mey."

Ishita then thinks Raman is speaking to her normally and feels happy but she has her anger which she is hiding and conserving to explode.

Then they speak till late night Raman indirectly telling his experiences of what happened but Ishita unable to understand.Then Raman slips to sleep on call itself.

Ishita feel little relieved but she has her anger full on now as Raman was able to call her even after doing that shameless act.

Then next day Raman and Ruhi get ready and Ruhi was happy with Hercules.They are on walk outside for few minutes.

Raman has given his car for washing and will be waiting till it finishes.It is travelling continuously since two days.

Then Ruhi gets attention to the temple and huge crowd there.

There is some pooja going on the temple and is quite crowdy there.Then they come across a woman who works in the temple society.She is talking in phone with some person .She is complaining about trustee and their less budget for the festival.Her name is Sunitha.

Raman listens this and gets an idea to use it for his opportunity.

Raman "Excuse me Miss.You don't know who I am but I can help you."

SUNITHA "Sir ,aap kyaa madad karengey."

Raman "Tell me I can help .But I need a return help."

She thinks Raman is acting playboy .

Raman "Don't take me wrong.I am not like that.I am married and have a daughter too."showing Ruhi.

Raman "My name is Raman Bhalla,main Delhi mey ek MNC ka CEO hun.Just by situation mujhey mere beti key saath suddenly aana pada.Unplanned."

Raman "Then you know kids.Ussney merey wallet mey paisey kharch kardee.Now I am penny less."

SUNITHA laughing "Sir hummey bhee sponcer kee kamee hain.We have to make arrangement s for festival."

Raman "Aap poorey sunengi.I don't have money but I have all my credit cards in working .Main aapkey festival key liyen sponcer ban saktha hun.I can directly help you in buying all the stuff recquired for it ."

SUNITHA was shocked listening this she has problems with trustees till now now she got a direct single sponcer for it now.

Raman "I can help you.After this you can help me by giving small amount for us."

It is a stupid deal for any man .But our situation is also different.

SUNITHA accepts a deal in her favour and Raman makes all necessary arrangements for festival by his cards.

Then SUNITHA asks Raman to be honorary member for donations.Raman gives Ishita's name as trustee for it .

Then Raman does pooja in name of his family but he wishes Ishita to be with him that moment as Ishita will be more interested in things like that.

The as a deal Sunitha provides them with little money in exchange of 5 lakh spent on preparation for festival with excess honary membership in temple board for Ishita.

The Raman and Ruhi continue their journey back around 11'o clock.Ruhi is sleeping in back seat and Hercules was on front seat.






Raman "Tho aapke mem shaab so rahen hain.?" To Hercules.

Raman starts speaking to dog.

Raman "Ok .Yeh chotey hain tumhey issey badey ko bhee samhaalna hoga."

Raman "Ok I will tell you about my family." Avoiding boredom speaking to dog.

Raman "I am Raman." Forwarding his hand and same does it as formal introduction.

Raman "Hum abh Araku jaa rahen hain.Ruhi key tour key liyen.You know Ruhi right."

Showing dog the back seat.

Then Raman continues.

Raman "Fir hum ghar jaayengey.Delhi mey,never mind I will make arrangement for you.Ghar mey pehley tumhey Ishita sey milnaa hoga.Ghar mey sabka control usskey pass hain mera bhee aur Ruhi ka bhee."

" Ishita,meri biwi hain aur Ruhi kee maa.Ghar my who kissey par gussa nahen hogee siwaa mujhpey.But bahuth achee hain she loves everyone.We have a deal tumhey mujhey bachaana hoga Ishita ka gussa sey."

Raman "Actually ghar mey kuttha allow nahenn hain.But mainey Ishita ko bathadiyan who manage karlegee."

Hercules was listening as ideal student however it is trained.Raman patting his head

Raman "Fir papa.Tumhey unsey koi problem nahen hogee,Romi mera bhai ussey bhee ."

Raman "Then you have to meet my mummy.Tum ussey decently behave karnaa hoga bahuth gussa hain.Shaayd mujhsey kam ee hain but.dangerous."

Ruhi then wakes up listening her father telling dog about their house.

Ruhi "Papa aap hercy ko yeh sabh bathaarehn hain."

Raman "hummarey museum mey rehnaa hain naa ussey.Isska training dey rahan hun."

Ruh I"Aagey main bathungi.Fir saamney ghar mey paati,chitti sab log hongey .hum wahan bahuth mastee karengey."

Then Raman and Ruhi notices Ruhi's school buses carrying student on road.

They finally caught the busses.Raman follows them and they reach their destination.

Raman then informs the teacher about being late and they felt happy seeing Ruhi and they were surprised seeing Raman bringing Ruhi all way from delhi alone.



PART 7

Scene starts with Raman meeting teacher and informing her that Ruhi would be in this tour too.She agrees and gets surprised as Raman brought Ruhi all way from Delhi on road.

Raman "Hum waapas ghar nahen jaa sakthey they.Ishita ko pasand nahen tha Ruhi ko itnaa door bhejnaa.So mujhey doosra choice nahen thaa aur mujhey hee laana pada.But we enjoyed the trip.
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Teacher "Aap apney beeti ka kitney khyaal rakthey hain.Aap yahen rukhney waaley hain yaa."

Raman "Nahin main bhee Ruhi key saath hun.Main Ruhi ko merey saath hotel ley jaa saktha hun kyaa.Main aapko subaha join karoonga."

Teacher "Koi problem nahen hain sir.It would be helpful for us that you are here along with us."

Raman "Aap Ruhi ko Ishita sey baath karwaa saktey hain kyaa.Ussey nahen patha kee hum donon ek saath hain.Ussey lag rahan hain keeRuhi aap logon key saath he hain."

Teacher "No problem sir."

Ruhi was playing with Hercules.Raman calls her and Hercules comes to Raman and his very obedient friend .Ruhi speaks with Ishita and on Raman's request Hercules was'nt barking.

Then the tour continues and Raman accompanied Ruhi everywhere she go and blending the rules for Ruhi and helping all kids became Raman's time pass there.

Then all days were exciting there and Raman and Ruhi enjoyed the most as they were th only father daughter duo available there.Even if available they cant beat them in their compatibility.

Then in the last day the last part of tour was boat ride .They were supposed to go in team and RaRu was obvious team.

Then when they reach other end and they were supposed to camp for lunch there and all students were waiting there.Raman and Ruhi were sitting along with Hercules and relaxing .Then Raman notices teachers in tension.Then he comes to know that few kids were missing indirectly kidnapped according to information.

All students get panicked and it was due to Raman many students were safeas they were following Raman's lead but few people were deviated by kidnappers.

All students starts crying but Raman takes the lead as teachers are not that experienced.But this news spread as wild fire and spread to news channels within an hour.

Even Ishita saw the news.She panicks and immediately calls Raman.

Ishita "Raman aapney news dekha hain."

Raman "Mainey teacher sey baath kee hain.Ruhi safe hain abh who teacher key pass he hain.Tum uss Ravan Kumar key number dial karon."

Ishita was little releaved and she calls Raman's other mobile and RUhi takes it and she calm's Ishita.

Then Ruhi feels sad as some of her friends are missing.

Ruhi "Papa merey friends ko kyan huan?"

Raman "Ruhi kuch nahen hoga papa hain naa.Papa unkey help karengey .Tum miss key pass rukho .Kahen nahen jaana ok.Kaheen naheen ."

Raman calls police and they have given protection around the camp and they were safely taken back to other end.

Raman along with Hercules were retracing the path of lake. Then trained Hercules find's the lead by smell of paint of other boats and find the deviation.

Raman and Hercules follow the path and they finally were able to locate the hideout.Thanks to Hercules and Raman's knowledge.

Raman call's police and gives them the location immediately.

But Raman knew once police come their will be little amount of risk for kids on attack and counter attack.

Raman "Hercules.Humey andhar jaana hoga .secretly."

Raman "Police ayengey tho bachon ko khatara hoga.So we have to do it combined.Humey bachon ko pehley uss jagaha sey nikaalna hoga."

Hercules accepts it by.

Raman "Tum pehley mera andhar jaaney ka wait karon aur fir apnaa awaaj sey distraction laon."

Raman "Main andhar gundon ko smahaal longa aur bachon ko bahaar launga.Tum bhee bhag jaana."

Then Raman proceed inside according to plan and the moment Raman signaled Hercules started barking heavily getting their attention .All get panicked as they were worried police got their location and they send few outside to looks after Hercules,

Ramaninside grabbed the opportunity and hitted two goons unconscious and gave free way for kids to safe place.

