#2 | IshRa: Meherbaan FF | Thread 3; page 79 - Page 37

Originally posted by: divinecakes

Loved it! Can't wait for the next updates!!

Originally posted by: nigar1010

Kiara superbb...its all about ISHITA..read both chapters..loved it..i have no words to praise u..the way u described Ishita's emotions nd feelings... 👏 brilliantly written..she gave it back to subbu's mother...amazing update..Thankss for updating two chapters back to back..aese hi update karte rehna.. 😛

Originally posted by: dsgirl

Kiara...just read the last two updates finally...and as usual truly loved it..I love d way u express emotions...and i loved how ishita answered subbu's mom..a much required answer from her side...
And well rather than u thanking us, we should thank u for giving us such a story...trust me when I say that...
If u ever plan to write a novel let me know..I'll get it copyrighted...lawyer hone ka kuch fayda to hoga ;) just kidding but ur an awesome writer 🤗

Originally posted by: MarriedLove

Love all your updates...

Originally posted by: dsgirl

OK..are u kidding me kiara...did u just dedicate the chapter to me..that's like the nicest thing anyone has done...thankkk u so much... 🤗
Coming back to the chapter..it was the most cutest chapter I've read...I love ur version of raman and ishita..playful and fun to be around each other...they don't know where they are headed but atleast they are not faking it...and vishwa realising ishita has really found her prince charming...that's so sweet...it was just amazing...


P.s hope ur crash course ur dng helps...good luck for it :)

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

beautiful update yaar...
loved it...

Originally posted by: divinecakes

Such a sweet "awww" update!!

Originally posted by: Vsoujanya

I LOVE how to show the relationship all the Bhalla-Iyer relationship. The love between Ruhi and Shravan, the love between Shravan and Raman. It such a pleasure to read your work! A SWEET ESCAPE from the show! 👏

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Reees!


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I kinda felt like trolling you and just leaving this RESd for a while... but then ..no you don't deserve that! I lub you too much. Thanks for the Eng translation o the song lyrics,... beautiful. And the description between Ishu & Viswa too...every girl deserves a big brother-ish relationship like that, neither of us have it so it's nice to read about the idyllic kind of what might have been...

The prince charming, I like that, you had to have known I would... yes it's utter fairytale nonsense, but the innocence behind it is a thing of beauty and I'm glad that she had that too , at some point... and now she has him for real, as flawed as he is- well you never can expect the real prince to be as perfect as the fairytale one right? Thy are too boring anyway.😉



And it's wonderful her family recognized it too... and Nalini, again I feel sorry for Nalini. Poor girl, I understand her in a way and want better for her, again, as long as she doesn't mess with ISHRA! Her comparison between Ru & Abhilan is quite interesting and you know how I feel about my baby Ru & Sharavu... but admittedly, my fave scene was between Sharavu & his Chithappah... love those too and their interaction so so much!😛

Th symbolism of the vermilion and the peck... the longing in them both... beautiful , absolutely beautiful. And the last few lines... *sigh* and you say you can't write romance! Wonderfully written as always, the tone of this is so dreamy... love it darling!XX



PS: You actually used a song which has a Tamil version too...YAY! [Hossana- please tell me you were aware of that...] so I used the Tamil version as background music!

Originally posted by: MarriedLove

Love all your updates...