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My first ever attempt at a fan fiction...inspired by the domain gang...@Sakiv-Ram (Vikas Bhai) & @Kuls_n (Miss K) to write an OS and to participate in a writing challenge...not sure I am thinking straight but hey?!
I am not really a writer...I love reading and have read so many wonderful pieces of work on this forum...but after chatting with Vikas Bhai and Miss K I got bitten by the writing bug and had to pen something down...
So here is my first ever OS on any show EVER...hope it's ok, let me know you comments...good or bad...it is the way to learn after all...but be gentle and kind...
I have learnt to understand Hindi from watching many movies and serials, I have used a mix of Hindi and English dialogues, please forgive any errors or mistakes. Please let me know what they are so I can improve my work. Thanks a bunch ;)
Dedicated to Bhai and Miss K...thank you guys!
'Papa's brave girl...RuMan :)'
The scene continues from when Raman talks to Shagun outside by the car...from yesterday's episode (24.3.15)...Raman explaining to Ruhi why Ishita chose Adi over her...
Raman - "let's see how you look after my daughter without my financial help"
Shagun is shocked and speechless. She goes to get in her car but Raman stops her by pushing the door shut.
Raman - "I want to talk to my daughter right now. I have every right to talk with her when I want, she is my daughter too. The court gave you custody, they did not ban me from seeing or talking to her."
Shagun - "fine but you only have 5 minutes"
Raman opens the passenger door and sees Ruhi hugging her teddy tight and sobbing. His heart breaks on seeing this sight.
He slips inside the car and sits, hugs her tight. Ruhi looks up.
Ruhi - "papa app?"
Raman - "huh Ruhi, papa couldn't let you go without his goodnight kiss"
Ruhi looks away
Raman - "meri Ruhi mujse narraz hai? App baat nahiin karogi mujse?"
Ruhi - "nahin karongi, main sabse khatti hoon"
Raman - "ok beta, app baat nahin karongi paar sun sakti meri baat please..?"
Ruhi looks up at her papa and sees his sad eyes full of tears. She hugs her teddy tight, she has missed her papa so much. He is her favourite person after all.
Ruhi - "ok papa, me and teddy are listening..app bolo.."
Raman wipes his tears and holds Ruhi's hands in his.
Raman - "Ruhi tum jaante ho ki sab tumko kitne pyaar karte hain? Hum sab tum se bina jee nahi paati. You will be asking then why did you leave me with Shagun mumma...you are thinking it's because we love Adi bhaiya more than you..."
Ruhi nods her head whilst tears are streaming down her face, Raman wipes her tears.
Raman - "we left you with Shagun mumma because Adi bhaiya feels he is unwanted by all of us and that if he wasn't alive everyone would be happy."
Ruhi gasps
Ruhi - "Adi bhaiya ne aisa socha?"
Raman - "huh beta, Adi bhaiya ko lakta hain hum sab tumhe pyaar karte hoon or usko nahin."
Ruhi - "isiliye Ishimaa ne Adi bhaiya ko apko saat rakha or mujhe Shagun mumma ke paas?"
Raman - "huh, maine Ishimaa ko kehdiya ko meri samaj nahin araha hain ke mein kiya karoon...main kaise meri donon baache main sirf ek ko chun sakti hoon...tum dono meri zindagi ho, meri sab kuch..."
Raman couldn't talk anymore and started to sob. Ruhi reached out and hugged her papa.
Ruhi - "it's okay papa, ab main sumaj gaya yeh sab kisliye hua. Ishimaa mujpe itna vishwas hain. She knows I am a strong and brave girl and can deal with Shagun mumma. Don't worry, ab main apse narraz nahin hoon. Paar mein Shagun mumma ko nahin pata hone dungi." She winked and gave a huge smile, wiped away Ramans tears and kissed his cheek.
There was a knock on the window and Shagun shouted..."your five minutes is up, now leave!"
Raman gave Ruhi his phone.
Raman - "keep this, so you can talk us when you want. Call your Ishimaa when you get back.Remember to keep it hidden from Shagun."
Raman - "ok Shagun I am coming!"
He opens the door and climbs out. Ruhi hides the phone under her dress.
Raman - "I love you beta, I know you are angry but be a good girl for Shagun mumma and I will see you very soon"
Ruhi doesn't look at Raman just hugs her teddy
Shagun - "she is not interested in talking to you so why waste your time?"
Raman - "I will not let you spoil my daughters life, you wait and watch my daughter will be back with me and her Ishimaa very soon."
Shagun - "you can try but I don't think she will want to come back. Anyway I have wasted enough time here, I am leaving!"
Raman - "just take care of Ruhi and keep away from this house"
Shagun slams the door and drives off.
Raman looks at her brave daughter going off with Shagun but is now feeling at peace as he knows Ruhi will make Shagun's life hell. He smiles and rushes back to tell Ishita the good news.
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