Then Raman started fighting with others inside and Hercules outside combined gave enough time to police to come and arrest them.

Then Raman reaches all others along with kids.

Then he goes to teacher who was looking after Ruhi who was sleeping tired.It was 8 hrs from incident and she was scared .

Raman takes her in his arms and she was sleeping quietly in her fathers arms.

Teacher "Sir Ishitajee ney phone kiyaa hain.Mainey unhey kuch nahen bathaaya hain."

Raman "Who tension mey hain kyaa?"

Teacher "Han thoda tension mey thee but I convinced her."

Teacher "But sir aap aaj nahen hothey tho I don't know how I would have answered their parents.Aapney jaan khatare mey daalkey un bachon kaa jaan bachaaya."

Raman "Mera jagaha au r koi bhee hotha tho wohi kartha.Hum apney bachon key liyen tho hee jeethey hain.Unkon kuch hojaatha tho poora jinagee palat jaayega."

Raman "Main bhee ek baap hun main doosron key saath aisa naheen honey doonga.It is my responsibility as a father.Kissko patha jab main nahen hoN Ruhi bhee issey problem mey hon tho koi tho ussey madad karey.But we have to take initiative."

Teacher "Ruhi is really lucky sir.Who aapkey beti hain.Aapney apnaa poora kaam choodkar Ruhi ko lekey yahan aaya.Koi aur hotha tho itnaa nahen kartha.Aap apnee beti key khushi key liyen khud lekar aayen ussey."

Raman "Meri beti hain who.Usskey liyen kuch bhee kar saktha hun.Kuch bhee."

Looking at her daughter sleeping in his arms keeping head over his shoulder.With Hercules watching them carefully.Raman goes towards his car.


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part 8

Raman was going towards his car and suddenly stops in his tracks shocked.Ishita was standing beside it and she was in shock too.

Raman comes out quickly and goes towards her.

Raman "Ishita tum kabh aye?Ruhi theek hain tum tension math loo."

Ishita had heard everything teacher told and all her doubts are cleared now.

Ishita "Raman aap Ruhi key saath ayen they yahan.Tho aapney jhoot kyon bola kee aap Mumbai mey they."

Raman "Ishita baath mey bathaaonga pehley Ruhi ko andhar soney dethey hain."

Ishita kisses sleeping Ruhi before Raman keeps her in back seat to sleep.Hercules also enters inside.

Ishita has tears in her eyes as she misunderstood Raman.

The moment Raman closed the door Ishita hugged Raman tightly and Raman was shocked.

Raman "Kyaa buan Ruhi theek hain naa?"

She then looking at Raman remembering Vandita and Mihika's words.

She kisses Raman on his cheek to Raman's amusement.

Raman "Ishita tumhey kyaa hogaya koi pagalpan ka dhoura pada hain kyaa.Tumhey gussa nahen hain abh?"

Ishita was not listening what Raman is saying her eyes are seeing Raman who is only her man,her husband.

Ishita "Raman I am sorry .I am very sorry."still crying but not leaving him tightly hugging him.

Raman "Kyaa huan pehley yeh tho bathaon." Keeping his hand over her head to support.

Ishita "Raman mujhey laga aap Mumbai mey they tho."She then tells everything from the day on shopping mall.Over her doubt on him and thinking that he betrayed her.

Raman was shocked listening this .

Ishita continues "Mujhey laga aap Ruhi key liyen nahen aayengey uss ladkee key saath rehkar .Aur Ruhi key liyen main yahan aa gayee.But aap tho Ruhi key saath he they.Raman I am sorry.I don't know how I thought wrong about you."

Ishita "Raman main aappar shak kar rahen thee.I don't know mujhey kyaa hogayan.Raman I am sorry."

Raman forgave her for that as it is clear communication gap but how will he leave a chance to have fun with Ishita.

Raman acts as silent and angry "Ishita kitnaa gandha sooch hain tumhaara.I never could imagine this way from you.Tumney mujhpar shak kiyan."

Ishita who was already angry on herself now is getting more sad.

Raman "Tumney merey morals par shak kiyan.Merey liyen mera pariwar mainey rakthee hain but tumney ..."

Raman "Fir tum maskaa maar rahen hon Ruhi key tarah kiss dekey.But I am not gonna forgive you that easily for this."

Raman understood that Ishita is ready to accept their relation and take it to next stage now .

Ishita "Raman please aap merey baath ko samajhiyen naa.Mujhey aisaa lagan kee."

Raman "Just shutup.Main tumhey itney asaani sey maaf anehn karoonga." Keeping angry face.

Ishita "Raman mujhey kyaa karnaa hoga bathaiyen kee main kbhee aapsey argue nahen karoongi."

Raman was about to ask for another kiss but HERCULES raised on occasion to save Ishita and started barking at Raman.

Raman "Peeth mey dard ho rahan hain.Peeth dabaana hoga."smiling and looking angrily at Hercules.

Ishita goes inside car keeping Ruhi's head in her lap and she understood that Raman forgave her and just acting bringing back smile to her face.

Raman was outside tying chain to HERCULes.

Raman "Mainey kyaa kahan tumsey .Tumhey mujhey Ishita ka gussa sey bachaana hain.Ussey mera gussa sey nahen." To Hercules.

Raman "Kitnaa accha mauka tha.Tumney kharaab kardeee abh nahenn patha waapas mauka kabh milega.Gaddhar kaika.."

Hercules started licking Raman over his face and Ishita was watching them smiling.

Raman "Abh maarlo maskaa.Sablog ko aadath ban gayen hain maska mareny kaa.Pehley Ruhi fir Ishita abh tum bhee .Doobara aisa nahen karnaa tum mera partner hon.Mera madad karnaa" but obedience lie on stronger side and it is Ishita's side as even Raman is in her control.

Raman tying its chain gets it into car.

Ishita "Raman hum kahan jaa rahen hain."

Raman "Hotel.whan room hain."

They reach hotel and Ishita was happy now as all he r misunderstandings are clear and Raman is with her.Ruhi is safe.

They reach hotel and Raman requests for a room change from single bed room to double bed room suit.

Ruhi is still sleeping and Raman and Ishita makes her sleep in a bed and Hercules lay beside her.

Raman "Ishita tum Ruhi key saath rukho main doosrey room mey hun." But it is not what Ishita wants she wants to be with Raman alone.

Raman goes to his other room and lying on his bed.

Ishita comes there and she locks the door.

Ishita "Aapney kahan kee peeth mey dard ho rahan hain.Tho."



part 9

Scene starts with Ishita coming to Raman's room and she locks the door.

Raman "Tum yahan kyaa kar rahen hon?"

Ishita "Aapney kahan kee peeth mey dard ho rahan hain tho?"

Raman "Han ek huftey sey gaadi chalaatey rahan hun.Bahit bhaitkey peeth mey dard ho rahan hain."

Ishita "Aap letey rahiyen main peeth dabaathee hun."

Raman lays on his chest removing his shirt.

Ishita was happy that Raman forgave her but she is not over the guilt yet on thinking bad about Raman.Raman could sence this.

Ishita "Raman ghar mey sab log jaanthey they kyaa aap Ruhi key saath hain.?" Applying balm on his back.

Raman "Han.Bass tumhey naheen patha thaa?Tumhey bathadiyan hotha tho tumm ussey din waapas bulaalethee .Issliyen naheen bathaaya."

Ishita "Aaapney aisa nahe kiyya hotha tho mujhey aappar shak naheen huan hotha.Seedha sach bathadethey."

Raman "Kyaa tumhaarey taaney sunney key liyen.Mujhey kaisey patha hoga kee tumhaara dimaak mey kyaa pak rahan hain."

Ishita "Raman aapney aisa nahen kiya hotha.Mujhey bathadethey tho shaayad main bhee aapkey saath chalthee."

Raman "Shaayad?Yeh sabh chodon."

Ishita "Raman mujhey nahen patha kee mujhey kyaa hogaya.I just could'nt bear it."

Raman was silent .

Ishita "Raman I could'nt difest kee aap kissey aur ladkee key saath they.Yeh socch bhee mujhey khaarahan thaa."

Ishita "Raman I just need you .Yeh baath mainey aapsey kabhee nahen kee.But I just love to be with you."

Ishita "For me everything with you is a beautiful memory aapseu jhagada karnaa,aapkey taaney sunna.Jab mujhey laga yeh kissey aur ladkee ko bhee mil rahan hain.I just could'nt control myself.I started hating you." Breaking down.

Ishita realizing what she spoke "But main galath thee.Mera soch galat thaa."

Ishita "I am wrong.Raman par main khush hun kee main galath thee."

