You've left me in awe with these last few updates Nisha...sorry I didn't give an individual review for each one but what to do when real life intrudes.
Whatever expectations I have before I read the chapter are generally surpassed by the time I get to the end...you are raising the bar higher for yourself with each and every update, which is a truly commendable feat considering that you've written 200+ parts already. That quality of your writing is only improving and I think that's really the biggest/only compliment I can give you because any other words would fall short to describe your brilliancy.
The characters that you have woven and the way you are exploring deeper into them...truly commendable. Here, on their honeymoon, you've made sure to put in playful childishness along with passionate romance interspersed with sincere care from both of their ends. I think just a few days of marriage have done wonders for the couple and allowed the relationship to move a few steps further in terms of the understanding that these two individuals have for each other. They have a really long, winding, rocky path ahead for them but I don't think either of them will forget these initial days of the marriage. From a food fight that led into the bedroom to a shaving foam tussle that led to more bedroom moments. And then of course how can we forget him cooking pasta and chocolate cake for her, or her making aloo tikki for him. 😊 What more can you want from your honeymoon except for it to be memorable? And memorable this trip definitely will be...plenty of romance, sightseeing, and a touch of unexpected adventure and thrill. 😉
It was great to see the sliver of raw emotion from R&B upon finding her luggage and clothes still in the wardrobe. That says a lot about him...he's never been more invested in anyone else because I think you can only have the fear of losing someone if you really truly can't imagine your life without them. He's not the most expressive when it comes to showing how serious he is about his wife, but his subtle actions speak a whole lot more than II's 2 page long post-it notes (but that's just who she is so I understand). 😛
As for II, I truly feel for her right now. I know how overwhelming and downright scary it can be to get lost in a foreign land where you don't know the language. It happened to me once during a school trip where I got separated from the rest of my group and I seriously can't explain the flood of emotions I felt when I finally saw someone I recognized. I'm so looking forward to where you take it from here...the relief they both will feel upon finding each other again and then the following "punishments" that R&B will dole out to wifey as she attempts to explain herself. I know it will be a treat to read. 😊
Edited by nividances - 10 years ago
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