Raman realizing Ishita's state.He took chance hold her by his hands and pinned her to the bed and they have an eye lock.

Raman "Sach bathaon.Yeh sach huan hotha tho tum kyaa karthee?"

Ishita "Main uss ladkee ko maardethee."

Raman "Ek baath bathon .You love to spend time with me or YOU LOVE ME ."

Ishita was shocked listening this and she was thinking over this view and then a smile with shyness flowed through her lips.

Ishita repeated "You love me. " then smiling realizing her inner turmoil "I love you."

Ishita "Raman I love you." And smiles covered her face the moment she realized it.

Ishita "Raman main aapsey pyaar karthee thee.I could'nt realize it.I love you."

Raman "I love you too."

Ishita "Main aappey shak kaisey kee.?"

Raman "Ishita it is just your love.Tumhaarey pyaar ney tumhey andha banaaya.I can understand.You don't want to loose me.Tumhaara koi galthee nahen thee.It is just a communication gap.Ok."

Ishita hugs Raman tightly realizing his efforts to get her out of guilt.Yes indded it is her love that blinded her and her love that she din't want to loose.

Raman "Ishita tum jaanthe nahen ,But I really missed you.Mujhey har samay lagan kee tum bheee saath hothee tho baath alag hothee."

Ishita kisses Raman on his cheeks .

Raman "Abh kyaa hogaya.Abh kyon patha rahen hon."

Ishita "Raman?"

Hugging him tightly as if she will never get a chance again.

Raman goes romantic .He clears her hairs falling on her face then moving his lips toward her eyes to her tears.Then Ishita understood Raman is forwarding to next stage but she want it too.She wanted to bridge every gap between them so that no KAJAL can enter even in her dreams

Raman then moving his hands to her face kissing her in forehead.Ishita confused.

Raman then stops "Ishita I am sorry.Mainey yeh naheen poocha kee tum kyaa chathe hon."

Ishita "Raman.I love you.Humey ek hona he hain." Forwarding herself to Raman.

Raman and Ishita share their first kiss .Then they takes their first step to progress their relation to next stage.

Then Raman sleeps pleasantly feeling of Ishita being beside him happy and pleasant make him feel it like heaven.

Ishita was happy ow she had spent sleepless night past few days thinking about Raman but now it is cleared and Raman is with her and she had her moment of her life with Raman and Rama beside her make it feel like she had everything in world.

Then in morning Ishita wakes up first and seeing Raman arms around her marking his protectiveness and possesivity makes Ishita feel proud of her life.Then she dresses herself up and goes to other room to check he rdaughter sleeping peacefully.


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Scene starts in morning Ishita wakes up first and seeing Raman arms around her marking his protectiveness and possesivity makes Ishita feel proud of her life.Then she dresses herself up and goes to other room to check her daughter sleeping peacefully.

She feels happy seeing Ruhi happy and sound looking from door..

Raman comes there and backhugs Ishita.Ishita smiles and kisses him on his cheek.

Ishita "Aap uth gayen.?"

Raman "Han.?"

Ishita "Ajeeb hain Ruhi abh thak so rahen hain?"

Raman "So rahen hain yaa naatak kar rahen hain."

Ishita "Raman kyaa bol rahen hain aap?"

Raman "Ishita ek huftey sey Ruhi ko itney kareeb sey dekh rahan hun.Usska naatak ko tho pehchaan saktha hun.But tumsey better tho nahen."

Ishita "Aap bahuth enjoy kar rahen they Ruhi key saath."

Raman "Bathaney kee jaroori hain kyaa.Har pal merey saath thee.Mujhsey baathey karthee thee aur har raath mujhey ussey sulaana padtha tha bed mey.Har din raath ko tired hojaathe hain aur mujhey ussey uthaakar aana padtha hain aur aisey hee sojatheee hain."

Ishita listening happily with pride in her face.

Raman "Main ney ek moment bhee miss nahen kiyya.Mainey usska bachpan kitnaa miss kiyan thaa.Chothee the thab main usska saath nahen thaa.But who hummesha papa sey hee pyaar karthee thee.Mainey kyaa kiyya tha usskey saath."

Ishita "Raman abh kyon sad ho rahen hon.Sab kuch khatam huan naa.Abh sab kuch normal hain Ruhi is angel hummarey princess hain who.Aapney suna nahen teacher ney kyaa kahan.Raman you are rectifying your mistakes.You did it." Holding his hands .

Ishita "Tho yeh bathayiyen kee abh Ruhi kyon sooney kee natak kar rahen hain."

Raman "Aaj hummey ghar waapas jaana hain naa.Issliyen?Who yahan aur time spend karnaa chahthee hain."

Ishita "Wha kyaa baath hain aapney itnaa acha samajh liyan Ruhi ko."

Ishita "Raman aap yahen rahiyen.Ruhi ney mujhey dekha nahen naa ."

Raman "theek hain."

Ishita goes to Ruhi silently on tip toe.

Ruhi is checking with one eye whether Raman is coming or not.

Then Ishita comes on other side and surprises her.

Ruhi "Ishima aap?"

Ruhi jumps and hugs Ishita.

Ishita "Kaisey hain mere princess .So rahen thee."

Ruhi "Main theek hun."

Ishita "Main kall raath ko aye thee tumhey dekhney.News mey aya thaa naa."

Ruhi looking Raman not there nearby on her sight."Ishima papa ney kuch nahen dikhaaya.Papa key saath mazaa nahe aaya.Aap saath hothe tho accha hotha."

Raman who was hiding beside listening gets shocked.

Ishita laughs as Ruhi is buttering her.Raman can't recogonize but Ishita will at sight itself.

Raman comes out "Jhootey.Kissney kahan kee papa Ishima ko math bathaon nahen tho humey daantegi .hum enjoy karney nahen deegi."

Ruhi "Aapney?Ishima mujhpey gussa nahen hogee."

Ruhi hugging Ishita.Hercules just got up then.

Raman "Kaisey hogee jab saarey galathiyan doosron key uupar daldogi tho."

Ishita "Raman rehney deejiyen naa.Suniyen who kyaa kehrahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima hum aur kuch din yahen rukhengey fir ghar jaayengey.Papa ney mujhey kuch nahen dikhaaya."

Ishita "Theek hain hum yahen rahengey.Papa ko jaan ahain tho jaaney doo,OK."

Ruhi sensing that with Ishita rules would be more and hece Raman is recquired "Ishima papa bhee.Papa ney bhee kuch aneh dekha naa.Papa ko bhee hummarey saath."

Raman was about to speak but Hercules interrupted .Ruhi took chance.

Ruhi "Ishima main hercy key saath bahaar jaon khelney."

She runs taking ball beside her pillow and went runningHercules followed giving final bark at Raman.

Raman "Gaddhar ."

Ishita "Kyaa Raman.Aap bhee bachee sey."

Raman "Main Ruhi ko nahen Hercules ko kehrahan hun.Hercule who kuttha ka naam hain."

Ishita "Ussney kyaa kiyan."

Raman "Itney din merey party mey thee,main ussey har din khaana khilaatha tha,exercise karwaath tha.Abh dekho party badal dee itney asaani sey tumhaarey party aagayen."

Ishita laughing at Raman.

Ishita "So sweet."

Raman then noticing Ruhi is down side playing with Hercules.

Raman "Who tho main hu hee.But romantic bhee kam nahen hun."giving a back hug and tracing his lips around her neck.

Ishita shyly "Raman chodiyen naa."

Raman "athaon tumney kyaa decide kiyan .Yahen rukhogee kuch aur din yaa ghar chaley."Kissing her on her cheek and rubbing her cheeks with his beard.

Ishita "Raman pehley aap shave tho keejiyen .Daari choob rahen hain."

Raman "Choobney do"

Ishita "Raman hum yahen rukhengey naa kuch aur din."

Raman "Theek hain.Your wish."

Ishita realizing what Vandita told now it is their trumpcard.But only for wives and lovers.


part 11


Scene starts with Ishita and Raman in same condition where they were in previous scene.

Ishita realizing something.

Ishita "Ayyo .Abh main kyaa karon."

Raman "Abh kya hogaya?"

Ishita "Main Ruhi ko dekhney itney zaldee mey aagayee.Mainey kuc plan hee nahen kiyya tha.Directly aagayee.Abh mainey mera koi bhe saaman nahen laaya.Merey kapadey hbhee nahen hain."

Raman "Merey saamney kyaa jaroori hain.Tum bolon tho yahen room book kardetha hum permanently."

Ishita "Besharam.Ussey accha naye kapadey khareed sakthey hain."

Raman "Han tumhaarey liyen kapadey kee than laaney mey mujhey interest nahen hain.Naheen naye dress khareedney mey"

Same time Ruhi comes back along with Hercules.This time it allowed them .

They break their pose seeing Ruhi.

Ruhi "Main jaanthe hun yahan kyaa ho rahan hain.Main chootey hun but main sab jaanthe hun."

Ishita "Ruhi kuch nahen.Ishima ney directly aye naa tho ussney kapadey nahen laayee abh kyaa karey."

Ruhi "Uffo itney see bath.Humney lee they naa." Showing her a bag.

Ishita checks it and finds few new clothes for her Ruhi selected on first day.

Ishita "Yeh sab kiskey liyen hain?"

Raman "Kajal key liyen."

Ishita "Raman seedhey bolo naa."

Ruhi "Ishima papa key bhee kapadey nahen they uss din naa.Tho humney shopping kee .Mainey aapkey liyen bhee dress select kee."

Ishita "My princess.Tumney khareedha tho thaa but kaisey deney kee plan kiyaa."

Ruhi "Papa Mumbai mey they naa ussney aapkey liyen laaya hain Mumbai sey.Yeh actual story hain.But abh nahen chalega naa.Buddhu papa aapkey liyen gift laana bhool jaathey hain issliyen main ney he select kiya"

Ishita laughing "So sweet."

Raman "Bhuddhu papa.Han bhuddhu jo hun itney din papa smart they abh bhuddhu ban gayen."

Ruhi hiding behind Ishita and then it is Hercules moment.It started barking at Raman.

Raman "Gaddhar tum fir shey shuru ho gayan."

It started licking his face again.

Raman "Dekho sab kuch karthey hain aur fir maskaa laga rahen hain.in donon maa beti key taraha.Sab kuch karthey hain baad mey maskaa lagaathey hain.Ek ullu jo mil gayan hun."

All are smiling at it as Raman stops Hercules and takes it outside for its regular exercise and training on Hundred safe ways to survive in his family museum."

Ishita "Ruhi hum yahen rukhengey kuch aur din ok."

Ruhi giving her all extra things she brought for Raman.She brought everything in excess when Raman is lost in her cuteness and observing her selection.

Ishita then noticing Ravan Kumar mobile.

Ishita "Yhe kyaa hain.Kisska mobile hain yeh?"

Ruhi "Ishima Ravan Kumar mobile hain yeh.Papa ney liyan tha mujhey aapsey baath karvaaney."

Ruhi "Ishima aap yeh rakhlo aapka phone very small hain naa." Giving her the new one.

Ruhi "Yhe bhee main ney select kiyaa.Kitnaa cute hain naa.Papa ko pasand nahen aaye."

Ishita "Ruhi phone pey koi design rakhthey hain kyaa."

Ruhi "Accha lagatha hain naa?"

Ishita "sabko nahen.But I will take it.Mere princess mujhey kitney gifts dey rahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima aap papa ko bathayiyen naa."

Ishita "Kyaa?"

Telling something in her ears.Ishita blushes listening this.

Ishita "Main bathaadoongi .Pehley tum ready hojaon."

Ishita then starts to her business.She keeps food for HERCULES in a bowl.It is inder new leadership.

Outside Raman is doing exercise with Hercules telling it his problems.It listens carefull and does his style of buttering.

Then Raman comes back and notices Ishita looking at his back as she just took bath and dressed up.

Hercules was eating but Raman goes and hugs Ishita from back and Ishita is happy to see Raman.

Ishita "Raman main ney bahe abhe nahaya hain.Aap passena math lagayiyen."

Raman "kyaa hoga.Dubaara nahaalena.Main madad bhee karoonga iss baar."

Ishita "Pahley aap apna khud kaa madad keejiyen.Yeh kyaa hain."

Showing his bag to him.

Ishita "Mujhey green pasand hain but Raman saarey kapadey green colour mey."

Raman "Tumhey kyaa lag rahan hain mujhey shauk hain isss karelon mey ghusney kaa.Tumhaarey beti ney khareeda hain.Sab ek jaisey hee hain.Karelea ka colour."

Ishita laughing "Raman abh aap jaakar ready hojayiyen.Selecting a pair of clothes for him."

Raman goes giving a final peck to her.


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part 12

Scene starts after Raman and Ishita packing their bags and Ruhi little bit sad .

Raman "Ruhi hum itney din yahen they naa.Abh gahr bhee tho jaana hain."

Ruhi was still silent.

Ishita "Ruhi papa ka birthday bhee aarahan hain.Ghar mey preperations humey hee karnaa hain naa.Tum ghar mey nahen rahogee tho papa ka birth day kaun manaaayega."

Ruhi "Han papa ka birthday.Han mujhey he decide karnaa hoga.Aap donon ko kuch nahen aatha.Mujhey hee sab kuch karnaa hoga.Ishima cake hum donon decide karengey.Theme abh nahen jab papa office mey hongey na thab bathaaongi."

She gets excited with the news her fathers birthday is coming.She is incharge now.

Raman "Ishita Ruhi decide karegi mera birthday kaisey manaana hain.Ishita pink not allowed and same is green."

Ruhi "Uffo papa main ney decide kiyaa.Aap kuch math boliyen."

Then they start preparation.Hotel staff were greeing them they have been their coustomers for almost a week and Ruhi almost met every staff there and formed friend ship with everyone.

Manager "Sir aap kahee waapas aayen tho yahen ayiye ga.Ruhi we will miss you."

Ruhi smiling happily.

Then Raman starts his car and they were on move and Ruhi was sitting back side along with Hercules.

Raman was driving fast as usual but it is not accepted by Ruhi.

Ishita "Raman dheerey chalaayiye naa itney teez kyon chalarahen hain."

Ruhi "Ishima aathey samay bhee teez chalaraha thaa."

Raman was shocked listening Ruhi's statement. And stops the car.

Raman "Tum mujhey batha rahen hon.Kissney merey aur scorpio key beech race rakha thaa.Tum bhool gayen kyaa tumhaarey wajaha sey humey agra bhee jaana pada."

Ishita din't knew about this and was shocked.

Ruhi "Ishima papa ney."

Hercules started same moment.

Raman knew he is outnumbered and restart driving.Many scenes continue with Ruhi framing Raman for everything which she did.

Then they reach the place where they halted second day.

Raman "Ishita hum temole chaltey hain.Mainey tumhaara naam trustee members mey likhwaaya hain.Donation diyen they."

Ishita felt happy as Raman does for her.

They reach temple and priest recogonizes Raman and offers his help and does pooja fon their name.

Raman was searching for Sunitha who is missing from the scenario.

Raman while going asks ."Panditjee Sunithajee kahan hain.Dikh nahen rahan hain."

Priest gets panicked listening her name. "Ramanjee aap nahen jaanthey aap jaaney key baad kya huan."

IshRaRu are shocked.

Priest tells them that old trustee got angry on her for replacing him and complained on him for misusing trust money and from then her life is in risk and she was hiding.They don't know where she is but she is not letting others to help her as the trustee is dangerous.

Priest "Sir aapkey jaan ko bhee khatara ho saktha hain."

Raman "Bhagawaan key naam pey bhee scam kar rahen hain?"

Ishita "Raman abh uss ladkee ka jaan khatarey mey hain humey kuch karnaa hoga."

Raman "Police kyaa kar rahen hain."

Priest "Sir police tho unkey chamchey hain."

Raman then decide first to save that girl and then take action by speaking to higher official he knew.

Raman keeps Hercules for the job as he had already met her.Hercules was able to find her near by store house hiding in terror.

Raman then secretly sends her out of town by a transport .But goons knew that Raman came and helped her so they were after him.

They were after them Raman and Hercules can handle few but they were out numbered by 1:15 ratio. So they escape in their car but they were chasing them.

It continued for few hours but on series of attacks they lost their way in a forest.They were left with no choice but running in forest .Raman was runningwith Ruhi in his arms and Ishita was also energy less with action sequence from afternoon.

They were hiding in bushes to avoid trail of goons.But they notice other couple.

They here goons saying they found the couple and they ran on that side.

Raman and Ishita were confused on whome they are after.

Raman "Who kisskey peechey hain.Who log undonon ko kuch karegey tho hummarey galathee hogi."

Ishita "Raman hum jayengey tho hum fasengey Raman.Hum kyaa Karen."

Raman "Par bewajah do log key jaan khatarey mey hain."

Raman decide to help them and Ishita was not ready to let Raman go alone.



part 13

Scene starts with Ishita and Raman going towards the direction of goons to help other couple who were messed by them.Raman was carrying Ruhi and Hercules was ready to strike on signal of Raman.

Then other couple were surrounded by goons around 25 in number.

The man was tall just reaching 6 and fit to his height and fare in colour.Lady was shorter than man but of good complex and was walking by a support of walking stick.

Goons "Ladkee kahan hain."

Man was silent but lady responded "Mujhey nahen patha aap kiskey baarey mey poochrahen hain.Hum ney kissey ko nahen dekha yahan."

Goons "Tumney uss ladkee ko bhaagney mey madad kee hain.Kahan hain who ladkee."

Man was about to speak but lady stops him "Ram tum chup rahon main handle karoongi."

Man sttod silent.All goons are shocked seeing courage of that lady.Even Ishra were shocked .

Goon "Tumsey chalney tho theek nahen hoga tum humey jawaab doogi."

Lady "Galathee kar rahen hon.Main tumhey bacha rahen thee.Humey iss mamley sey koi sambandh nahen hain.Fir bhee thum log hummarey peechey padey ho.Main abh thak samjha rahen hun.But tumney bahuth galath kiyya.Merey baarey mey baath kar kar."

Goon forwarding toward her "Kyaa karogi tum."

The man was not even moving as lady beside her took challenge and he just moved a step back.He was carrying a heavy bag which can fit a stock for week and a trecking equipment like tents.

Lady noticing Ram moving back gets angry but her trick is different.

"Theek hain main dikhadongi.But issmey usska koi lena dena nahen hain.Usskey pass math jaana."

Pointing towards Ram.

Raman was ready to signal Hercules waiting for opportunity.

Ram was laughing at lady now shaking his head.

Goons as we can guess went to Ram's side first.But Ram was quick enough to take a Katana from his bag and point it on goon's throat.

Lady took the chance and moved toward Raman and Ishita.

Lady "Tum loog theek hon."

Ishita "Hum theek hain.Tumhaara friend wahan."

Raman was signaling Hercules but lady stops.

Lady "Jaroori nahen hain Ram handle karlega."

Then they were moving toward the scene of action.

Ram was not striking any one with blade but neither any is able to touch him even armed.

Ram was hitting them with handle of his KATANA and side blade.His swiftness is to much for a match for them and his coolness on strike makes them offguard.They had no other option but to run.

Ram then comes back to the rest .

Ram "Wah mujhey fasaaya last mey."

Lady "chup rahin tumhey bolney dethee tho inlog fas jaathey."

Lady then forwarding her han to Ishita "I am Tanu,Tanmayi Mathur."

Ishita "Ishita ,yeh meri beti Ruhi."

Tanu "Kyaa huan .Who loog aapkey peechey kyon padey hain."

Ishita "lengthy story.But sorry hummarey wajaha sey aapko ."

Tanu "Koi problem nahen.Yeh sabh normal hain."

Ram was silent and Raman was looking at him as if he was trying to think who he might be.

Ishita signs Raman to forward his hand.

Raman forwards his hand and try to tell his namebut Ram cuts him.

Ram "RAMAN KUMAR BHALLA.Ceo of an MNC .Considerd youngest.Am I right."

All are shocked .

Tanu "Tum unhey jaanthey hon?"

Ram "Kabhee kabhee news padhiyen shaayad help ho saktha hain."

Then forwarding his hand to Raman "App mujhey Ram bula sakthey hain.I have read articles about you.I was in Mumbai when you were promoted as CEO."

Raman was not that shocked now but surprised at Ram's memory.All puzzles re gone now as Ram cleared confusion.
Tanmayi took Ruhi to her hands.

Ishita "We are sorry hummarey wajaha sey aapko problem huin."

Ram "Aap Tanmayi jee ko boliyen .But ussey mujhey sorry bolnee hain."

Tanu "Tumhey sharam aaney chahiyen kee tumney ladkee ko Akeley ladney diyan."

Raman and Ishita were shocked but to surprise Ram din't spoke anything instigating fight.

Ruhi "Aap log yahan kyon aayen hon."

Ram smiling at her and Tanu stopping him to speak.

Tanmayi "Hummaree gaadi ka break fail huan aur iss mahaan insaan ney gaadi ko jangal mey chalaaya raasth jaaney bhina .Aur hum yahan fass gayen."

Ram was silent he din't respond.

Ram then looking at his watch .

Ram "Raath honey waaley hain .Abh jaana safe nahen hain.Hum yaha tent banana hoga."

Then he starts preparing for it .Raman was thinking something looking at Ram.Tanu and Ishita were sitting over a log as Raman progresses to help Ram he stops him.


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part 14

Scene starts with Ruhi playing with Tanmayi and Ram making tent.Ishita looks at Raman thinking something and goes toward him.

Ishita "Raman kyaa soch rahen hain aap?Abh hum kuch waqt key liyen safe hain."

Raman "Han safe tho hain.But mujhey theek sey yaad aneh aarahan hain.But mainey Ram ko kahee dekha hain.Mumbai mey .I can even say usska naam Ram nahen hain."

Ishita "Raman kyaa aap bhee .Aap kuch jyaada soch rahen hain.Ladkaa kitna accha hain.Hummara madad kar rahan hain.Aap usspey shak kar rahen hain."

Raman "Shak nahen kar rahan hun.But just trying to recogonize him."

Then Tanmayi comes to them.

Tanu "Kyaa soch rahen hain aap.Koi problem hain?"

Ishita "Raman ko lag rahan hain kee ussney Ram ko dkha hain pehley but yaad nahen aarahan hain.Unko shak hain kee Ram usska naam he nahen hain."

Tanu was surprised but happy "Sach mey aapney Ram ko dekha hain pehley tho yaad keejiyen kahan aur kaisey.Yes Ram usska naam nahen hain."

Ishita was shocked and Raman hinting to her.

Ishita "Ram usska naam nahen hain tho ussney jhoot kyon bola."

Tanu "Jhoot bolney ka ilzaam aap kissey pey bhee laga saktey hain but Ram pey nahen.Ussney apney poorey zindegee mey jhoot nahen bola.Shaayad kabhee bolega bhee nahen.Man of mystery."

Tanu "Issliyen mainey ussey goondo sey baath karney rokha tha.Nahen tho patha naheen kya problem hothee.But bacha bhee letha hain.but kuch na kuch gadbad ho jaatha hain."

Ruhi just came there along with Hercules.

Ishita and Raman were shocked "Kabhee jhoot nahen bola tho Ram."

Tanu "Ussney kahan kee aap ussey Ram bula saktey hain yeh nahen kahan kee Ramn usska naam hain."

Ruhi din't understand the logic behind it.

Tanu "Ruhi uncle ney yeh bolkey sirf humey permission diyan Ram bulaaney key liyen .But actually humney assume karlee kee usska naam Ram hain.But nahen."

Ishita "Strange man."

Tanu "Stangest.I just knew him since two weeks.Mere chachu inspector hain hummarey town mey.Ram koi khoon ka gawahan hain.Ussko ghar nahen hain tho hummarey ghar key saamney ent banaaya.Theb sey jaanthe hun."

Raman "Ghar nahen hain?"

Tanu "Ram biker hain.Apney bike mey ghoomtha rehta hain.Do saal sey journey mey hain.Kissey ko nahen patha kahan jaa rahan hain aur kahan sey hain.But sabk dosth jaroor hain."

Tanu "Usskey baarey mey chodiyen aap bathayiye kee aap log yaha kaisey."

Ishita "Hum delhi sey hain.Kyaa huan kee Ruhi key school mey tour thaa usney jaaney ka jidd kee .Fir Raman ney ussey lekey gayaa tho late huan.Aur Raman ney Ruhi key liyen ussey khud lekar ayaa.Fir kuch drama huan Araku mey.Mujhey nahe n patha tha kee Raman Ruhi saath mey hain aur main jaldeee udhar gayee the."

Raman "Fir hum udhar miley.Aur waapas aa rahen hain tho .Who goondey lkiseey ladkee kp marney key liyen dhoondh rahen they.Humney ussey bhagney mey madad kee .But goondo hummarey peechey padey hain.Abh hum bhaagthey bhaagthey jungle mey guss gayen.Aur bakee aap jaanthey hain."

Ram comes same time ."Tent ready hain but sirf teen log andhar reh saktey hain."

Tanu "Ladies inside and gents out."

Taking Ruhi in her arms.Even Ishita accepts the same.

Then Ram checking his stocks for food.Then he takes few vessels and bags of rice out and trying to cook.

Ishita and Tanu go there even Raman.

Ishita "You are prepared.Aap hummesha khaana rakhtey hain kyaa aapkey pass."

Tanu "Kyaa hain naa.Isska ego bahuth jyaada hain kee kabhee doosro ka madad bhee nahen letha.Khudkey alaawa kissey ka khaana nahen chootha.Issliyen hummesha apnaa saaman rakhtha hian."

Ram "What ever.I can make dinner for now."

Tanu "Ram main tumhaara gandha khaana dkhee hun.But yahan ek bachee bhee hain usska pet kharaab math karo.Uss bachee key liyen tum aaj humey khaana banaaney do."

Ram thinks for little time and then "Paani waste math karnaa .I don't know where nearest water source is."

Tanu "Thank god abh main khaana khaa sakthee hun.Mujhey ghaas nahen khaan apadega."

Tanu "Ishita help me."

Ishita agrees and Raman and Ram leaves from there.Ruhi is along with Raman .

Ishita "Itnaa gandha pakaatha hain kyaa?"

Tanu "Horrible.Itnaa gandha tho main pehlee baar bhee nahen pakaaya hoga."

Ishita "funny."

Tanu "Not in action.But accepted akelaa hain aur diet maintain karnaa hain place key anusaar.Aapka husband kaisey ."

Ishita "Raman.Kabhee pakaaya nahen but khaney sey jyaada.Usska haath jalega pehley."

Ishita "But Ram is cool.Kabheee jhoot nahen bola."

Tanu "It is not at all cool.It is one of quality I hate in Ram.Life mey kabhe kabhe jhoot bolnaa padtha hain but kabhee jhoot nahen bolney sey jyaada problems ho sakthee hain.I mean aap he dekhiyen ussko path tha kee aap wahan chupey they who maximum nahen bolegaa aur chup rahega but kuch bolna padey tho jhoot n ahen bolega aur sach bolga tho problem.I don't know mainey kitney problems solve kee usskey sach kaa wrath ka.His self confidence is good.But it should not turn to over confidence that he takes everything on himself.But ussko kuch nahen hoga problem tho jho usskey saath hain ussko hoga."

Ishita was thinking of the facts in it and yes it is true even though it seems cool to never told a lie but problems lie over it.

This case Raman is best for her.Raman just lives to situation and will tell lies when recquired and avoids problems.She looks at Raman and smiles.



part 15

Scene starts with Raman and Ram sitting on a tree trunk and Ruhi playing before them with Hercules.

Raman "Ram if you don't mind .Tumney mujhey kabhee dekha hain kyaa?Ya Mainey tumhey?"

Ram "Mainey news mey dekha hain aapko mostly but han hum ek baaar samney ayen they.But I am not helping you to remember it."

Raman "Why?Han identity"

Ram smiles at it and then Raman who was trying to have a look at Ishita notice her smiling at him and he gives it back.

Raman "If you don't mind .Tum do saal sey journey mey hon.But why is this journey."

Ram "Main bhee yehee dhoond rahan hun.Why is my journey?Jawaab mil nahee rahan hain?"

Raman understood something but he din't say it.

Then ladies finish their arrangement for food and they call others for it.They have their dinner but Ram was not comfortable with it.

Ishita was making Ruhi eat by her own hands as they have to use minimum utensily they have.Raman was enjoying dinner but Ram was seeing Ruhi and Ishita's bond.

Raman notices this but he knew Ram's view is different.

Ram "Ramayi kyaa kar rahen hogee abh?" to Tanu. "I just hope no danger there."

Raman and Ishita were confused but Tanu.

Tanu "Han shaayad khel rahen hogee.Naheen tho tumhaarey saath khaaney kee aadath hain ussey."

Raman "Ramayi kaun hain?" even Ruhi was listening.

Tanu "Kahan naa Ram kissey case ka witness hain.Ramayi key family key khoon ka.Chey saal ke bache hain usskey poorey pariwaar ko mardiyan gayan hain.Ram time pey wahan naheen hotha tho shaayad uss bache ko bhee.Uss bache Ram key saath rakha gayan hain usskey security key liyen."

Raman "Police ."

Tanu "Pehley police ka protection diyan gaya thaa but Thakur bada aadmee hain influence kar saktha hain.Issliyen Ram key saath theek hain."

Tanu "Bees saal thak koi case nahen thaa usspar koi Gawain deney key liyen tayyar nahen thaa .Ram akela."

Raman "Ram tumhey darr nahe lagan"

Ram "Mauth sey kabhee nahen.Mauth sey mujhey darr nahen lagatha.Paidha heen mouth key saath huan hun."

Raman and Ishita din't understand.Neither does Tanu.

Ram "My birth took place along with an accident.chaar log margayen they mera judwaa bhee but main bach gayan meri maa bhee."

They felt pity for it.

Tanu "Tumhaarey papa bhee"

Ram was silent.

Raman "Tumhaarey maa ko miss kar rahen hogey."

Ram "Hummara darr he humey kamzor banaatha hain.Jab yeh dosron dekhengey usska himmath bhadega.I preferably never give chance."

Ram then noticing water is less finishes his dinner quickly.

Ram "Main paneee latha hun."

Raman was about to go to help him but Ishita and Tanu stops him.

Ram while going takes a gun from his bag and gives it to Tanu.

Ram "Jarrori ho tho use karnaa."

Ram leaves from there taking a big empty water bottle.

Raman "Akeley jaa rahan hain koi problem hoyegee tho."

Tanu "Do saal sey Akela hain naa jaaney usskey pehley kitney.He will take care of himself."

Raman "Darr tho humey lagega ussey tho usska fikar he nahen hain."

Tanu "Who kehtha hain kee mauth sey nahen dartha hain.But who tho jeeney sey darr rahan hain."

Tanu "Mauth sey who log darthey hain jissey jimmedaari ho apnon ka apney pariwaar ka.But jab ussey jeeney key wajaha hee nah on tho ussey mauth sey kyaa darr hoga.Who tho jeeney sey darr rahan hain issliyen darpok key taraha bhag rahan hain"

Raman "Tum Ram ko itnaa achey kaisey samajhsakthee hon?"

Tanu "I don't know.I never believed him hummesha shak karthee the.Teen din pehley tak."

Raman "Kyaa huan thaa?"

Tanu "Ussko har relation ka value patha hain,jeeney kee mayiney patha hain but hummesha dimaak sey sochta hain.He is just struck to rules and morals but main samajh gayee ."

Tanu "Who dil aur dimaak ko ek karkar sochtaa hain.Issliyen itney asaani sey koi galathee nahen karega."

Tanu "It is the reason anjaan hokar bhee main itney himmath sey usskey saath Akeley khada ho paa rahen hun."

Raman "Ghar mey pareshaan hongey naa."

Tanu "Bahuth .Actually mera engagement hain iss Sunday.Waheen jaa rahen they parowaar key saath .Raasthey mey yeh haatsa huan.Abh pareshaan tho hongey hee but Ram hain naaa usspar tho unkon vishwaas hain kee apnaa jaan bhee chaley mujhey doosron ko kuch nahen honey dega."

Raman "Bahuth waqt ho gayan hain who abh thak aayan kyon nahee."

Raman "Main jaakar dekhtha hun."

Ishita stops him by holding his hand.

Raman "Ishita main Ram nahen hun.I value my life mujhey patha hain main kyon jee rahan hun.Mujhey kuch nahen hoga."kissing her hand.


part 16

Scene starts with Raman going in search of Ram along with Hercules.Ishita,Ruhi and Tanmayi are sitting near bonfire.Tanmayi was holding the gun Ram gave her.

Ishita "Tumhaarey engagement hain iss Sunday tho tumhey tension nahee ho rahen hain kee koi problem hogee."

Tanu "Hogee tho kyaa hoga.Engagement cancel hoojaayega.Bass right honey do.Main apney pariwaar key liyen kar rahen hun yeh shaadi."

Ruhi sleeping in Ishita's lap smiles listening similar words.

Ishita "Main bhee tehen kehthey thee yeh shaadi isrf Ruhi key liyen hain.Fir kabh badal gyan patha hee nahen chala."

Tanu "I din't understand."

Ishita "Ruhi ko mainey janam naheen diyan hain but infact mera kabhee bachey nahen ho sakthey hain.Fir merey zindagee mey Ruhi ayen padosi hain.We got so much into each other.Uss samay I don't know Raman who pariwaar sey door Mumbai mey thaa I never heard any thing positive about him then."

Ishita "Raman kee pehley wife ney Raman sey Ruhi door karney kee koshish kee.Ruhi ney merey saath rehney decide kiyan.Fir merey papa ney decide kiyan kee main Raman sey shaadi karoongi tho Raman ko custody and mujhey ek beti milegee.Sirf Ruhi key liyen samjhoutha suru huan thaa."

Ishita smiling "But now Raman is my life main kabhee nahen socha tha kee my life would be completed.Ruhi,Raman and my family.Rishtey chaahey naam key liyen baney hon but usska mainey insaan nahen tain kartha.Bhagawaan ney banaaya hotha hain."

Tanu "Har baar yehi honey kee jaroori nahe hain.But when marriage is made of unequities it can't stand long."

Tanu "I never could adjust in institute of marriage.I never want some one else to judge what I have to do and what I can't.But yaheen hotha hain jab insaan rishton mey dil key jagaha dimak ka istamaal kartha hain."

Tanu then tells her that almost twenty alliances were broken for various reasons like less dowry,her physical inability to walk properly and her leading nature to be first on action.

Ishita "But sab log aisey nahen hothey.Their will be a person meant to be for you only for you .Yo try to avoid him as much you can but you would be destine to be with him.Then you will understand the meaning of institute of marriage.I understood it after Raman"

Tanu "Destiny is never my word.Ishita aapkey saath yeh huan but sabkey saath honey kee jaroori nahen hain."

Ishita "Leave it .Yeh Bathaon Ram key baarey mey kyaa kehnaa hain iss baath mey."

Tanu "I never spoke to him about it.But ussney pehley hee ussey bachaya thaa ghar mey jab kadkey waaley ayen they tho koi apshagun honey waaley thee but Ram ney taaldiya ussey.But strange he don't believe on god."

Ishita "Not surprised."

Tanu "You will be .But har religion key baarey mey bhagawaan key baarey mey har riwaaz ko jaantha hain.He read all book over our epics.Even what he follows their morals."

Ishita "What?Har cheez key baarey mey jantha hain but vishwaas nahen kartha."

Then same time Raman and Ram are coming with a big water bottler.

Ishita "Raman kyaa huan itnaa late huan."

Raman "Dorr tha aur,Ram wahan kuch dekh rahan tha."

Ram "Ek pakshi niche gir gaye they apney nest sey tho waapas rakh rahan thaa."

All give him some look.Ruhi gets up same time.

Ruhi "Chootey see they?"

Ram "Bahuth chootey.Wings bhee nahen they shaayad?."

Ruhi "But birds have wings ."

Ishita "Aisa naheen Ruhi.Jab bahuth chotey hothe hain to wings weak hothey hain."

Ruhi "Uncle fir aapney kyaa kiyan."

Ram "Mainey baby ko uthaaya aur slowly nest mey rakh diya."

Ruhi "Babies kaisey aathey hain."

Ram "Sorry Ruhi main jhoot nahen boltha aur sach tumhey batha naheen saktha tum unsey poochlo." Pointing toward others.

All are shocked now he booked them in no where.

Ruhi "Tho who loog jhoot bolengey?" annoyed.

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part 17

Scene starts with where it stopped in last part.

Ruhi "Who loog jhoot bolengey mujhsey?"

Ishra and Tanu are shocked and puzzled as Ram booked them in a situation like this.

Tanu "Nahen beta uncle ko answer nahen patha hain.Issliyen nahen batharahan hain aur jhoot nahen bol rahan hain aur hum yeh kaisey bolega kee ussko nahen patha hain."

Ishita and Raman were able to breath now as Tanu cleared little of the thing.

Ruhi "Tho babies kaisey ayengey."

Ishita "Mainey tumhey pailey hee bola thaa naa god babies ko bhejthey hain aur papa ney bhee bathaaya thaa aapko."

Ruhi "Han main bhool gaye they sorry."

Ruhi turning to Ram. "Uncle aapko nahen patha hain naa tho main aapko bathaongi." Tanu was ready to do something.

Ram kept a weird face over it. "Uncle bhagawaan naa pehley babies ko create kartha hain aur fir babies key parents ko decide kartha hain fir baby ko mummies key goodh mey magic sey daaaldetha hain aur birthday pey baby bahaar ajaathee hain.so interesting naa."

Ram who does'nt believe on god "Pehley bhagawaan hotha hain..."was stopped by Tanu before he could say kyaa.

Tanu "Han uncle samajh gayan isslieyn repeat kar rahan hain.kee pehley bhagawaan hotha hain babies ko create karkey parents decide karkey mummies ko magic sey bhejdethaa hain."

Tanu "I am correct naa?"

Ruhi "Han you are right."

Ishra and Tanu take a free breath as problem solved and bank is closed and Ram is looking puzzled over this.

Then they speak for few more minutes (Ishra and Tanu Ram wont count) and finally goes to sleep.

Ishita,Tanu and Ruhi in tent in arrangement of bed made by sheets from ram.

Raman outside near bonfire slept with support of a tree but Ram was not sleeping and gazing at the fire more intensely.Tanu notices this but don't speak anything.

Then in morning before sunset Ram was doing yoga and practicing with his katana.Raman and others woke up by this sounds of heavy footing.

Tanu "Ram humey soney do naa.Ek din tho break do usko."

Ram din't stop.Raman was looking him strangely.Ishita "Kyaa rooj kartha hain."

Tanu "Han."

Then Tanu accidentally was about to fall over the fire but Ram pushes her opposite side but not before stepping on fire burning his own leg .

All gets panicked.But Ram took it lightly.

Ram "Chota sa hain just a primary burn will be ok with burnol." Taking it from first aid box in his bag.

Tanu "Kissney kahan madad karney meri .I could help myself.I don't need your help."

Ishita and Raman are shocked at this as Ram saved her and instead she is scolding him for helping but this one don't have any concern.neither guilt.

Ram was silent as usual with his smile on face.Then they pack the tent and were about to leave in search of road.Ram was comapitively less active as his leg has injury and pain is there and his stubbornness of not taking help is also costing as he is carrying the bag himself.Which almost weight 50kg.

Ruhi was in Raman's arms and Tanu and Ishita were walking in middle and Ram in front and rear Raman with Hercules.

Then they see a group of twenty people approaching them few are dressed police.

Then one of them speaks .

"Hum Raman Bhalla key liyen aayen hain.Sunitha jee ney complaint kiyan hain aur aakey help karney ayen hain."

"Sir humney goondon ko pakad liyan hain.Aap abh safe hain hummarey saath aasakthey hain ."

All felt happy but Ram was taking steps backward slowly.


part 18


Raman was about to go forward but Ram takes his gun out alerting the guests and one of them takes out his gun.Then points toward Ram.

Ram smiles stops Raman. "Raman rukho aur peechey haton."

All are shocked.

Raman "Kyaa huan Ram.Koi problem hain?"

Ram "Merey experience key hissab sey who loog jhoot bol rahen hain aur who police naheen hain."

All are shocked.

Then person speaks "Tumhey saabith karney kee jaroori nahen hain mujhey.I am just here on my duty."

Raman "Ram tum yeh kaisey keh saktey hon."

Ram "Unkey baathey ek side oriented hain aur word timing unbalanced hain.Unkey aakhey yeh dekh rahen hain kee hum believe kar rahen hain yaa nahe but not us."

Ram "Jiss angle mey who gun pakada hain issey yeh keh saktey hain kee yeh gun usskey liyen nayee hain."

Ram "Two and half kg pistol koi police hotha tho asaani sey ek haath sey pakad letha bhina hath hichayen.But isskey haath key liyen gun weight jyaada hain .Police nahen ho saktha .Main khudh chaar ghantey bhina hilaayen pakad saktha hut tho police ."

Others understood Ram was right and get alert.

Ram was infront ready to face them but with an injured leg it would be a challenge.

Person "Gun tho nayen hain but .Maarna merey liyen naya naheen hain.Chaar log hon kissey ko patha bhee nahen chalega.Tum apney langdey pair sey ladogey kyaa?"

All gets panicked as they were outnumbered but Ram's face has smile unvavoured .

Ram "Stupidity.Tumhey yeh dikh rahan hain kee main yahan akela khada hun yeh bhee dikh rahan hain kee tum log jyaada hen hon.But main abhee bhe tumhaarey saamney khada hun ladney key liyen tho koi tho baath hogee mujhmey jissey main tumsabh sey ladney tayyar hun yeh naheen socha tumney?."

This words make them think on what might be Ram's strategy.

Ram "I don't know tum log kabh sey talwaar pakadey hon main tho picley pandraha saal sey talwaar chala rahan hun.Dass umar mey sey martial arts practice kar rahan hun.Main bhina hatyaar hee aath logon ko jawaab dey saktha hun.Abh tum soch hatyaar sey kitney logon ko?"

Ram "Tum bees loog hon tumhaarey ghar mey koi tumhaara intazaar kar rahan hoga .tum loog tho paisey key liyen lad rahen hon.But main challenge key liyen ladtha hun.Mera ghar nahen hain naheen mera mauth sey kkissey ko faraq .THo main kiss hadh thak lad saktha hun soch yaar."

This words brought fear in opponents mind,it is Ram's strategy to weak opponent mentally by his confidence and make them think they were striking but they would be doing what Ram is expecting them to do.

Ram taking his gun in his hand and shots a stone near by."Mera nishaan itney kam door mey kabhee nahen chookega aur aap sabh merey range mey hee hon."

Ram "Tum log key pass abhee bhee himmat ho tho .Yhe dekho jo main dekh rahan hun."

Ram "Tum yeh sabh sunney key baad bhee mujhsey ladney aongey.Darthey huen pehlaa aadee ayega naheen usska taakt itnaa hoga naheen dimaak.Jab thak usska talwaar uthega mera usska gardhan key saamney hoga."

Then he tells the pattern in similar way on how each person is going to come and how he is going to hit them.

But according to human psychology they do tha same and Ram finishes them in same way he told.Shocking others.

Then final one with gun tries to shoot Ram.But Ram goes and grabs it from his hand.

Ram "Bewakoof pehley lock tho kholon goliu chalaaney sey pehley.Seedha mujhsey ladneey aagayan."

Then no one is in condition to run nor move but just alive.

Ram the signs others lets move.

Raman "Ram tumhey kaisey patha thaa kee who log wohi order mey attack karengey."

Ram "Mujhey naheen patha thaa.But baath alag hain."

Ram "Insaan ka ek kamjoor aadath hain .Jho na karney key liyen bolo wohi karega.Isslieyn mainey apney hissab sey bola aur bewakoof aisey hee aa rahen they maar khaaney."

Raman "Mathlab tum itney logon sey lad nahen paathey kyaa?"

Ram "I can and can't.When I will be able to manipulate their moves I can when I cam't I will try till end but kabhee check nahen kiyya itney log kabhee ayen naheen they."

Tanu "Uss gun lock.Funny."

Raman "Ram you are a genious .Pehley unkon darraya jab tumhey khud darna hain.Then unkey darr ka istamaal karkey unkey moves manipulate karkey tumhaarey favour mey banadiyan aur ."

Tanu "Ram who log influence nahen huen hothey tho?Tumhaara baath jhoot ho saktha hain naa."

Ram "Not exactly.Mainey unlogon ko dekhney key liyen kaha imagin karney.Main yeh nahen bola kee yaehn honey waala hain but aisa nahen huan hotha tho shaayad situation alag hokey shaayad main zindaa bhee naa hotha."

All are shocked by Ram's statement.The situation in which his statement is turning wrong would simultaneously be taking his life.Such is his determination on truth.

Then they reach the place where Raman's car was there and Ram repairs with help of Raman and they leave in way of town.Ishraru drops Ramayi in near by town anf follow their way through.



part 19

Scene starts with IshRaru in car they were tired of previous day's adventure but they have to travel to their place.

Ishita "Raman aapney ram ko koi job offer kyon naheen diya ?"

Raman "Who kam kar naheen paayega.You don't understand leave it."

Then Ishita will get a call from Mihika same time.Raman continues driving while Ishita speaks on phone.

Mihika "Akka kaha hon aap log abh thak ghar naheen pahunchey.Koi problem hain kyaa?"

Ishita "Problem thaa.Solve ho gayan hain."

Mihika "Abh kab aaogey aap log .Akka aapko yaad hain naa jeeju ka birthday hain."

Ishita "Main bhooloungi kyaa?Mujhey yaad hain aur sab kuch plan key hissab sey hoga.Don't worry."

Mihika "Abh aap log kahan hon?"

Ishita "Agra key pass.Ruhi ko Agra jaana hain fir sey issliyen hum yehi rukhengey aaj.Kall pahunchjayengey.Theek hain"

Then she cuts the call.

Raman "Kyaa baath ho rahen hain wahan.Koi plan key baarey mey."

Ishita "Chodiyen naa Raman."

Then they reach agra and they decided to stay in hotel,

Raman books a 2 bedroom suit.Then when they were going to their room they were shocked to see Shagun and Adi there.Ishita and Ruhi were behind and Hercules in front.

Raman continues in his way greeting Adi .Adi greets him in reply.Adi feels happy to see Raman atleast now he is in talking terms .

Adi "Aap yahan rukh rahen hain."

Raman "Han.Koi kaam hain."

Adi "Aap merey saath aa sakthey hain.I swear I wont do anything mischief."

Adi wanted to play games there but he is not allowed single and Shagun is too dumb to play games.

Raman "Theek hain hum chaltey hain."

He gives daar key card to Ishita and leaves Ruhi stays with Ishita.

The moment Raman was out of sight Hercules started barking at Shagun.Shagun was annoyed at this.

Shagun "Issey chup hooney key lieyn kahon.Kahan sey laaya yeh paagal kuttha."

Ruhi was enjoying the scenario of pissed off Shagun.

Ishita "Hercules silence stop barking."But it din't and will never.

Ruhi "Shagun mama.Aapko pehley bathaana thaa .Papa hothey btho handle karthey.Yeh sirf unkey baath sunthee hain."

Shagun "Kyaa.?"

Ruhi "Issey papa ney training dee hain sabsey kaisey behave karney kee.Who sifrf papa kaa baath suntha hain but who bhee reverse kartha hain.Sirf papa handle karsakthey hain issey."

Ruhi and Ishita smiling.

Shagun "I wil get back to you Ishita.I will never forget this insult."

Shagun leaves from there in hurry as Hercules is staring at her.

Ruhi then tells "Shagun mama bhaag gayen."patting Hercules.

Ruhi "Well done Hercules.Ishima papa bhee itney fast Shagun mama ko nahen bhagaa saktha hain naa."

Ishita smiling "chalo room chaltey hain."

They go to their room and they freshen up there.

On other side Raman and Adi were enjoying there time blaying Snooker and Bowling and Adi was happy and Raman too as he got time to spend time with Adi .

Adi "Dinner time hogayan hain.Main chaltha hun.Thankyou."

Raman "Hummarey saath khaon.Fir mauka nahen milega.Ruhi ko bhee apney bhai sey milna hain."

Then Raman takes Adi to his room and there Adi and Ruhi enjoy there time and Hercules was behaving well with Adi.Then Raman gets's freshen up .

Both Raman and Ishita looking Ruhi and Adi happily playing feels happy.

Adi "Hum chaley."

Then they have dinner and Adi was in lead this time even Ruhi was with hin they orderd food and Ruhi ordered for her Ishima and Adi for Raman and himself.

Shagun watches this and feels jealous .Then she decides to give it back to Ishita proving she don't know Raman.



end

Scene starts next day with Ishraru going to visit taj mahala .

Shagun follows them along with Adi to distract Raman .

Raman noticed Adi but decided to spend time with Ruhi over that to go to Adi and disturb the vacation.

Then they go to a nearby water world as Ruhi sees this on return journey.Adi and Shagun follows there too.

Ruhi was princess there what ever she wishes is happening from break fast to lunch.Adi and Shagun looking at them .Shagun is jealous that they are enjoying their life and no one is giving a damn to her.Adi imagines himself along with Raman and Ruhi there.Ruhi brought her self Raman to participate in everything she is doing starting from teaching swimming.

He also wants to enjoy there but Shagun is not participating telling the reason her beauty reason.

Pissed Adi finally excuses him self and joins Raman.

Then they reach hotel in night.

Then after dinner Ishita plans next with out any delay they have to reach home as there is celebration on Raman's birthday and everyone is missing them there.

On other side Shagun plans to wish Raman first on his birthday around midnight and gets ready for it.Not knowing that Ishita will be with Raman but not Ruhi.

Shagun as planned goes around midnight to Raman's suit .

But Ishita opens it after a delay.Ishita tries to stop her as Raman is tired and sleeping with late love.

Shagun understood it and leaves from there realizing Raman is out of her.



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Awesome Bhai...have read upto part 6...will read more later...

like how RuMan are getting up to so much fun...and its funny to see ishita worrying. ...I am awful aren't I!

Now I know who hercules is...more masti for ruhi with him...cute!

Thanks for reposting this all in one go...

be back later. ..
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Awesome Bhai...upto part 12 now.
Love how Raman as talking to Hercules...hilarious convo!
IshRa have finally stepped over the border n are now officially husband n wife 😃 😳

And now it's a IshRaRu adventure...yay!

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